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            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.12688/f1000research.55189.3</article-id>
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                    <subject>Case Report</subject>
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                <article-title>Case Report: Recurrent retinal vein occlusion as the first clinical manifestation of systemic lupus erythematosus in a male patient</article-title>
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                        <p>[version 3; peer review: 1 approved, 1 approved with reservations]</p>
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                    <name>
                        <surname>Ben Brahim</surname>
                        <given-names>Marwa</given-names>
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                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0003-1967-0824</uri>
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                    <name>
                        <surname>Arfa</surname>
                        <given-names>Sondes</given-names>
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                    <name>
                        <surname>Boubaker</surname>
                        <given-names>Fadia</given-names>
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                    <name>
                        <surname>Chelly</surname>
                        <given-names>Jihen</given-names>
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                    <name>
                        <surname>Ammari</surname>
                        <given-names>Wafa</given-names>
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                    <name>
                        <surname>Hammami</surname>
                        <given-names>Sonia</given-names>
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                    <name>
                        <surname>Arbi</surname>
                        <given-names>Fatma</given-names>
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                        <surname>Berriche</surname>
                        <given-names>Olfa</given-names>
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                <aff id="a1">
                    <label>1</label>Department of Internal Medicine and Endocrinology, Taher Sfar University Hospital, University of Monastir, Mahdia, 5100, Tunisia</aff>
                <aff id="a2">
                    <label>2</label>Department of Ophthalmology, Taher Sfar University Hospital, University of Monastir, Mahdia, 5100, Tunisia</aff>
                <aff id="a3">
                    <label>3</label>Department of Internal Medicine and Endocrinology, Fattouma Bourguiba University Hospital, University of Monastir, Monastir, 5000, Tunisia</aff>
                <aff id="a4">
                    <label>4</label>Biochemistry Laboratory,LR12ES05 LR-NAFS Nutrition-Functional Food and Vascular Health, Faculty of Medicine, University of Monastir, Monastir, 5000, Tunisia</aff>
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            <author-notes>
                <corresp id="c1">
                    <label>a</label>
                    <email xlink:href="mailto:benbrahim.marwa24@gmail.com">benbrahim.marwa24@gmail.com</email>
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                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                </fn>
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            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>10</day>
                <month>1</month>
                <year>2022</year>
            </pub-date>
            <pub-date pub-type="collection">
                <year>2021</year>
            </pub-date>
            <volume>10</volume>
            <elocation-id>761</elocation-id>
            <history>
                <date date-type="accepted">
                    <day>7</day>
                    <month>1</month>
                    <year>2022</year>
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                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2022 Ben Brahim M et al.</copyright-statement>
                <copyright-year>2022</copyright-year>
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            <abstract>
                <p>Systemic lupus erythematosus (SLE) is a chronic, autoimmune disease characterized by widespread clinical manifestations and immunological disorders. A myriad of ocular manifestations can be seen in patients with SLE. The most vision-threatening complication is vaso-occlusive retinopathy including retinal vein occlusion (RVO). RVO associated with SLE is well described in the literature and its association with antiphospholipid antibodies is recognized. However, RVO as the initial manifestation of SLE is scarcely reported.</p>
                <p> Herein, we report the first case of recurrent RVO as the primary manifestation of SLE in a 40-year-old male patient. He had two consecutive episodes of decreased vision. Ophthalmologic examination disclosed a branch retinal vein occlusion the first time and a central retinal vein occlusion the second time. The diagnosis of SLE was established based on clinical and immunological criteria. He was prescribed antiplatelet therapy, hydroxychloroquine at 5.5 mg/kg/day, and intravitreal anti-vascular endothelial growth factor (VEGF) antibodies regimen. He slowly improved under treatment.</p>
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                <kwd>Retinal vein occlusion</kwd>
                <kwd>Systemic Lupus Erythematosus</kwd>
                <kwd>Male patient</kwd>
                <kwd>Intra-vitreal anti-vascular endothelial growth factor antibodies treatment</kwd>
                <kwd>case report</kwd>
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                <funding-statement>The author(s) declared that no grants were involved in supporting this work.</funding-statement>
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        <notes>
            <sec sec-type="version-changes">
                <label>Revised</label>
                <title>Amendments from Version 2</title>
                <p>I have replaced the word "primary" by revealing in the discussion section. I have discussed the significance of the positivity of anti-CCP antibodies in this observation.</p>
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        <sec id="sec1" sec-type="intro">
            <title>Introduction</title>
            <p>Retinal vein occlusion (RVO) is a common retinal vascular disorder that, if left untreated, can lead to vision loss.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref1">1</xref>
                </sup> Classic risk factors are hypertension, hyperlipidemia and diabetes mellitus.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref2">2</xref>
                </sup> Systemic and inflammatory diseases such as systemic lupus erythematosus (SLE) and antiphospholipid syndrome were found to be associated with the development of RVO.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref2">2</xref>
                </sup> RVO associated with SLE is well described in the literature and its association with antiphospholipid antibodies is recognized.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref1">1</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref2">2</xref>
                </sup> However, RVO as the initial manifestation of SLE is very uncommon. Herein we report a unique case of recurrent RVO as the initial presentation of SLE in a male patient.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec2">
            <title>Case report</title>
            <p>A 40-year-old Caucasian man, with no family history of autoimmune diseases and a personal medical history of hypertension, was admitted to the Ophthalmology Department of Taher Sfar University Hospital with blurred vision in the right eye. On detailed physical examination, he had no fever, arthritis, or chest complaints. On ophthalmologic examination, the best corrected visual acuity was 20/20, and a retinal branch vein occlusion in the right eye was disclosed. He was treated with aspirin (100 mg/day) associated with equilibration of his hypertension.</p>
            <p>One year later, he experienced another episode of blurred and decreased vision in the same eye. Physical examination was unremarkable. A skin exam revealed he had an erythema over the malar area. His blood pressure was normal. Fundus examination disclosed central retinal vein occlusion, superficial flame-shaped retinal hemorrhages, and macular oedema (
                <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1</xref>). Fluorescein angiography (FA) demonstrated vascular tortuosity, retinal hemorrhage, and cotton wool spots on the right eye (
                <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f2">Figure 2</xref>). Spectral-domain optical coherence tomography demonstrated cystoid macular oedema (
                <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f3">Figure 3</xref>). The left eye examination showed normal sizes of the retinal vessels and retina. A refraction study showed a best corrected visual acuity at 20/70 in the right eye and 20/20 in the left eye. On laboratory investigations, a blood test showed platelets: 229 * 10
                <sup>9</sup>/l, leukocytes: 9 * 10
                <sup>9</sup>/l, and hemoglobin level: 13.5 g/dl. Erythrocyte sedimentation rate was 30.</p>
            <fig fig-type="figure" id="f1" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                <label>Figure 1. </label>
                <caption>
                    <title>Superficial flame-shaped retinal hemorrhages in fundus examination.</title>
                </caption>
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            <fig fig-type="figure" id="f2" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                <label>Figure 2. </label>
                <caption>
                    <title>Fluorescein angiography showing vascular tortuosity, retinal hemorrhage, and cotton wool spots on the right eye.</title>
                </caption>
                <graphic id="gr2" orientation="portrait" position="float" xlink:href="https://f1000research-files.f1000.com/manuscripts/84622/b7cffb09-2611-4539-b2ab-97cdc31e18a3_figure2.gif"/>
            </fig>
            <fig fig-type="figure" id="f3" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                <label>Figure 3. </label>
                <caption>
                    <title>Spectral-domain optical coherence tomography showing cystoid macular oedema.</title>
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                <graphic id="gr3" orientation="portrait" position="float" xlink:href="https://f1000research-files.f1000.com/manuscripts/84622/b7cffb09-2611-4539-b2ab-97cdc31e18a3_figure3.gif"/>
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            <p>Autoantibodies tests revealed positive antinuclear antibodies (1: 800), anti-DNA antibodies, anti-nucleosomes antibodies, and slightly positive anti-citrullinated protein antibodies and rheumatoid factors. Antiphospholipid antibodies screening displayed high titer (&gt; 40 UI) of IgG anticardiolipines and IgG anti&#x03b2;2 glycoprotein antibodies. Total blood complement, C3, C4, protein S, protein C and antithrombin III levels were normal. The diagnosis of SLE was established based on clinical and immunological criteria including malar rash, positive anti-nuclear antibodies, anti-DNA antibodies, and antiphospholipid antibodies.</p>
            <p>The patient was started with hydroxychloroquine at 5.5 mg/kg/day and intra-vitreal anti-vascular endothelial growth factor (VEGF) antibodies regimen, in combination with aspirin (100 mg/day). The patient is still regularly taking his treatment without significant side effects. His vision has slowly improved under treatment. The patient remained under close observation. After two years of follow up, a refraction study showed a stable visual acuity.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec3" sec-type="discussion">
            <title>Discussion</title>
            <p>The atypical clinical presentation of SLE, in a male patient with a medical history of hypertension, and without any clinical objective criteria, led to the delay of the diagnosis of this autoimmune disease. The diagnosis was made after a second retinal vein occlusion. The patient had cutaneous involvement concomitantly with ocular complication. He had immunological criteria including positive antinuclear antibodies, anti-DNA antibodies and antiphospholipid antibodies which made the diagnosis clearer.</p>
            <p>SLE is a chronic and autoimmune disease characterized by widespread clinical manifestations and immunological disorders. It occurs in both genders but it is much more common in females than males, with female:male sex-ratio of 8:1 to 15:1.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref3">3</xref>
                </sup> Male patients have a higher prevalence of life threatening manifestations including lupus nephritis, central neurological system involvement and hemolytic anemia.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref3">3</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref4">4</xref>
                </sup> Regarding immunological features, anti-phospholipid antibodies were found to be more frequent in male SLE patients.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref5">5</xref>
                </sup> Thus, it would be expected that they present an increased risk of thromboembolic manifestations and antiphospholipid syndrome, which could worsen the course of the illness and increase the mortality rates. We report a case of SLE associated with antiphospholipid antibodies in a male patient. He presented a recurrent RVO as the first manifestation of the disease making this case unique.</p>
            <p>A myriad of ocular manifestations can be seen in patients with SLE including keratoconjunctivitis, scleritis, episcleritis, retinopathy, choroidopathy, orbital and lachrymal system disorders.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref6">6</xref>
                </sup> The most common ocular manifestation is keratoconjunctivitis but the most visually-threatening is retinopathy. The prevalence of lupus retinopathy varies from 3% to 28%.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref6">6</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref7">7</xref>
                </sup> The most common manifestations of lupus retinopathy are cotton wool spots, retinal hemorrhage and optic disk oedema.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref7">7</xref>
                </sup> Vaso-occlusive retinopathies is a subset of retinal vasculopathy, including retinal artery or vein occlusions which are a rare but severe complication. The vascular retinopathy in SLE results from immune complex mediated vascular injuries and micro-vascular thrombosis.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref8">8</xref>
                </sup> Patients with retinal vessel occlusion seem to have a poorer visual prognosis.</p>
            <p>Patients with SLE have a higher prevalence of developing RVO than the general population. A higher incidence of antiphospholipid antibodies in SLE patients with RVO has been reported.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref7">7</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref9">9</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref10">10</xref>
                </sup> However, the patient had a slightly positive anti-citrullinated protein antibodies and rheumatoid factor without bone erosion or joint stiffness or deformity evoking the diagnosis of rhupus. In fact, positivity of anti-CCP can be seen in 10-15% of patients with SLE without an association to rheumatoid arthritis.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref11">11</xref>
                </sup> Typically, RVO occurs in the first four years follow-up of SLE. Retinal vasculitis was scarcely reported as the first manifestation of SLE.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref12">12</xref>&#x2013;
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref14">14</xref>
                </sup> As far as we know, this would be the first case of a recurrent RVO as the revealing presentation of SLE to be reported in literature.</p>
            <p>Regarding the treatment of RVO in patients with SLE, anticoagulation and anti-platelet therapies have contributed to the stabilization of the retinal occlusion and the prevention of recurrent thrombosis either used separately or combined. The use of an immunosuppressant is still controversial due to the lack of evidence about its effects in improving the visual acuity and the retinal vascular occlusion recurring.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref7">7</xref>
                </sup> Intravitreally administrated anti-VEGF antibodies were introduced in the treatment regimen of RVO. Its main desired effect is to reduce the macular edema, which is the major cause of decreased visual acuity in patients with RVO.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref15">15</xref>
                </sup> Our patient received a combination of anti-platelet therapy and anti-VEGF antibodies. Clinical improvement was achieved under this treatment.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec4" sec-type="conclusion">
            <title>Conclusion</title>
            <p>SLE in males may have an atypical presentation. This often leads to a delay in making the diagnosis and starting treatment. In this article, we have reported a unique case of SLE in a male patient presenting with a severe and sight- threatening ocular complication. The diagnosis was overlooked, as the patient did not have any clinical criteria of SLE initially. Our case report&#x2019;s core contribution is to raise awareness about the possible typical and severe presentation of SLE in men.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec5">
            <title>Consent</title>
            <p>Written informed consent for publication of their clinical details and clinical images was obtained from the patient.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec6">
            <title>Data availability statement</title>
            <p>All data underlying the results are available as part of the article and no additional source data are required.</p>
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            <title-group>
                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 3</article-title>
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            <contrib-group>
                <contrib contrib-type="author">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Salem</surname>
                        <given-names>Bouomrani</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="r119240a1">1</xref>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="r119240a2">2</xref>
                    <role>Referee</role>
                </contrib>
                <aff id="r119240a1">
                    <label>1</label>Sfax Faculty of Medicine, University of Sfax, Sfax, 3029, Tunisia</aff>
                <aff id="r119240a2">
                    <label>2</label>Department of Internal medicine, Military Hospital of Gabes, Gabes, 6000, Tunisia</aff>
            </contrib-group>
            <author-notes>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
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            </author-notes>
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                <day>9</day>
                <month>2</month>
                <year>2022</year>
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            <p>The authors have modified the manuscript as requested. This version of the manuscript can be indexed.</p>
            <p>Are enough details provided of any physical examination and diagnostic tests, treatment given and outcomes?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Is the case presented with sufficient detail to be useful for other practitioners?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Is sufficient discussion included of the importance of the findings and their relevance to future understanding of disease processes, diagnosis or treatment?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Is the background of the case&#x2019;s history and progression described in sufficient detail?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>Connective tissue disease, autoimmunity,&#x00a0;immunogenic.</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard.</p>
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            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.5256/f1000research.78021.r96914</article-id>
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                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 2</article-title>
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            <contrib-group>
                <contrib contrib-type="author">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Salem</surname>
                        <given-names>Bouomrani</given-names>
                    </name>
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                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="r96914a2">2</xref>
                    <role>Referee</role>
                </contrib>
                <aff id="r96914a1">
                    <label>1</label>Sfax Faculty of Medicine, University of Sfax, Sfax, 3029, Tunisia</aff>
                <aff id="r96914a2">
                    <label>2</label>Department of Internal medicine, Military Hospital of Gabes, Gabes, 6000, Tunisia</aff>
            </contrib-group>
            <author-notes>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                </fn>
            </author-notes>
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                <day>6</day>
                <month>12</month>
                <year>2021</year>
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                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2021 Salem B</copyright-statement>
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            <p>
                <list list-type="bullet">
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                        <p>The corrections requested for the "Discussion" section have not been made.</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Similarly, the suggested bibliographical references, dealing with the subject of this paper and very useful for enriching the discussion, have not been used.</p>
                    </list-item>
                </list> This version should be revised in accordance with these suggestions.</p>
            <p>Are enough details provided of any physical examination and diagnostic tests, treatment given and outcomes?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Is the case presented with sufficient detail to be useful for other practitioners?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Is sufficient discussion included of the importance of the findings and their relevance to future understanding of disease processes, diagnosis or treatment?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Is the background of the case&#x2019;s history and progression described in sufficient detail?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>Connective tissue disease, autoimmunity,&#x00a0;immunogenic.</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard, however I have significant reservations, as outlined above.</p>
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                <contrib-group>
                    <contrib contrib-type="author">
                        <name>
                            <surname>Ben Brahim</surname>
                            <given-names>Marwa</given-names>
                        </name>
                        <aff>Taher Sfar University Hospital, University of Monastir, Tunisia</aff>
                    </contrib>
                </contrib-group>
                <author-notes>
                    <fn fn-type="conflict">
                        <p>
                            <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                    </fn>
                </author-notes>
                <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                    <day>14</day>
                    <month>12</month>
                    <year>2021</year>
                </pub-date>
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            <body>
                <p>Dear Reviewer;</p>
                <p> The requested corrections for the discussion section are now made as you previously suggested.</p>
            </body>
        </sub-article>
    </sub-article>
    <sub-article article-type="reviewer-report" id="report91273">
        <front-stub>
            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.5256/f1000research.58746.r91273</article-id>
            <title-group>
                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 1</article-title>
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            <contrib-group>
                <contrib contrib-type="author">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Iglicki</surname>
                        <given-names>Matias</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="r91273a1">1</xref>
                    <role>Referee</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0003-2257-9108</uri>
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                <aff id="r91273a1">
                    <label>1</label>Private Retina Practice, University of Buenos Aires, Buenos Aires, Argentina</aff>
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            <author-notes>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                </fn>
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            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>23</day>
                <month>9</month>
                <year>2021</year>
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                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2021 Iglicki M</copyright-statement>
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        <body>
            <p>Marwa Ben Brahim&#x00a0;
                <italic>et al.&#x00a0;</italic>present an interesting study about Retinal vein occlusion (RVO) as the first clinical manifestation of systemic lupus erythematosus (SLE) in a male patient. The study results certainly suggest to some degree that the RVO as the initial manifestation of SLE is scarcely reported.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> Besides how the magnitude of these data add new findings compare to the current standard can not be determined only based on this study. The results are encouraging and further study is warranted.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> Here some relevant points: 
                <list list-type="order">
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Please add on keywords - these do not match with the manuscript.</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>The authors should express why it is relevant for an RVO patient to link Retinal vein occlusion as the first clinical manifestation of systemic lupus erythematosus in a male patient? What does it change for the current standard of care?</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>The authors should explain why their findings make a difference for ophthalmologists around the world and for the readers of&#x00a0;
                            <italic>F1000Research.</italic>
                        </p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>The authors should explain the source of the information and what criteria they used for adding it to the paper. Were the assessors masked? What was the ICC (Inter class Correlation) between them in order to analyze the data? Was the randomization digitalized?</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Please add in the introduction that papers have been published showing how the Optical Coherence Tomography (OCT) and new devices lead us to proper diagnoses in Retinal diseases - add one line in the introduction of this and also in the discussion section. These papers should be described in the general considerations. See references
                            <sup>
                                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="rep-ref-91273-1">1</xref>
                            </sup>
                            <sup>,</sup>
                            <sup>
                                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="rep-ref-91273-2">2</xref>
                            </sup>
                            <sup>,</sup>
                            <sup>
                                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="rep-ref-91273-3">3</xref>
                            </sup>.&#x00a0;</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Please add how&#x00a0;and how long takes for a retina specialist to link and ask&#x00a0;the patient&#x00a0;about SLE and other Rheumatology and Rheumatic Diseases.</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Results could be misinterpreted - add a short summary of the similarities in different devices and also add different OCT modalities, etc., and what can be improved in the process of detecting RVO is mandatory in the discussion section i.e wide-field angiography, different types of OCT modalities OCT angiography&#x00a0;(OCTa).</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Please apply correction for misspelling and English grammar.</p>
                    </list-item>
                </list>
            </p>
            <p>Are enough details provided of any physical examination and diagnostic tests, treatment given and outcomes?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Is the case presented with sufficient detail to be useful for other practitioners?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Is sufficient discussion included of the importance of the findings and their relevance to future understanding of disease processes, diagnosis or treatment?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Is the background of the case&#x2019;s history and progression described in sufficient detail?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>DME, RVO, NAMD and retina surgical cases</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard, however I have significant reservations, as outlined above.</p>
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        <sub-article article-type="response" id="comment8375-91273">
            <front-stub>
                <contrib-group>
                    <contrib contrib-type="author">
                        <name>
                            <surname>Ben Brahim</surname>
                            <given-names>Marwa</given-names>
                        </name>
                        <aff>Taher Sfar University Hospital, University of Monastir, Tunisia</aff>
                    </contrib>
                </contrib-group>
                <author-notes>
                    <fn fn-type="conflict">
                        <p>
                            <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                    </fn>
                </author-notes>
                <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                    <day>13</day>
                    <month>6</month>
                    <year>2022</year>
                </pub-date>
            </front-stub>
            <body>
                <p>
                    <list list-type="order">
                        <list-item>
                            <p>Keywords: they match the manuscript</p>
                        </list-item>
                        <list-item>
                            <p>Since systemic lupus erythematosus is a chronic inflammatory disease with a periodic evolution it may require anti-inflammatory and/or immunosuppressant treatments in addition to symptomatic treatments of visceral manifestation such as the case of RVO how required Hydroxychloroquine, aspirin, and antiangiogenic treatment as well as long term follow-up in order to reduce relapses.</p>
                        </list-item>
                        <list-item>
                            <p>In fact, publishing this case report may raise awareness about this severe sight-threatening manifestation of SLE in men patients.</p>
                        </list-item>
                        <list-item>
                            <p>Dear reviewer, I do not think that interclass correlation could be applied in a case report.</p>
                        </list-item>
                        <list-item>
                            <p>Optical coherence tomography (OCT) allows the visualization of retinal layers and early diagnosis of the small retinal lesions.</p>
                        </list-item>
                        <list-item>
                            <p>Although the scarcity of ophthalmological manifestations as the primary manifestation of SLE, retina specialists should keep this diagnosis in mind and carefully look for other signs of an autoimmune systemic disease.</p>
                        </list-item>
                        <list-item>
                            <p>Done.</p>
                        </list-item>
                    </list>
                </p>
            </body>
        </sub-article>
    </sub-article>
    <sub-article article-type="reviewer-report" id="report91272">
        <front-stub>
            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.5256/f1000research.58746.r91272</article-id>
            <title-group>
                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 1</article-title>
            </title-group>
            <contrib-group>
                <contrib contrib-type="author">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Salem</surname>
                        <given-names>Bouomrani</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="r91272a1">1</xref>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="r91272a2">2</xref>
                    <role>Referee</role>
                </contrib>
                <aff id="r91272a1">
                    <label>1</label>Sfax Faculty of Medicine, University of Sfax, Sfax, 3029, Tunisia</aff>
                <aff id="r91272a2">
                    <label>2</label>Department of Internal medicine, Military Hospital of Gabes, Gabes, 6000, Tunisia</aff>
            </contrib-group>
            <author-notes>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                </fn>
            </author-notes>
            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>17</day>
                <month>8</month>
                <year>2021</year>
            </pub-date>
            <permissions>
                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2021 Salem B</copyright-statement>
                <copyright-year>2021</copyright-year>
                <license xlink:href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/">
                    <license-p>This is an open access peer review report distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution Licence, which permits unrestricted use, distribution, and reproduction in any medium, provided the original work is properly cited.</license-p>
                </license>
            </permissions>
            <related-article ext-link-type="doi" id="relatedArticleReport91272" related-article-type="peer-reviewed-article" xlink:href="10.12688/f1000research.55189.1"/>
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                <custom-meta>
                    <meta-name>recommendation</meta-name>
                    <meta-value>approve-with-reservations</meta-value>
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        </front-stub>
        <body>
            <p>The authors provide an interesting and original Case Report of retinal venous occlusion revealing systemic lupus erythematosus in a man. This observation is distinguished by the initial atypical clinical manifestation, male sex, and recurrence of retinal occlusion. This case is therefore the first to report recurrent retinal venous occlusion as an initial manifestation of lupus.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> Some comments are however useful to improve the quality of this manuscript:</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> 1. Title: 
                <list list-type="bullet">
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Replace the proposed title with "recurrent retinal vein occlusion as..." to highlight the recurrent character which is the originality of this observation.</p>
                    </list-item>
                </list> 2. Abstract: 
                <list list-type="bullet">
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Replace &#x201c;primary&#x201d; by initial or revealing.</p>
                    </list-item>
                </list> 3. Keywords: 
                <list list-type="bullet">
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Adapt the list of keywords to international standards: remove &#x201c;patient&#x201d; from &#x201c;male patient&#x201d;, remove &#x201c;case report&#x201d;, remove &#x201c;intra- vitreal and treatment&#x201d; from &#x201c;Intra-vitreal anti-vascular endothelial growth factor antibodies treatment&#x201d;.</p>
                    </list-item>
                </list> 4. Case Report: 
                <list list-type="bullet">
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Specify the anti-hypertensive treatment received by the patient (possibility of induced lupus)?.</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Replace "caucasian" by "Tunisian".</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Remove "s" from "rheumatoid factors",</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Add, if possible, a photo of the patient's malar erythema.</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>If possible, give the results of the explorations made to support the diagnosis of systemic lupus erythematosus: cardiac ultrasound (lupus pericarditis? which is asymptomatic in 30% of cases), cerebral MRI (infra-clinical neurolupus? Especially the association with retinal vasculitis is noted in more than 70% of cases
                            <sup>
                                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="rep-ref-91272-1">1</xref>
                            </sup>), and urinalysis?.</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Specify, if they were carried out, the results of the following tests: factor V mutation? (main thrombophilia causing venous thrombosis in Tunisia), and homocysteinemia? (hyperhomocysteinemia may be an added risk factor for retinal vein occlusions during SLE (1 patient/3 in Kumar K 
                            <italic>et al</italic> series
                            <sup>
                                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="rep-ref-91272-2">2</xref>
                            </sup>).</p>
                    </list-item>
                </list> 5. Discussion: 
                <list list-type="bullet">
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Replace "primary" by initial or revealing.</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Discuss the significance of anti-CCP antibodies in this observation: associated rheumatoid arthritis? (positive anti-CCP antibodies and positive RF: Rhupus syndrome?) Or a simple positivity of anti-CCP which can be seen in 10-15% of patients with SLE
                            <sup>
                                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="rep-ref-91272-3">3</xref>
                            </sup>?</p>
                    </list-item>
                </list> 6. Conclusion: 
                <list list-type="bullet">
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Rephrase &#x201c;delay in making the diagnosis&#x2026;&#x201d; by &#x201c;diagnostic and therapeutic delay&#x201d;.</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Replace "article" by "paper".</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Correct "typical" by "atypical".</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Emphasize the recurrent and revealing nature of the retinal venous occlusion which is the originality of this case.</p>
                    </list-item>
                </list>
            </p>
            <p>Are enough details provided of any physical examination and diagnostic tests, treatment given and outcomes?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Is the case presented with sufficient detail to be useful for other practitioners?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Is sufficient discussion included of the importance of the findings and their relevance to future understanding of disease processes, diagnosis or treatment?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Is the background of the case&#x2019;s history and progression described in sufficient detail?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>Connective tissue disease, autoimmunity,&#x00a0;immunogenic.</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard, however I have significant reservations, as outlined above.</p>
        </body>
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        <sub-article article-type="response" id="comment7214-91272">
            <front-stub>
                <contrib-group>
                    <contrib contrib-type="author">
                        <name>
                            <surname>Ben Brahim</surname>
                            <given-names>Marwa</given-names>
                        </name>
                        <aff>Taher Sfar University Hospital, University of Monastir, Tunisia</aff>
                    </contrib>
                </contrib-group>
                <author-notes>
                    <fn fn-type="conflict">
                        <p>
                            <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests.</p>
                    </fn>
                </author-notes>
                <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                    <day>27</day>
                    <month>9</month>
                    <year>2021</year>
                </pub-date>
            </front-stub>
            <body>
                <p>1. Done</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 2. Done</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 3. Done, the keyword "case report" was kept because it has to be mentioned.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 4. We, unfortunately, do not have any pictures of the patient's malar rash.&#x00a0;</p>
                <p> Since the patient had not had any neurological symptoms, we did not demand a Brain-MRI.</p>
                <p> We have assed further details about the laboratory investigation.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 5. Done. The patient had slightly positive anti-citrullinated protein antibodies and rheumatoid factor without bone erosion or joint stiffness or deformity evoking the diagnosis of rhupus. In fact, the positivity of anti-CCP can be seen in 10-15% of patients with SLE without an association to rheumatoid arthritis.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 6. We rephrased "delay in making the...." as you suggested. We corrected typical by atypical as you suggested. We have emphasized the recurrent and revealing character of the retinal vein occlusion in all parts of the paper.</p>
            </body>
        </sub-article>
    </sub-article>
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