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                <journal-title>F1000Research</journal-title>
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            <issn pub-type="epub">2046-1402</issn>
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            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.12688/f1000research.123642.2</article-id>
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                <article-title>On NFPs with high social impact that avoid concentrating on a few activities</article-title>
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                    <fn>
                        <p>[version 2; peer review: 2 approved]</p>
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                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="yes">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Mizutani</surname>
                        <given-names>Fuminobu</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Conceptualization</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Formal Analysis</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Methodology</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Visualization</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Original Draft Preparation</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0003-1306-8891</uri>
                    <xref ref-type="corresp" rid="c1">a</xref>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a1">1</xref>
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                <aff id="a1">
                    <label>1</label>Department of Business Administration, Kanto Gakuin University, Yokohama, 2310016, Japan</aff>
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            <author-notes>
                <corresp id="c1">
                    <label>a</label>
                    <email xlink:href="mailto:fuminobu@kanto-gakuin.ac.jp">fuminobu@kanto-gakuin.ac.jp</email>
                </corresp>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
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            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>30</day>
                <month>10</month>
                <year>2023</year>
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            <pub-date pub-type="collection">
                <year>2022</year>
            </pub-date>
            <volume>11</volume>
            <elocation-id>964</elocation-id>
            <history>
                <date date-type="accepted">
                    <day>23</day>
                    <month>10</month>
                    <year>2023</year>
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                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2023 Mizutani F</copyright-statement>
                <copyright-year>2023</copyright-year>
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            <abstract>
                <p>
                    <bold>Background:</bold> An influential piece of literature on effective altruism insists that not-for-profit organizations (NFPs) should concentrate their investments on a few activities to maximize their social return on investment (SROI) ratio. However, this creates greater risk for an NFP than building a portfolio of investments in activities. This study investigates whether it is desirable for executives and contributors of NFPs to build a portfolio rather than maximize the expected SROI ratio, and if so, how to build one. Solving these questions will help the chief financial officers (CFOs) of NFPs, who serve as their agents, fulfill their obligations to contributors, who are their principals, and will help advisors provide better services for their contributors, their clients.</p>
                <p>
                    <bold>Methods:</bold> Data were collected from a ranking of NFPs, then non-parametric tests were performed on this ranking and the Herfindahl-Hirschman Index (HHI).</p>
                <p>
                    <bold>Results:</bold> The HHI are between 2013 and 2688. The results of non-parametric tests do not deny that rank and HHI are independent of each other. Most of the NFPs&#x2019; investments in activities were in accord with their core competencies.</p>
                <p>
                    <bold>Conclusions:</bold> It was found that successful executives build portfolios. The findings of this study should be sufficiently practical in helping NFP executives and contributors decide whether to build portfolios, and if so, how.</p>
            </abstract>
            <kwd-group kwd-group-type="author">
                <kwd>Portfolio</kwd>
                <kwd>NFP</kwd>
                <kwd>SROI</kwd>
                <kwd>HHI</kwd>
                <kwd>Non-parametric test</kwd>
                <kwd>Core competency</kwd>
                <kwd>Financial Engineering</kwd>
                <kwd>Accounting</kwd>
            </kwd-group>
            <funding-group>
                <funding-statement>The author(s) declared that no grants were involved in supporting this work.</funding-statement>
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        <notes>
            <sec sec-type="version-changes">
                <label>Revised</label>
                <title>Amendments from Version 1</title>
                <p>The revised manuscript reflected reviewers&#x2019; comments. This paper&#x2019;s title was changed. This paper&#x2019;s focus moved from SROI to social impact in general. More explanations of the data source were added. Additional data were collected and another statistical analysis was conducted. Additional data made the sampling criteria clearer. More literature review was proceeded. Contributions were clearly positioned as principles. The calculation of HHI was explained in a new sentence. A new figure as added. Why optimal was explained through a new literature. Some sentences were added to &#x201c;Discussion&#x201d;. In addition to say, the author&#x2019;s ZIP code was changed.</p>
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        <sec id="sec1" sec-type="intro">
            <title>Introduction</title>
            <p>NFPs generally attempt to generate high social impact. Social return on investment (SROI) is a particularly hot topic in accounting; in practice, a not-for-profit organization (NFP) can calculate its SROI ratio annually, the way a profit-oriented entity calculates return on equity (ROE). Adoption of SROI shows the NFP pays attention to the utilitarian aspect of this. Although utilitarianism usually considers all stakeholders utility, this study&#x2019;s ultimate aim is to find a way to maximize contributors&#x2019; utility through maximizing utility of their agents, namely executives of NFPs.</p>
            <p>The Wall Street Journal (Feb. 2, 2022) stated that Melinda French Gates will not concentrate her donations within the Bill &amp; Melinda Gates Foundation, but instead spread her donations across various philanthropic endeavors. We know from 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref24">Tuan (2008)</xref> that this foundation has been interested in measuring SROI and other forms of social impact.</p>
            <p>The frequently quoted 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref15">MacAskill (2015)</xref> insists that NFPs should concentrate on a few activities and suggests that Oxfam and WorldVision are involved in too wide a variety of activities. Moreover, some scholars use fictional examples in which contributors concentrate their donations within one NFP with the highest SROI ratio, which would maximize the expected SROI ratio. Certainly, such usage of SROI could be effective based on the premise that resources are scare. However, executives of a NFP also want to maximize social impact even when they engage in activities without SROI calculations. However, some NFPs unfortunately fail to achieve their goals, and some even become embroiled in scandal, meaning that each NFP is accompanied with risk for its executives and contributors.</p>
            <p>Building a portfolio, an often-discussed topic in finance, may fulfill the needs of NFP executives and contributors who are risk-averse. The Markowitz model, also called the Modern Portfolio Theory (MPT), advises investors of profit-oriented entities against concentrating investments within only one profit-oriented entity, and this may provide insight on how contributors to NFPs should donate.</p>
            <p>Many finance textbooks, including 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref4">Brealey 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2020)</xref>, discuss agency theory. The executives of an NFP are the agents of its contributors, who are its principals. If governance of an NFP is effective, its agents fulfill its principals&#x2019; needs. If building a portfolio were desirable for principals, agents would also build a portfolio. If decisions to concentrate are desirable for contributors, they would also be desirable for NFP executives.</p>
            <p>This paper intends to help investment professionals in decision-making, including chief financial officers (CFOs) of NFPs and advisors for contributors to NFPs, who are considering building a portfolio. A review of the literature is provided in the next section, then the data and adopted methodology, which are non-parametric tests, are described in the section after that. This is followed by results, then a discussion of the results, and finally, conclusions.</p>
            <sec id="sec1.1">
                <title>Literature review</title>
                <p>Various measurements to evaluate social impact have been developed in recent years. 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref19">Nicholls 
                        <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2012)</xref> is a SROI guide and influences the accounting practices of British charities. This guide explains not only the financial accounting aspect of SROI but the management accounting aspect. Although some literature, ex. 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref3">Bellucci 
                        <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2019)</xref> which is extensive, tackle the management accounting aspect and their findings are insightful for accounting practices, this study focuses on the financial aspect.</p>
                <p>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref12">Gneezy 
                        <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2014)</xref> is a widely read paper on NFP financial ratios that discusses not only how to calculate them, but also how to use them. 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref11">Gargani (2017)</xref> is an influential and well-written paper that also discusses risk, written by a scholar with a professional background. This paper found that SROI ratio can be calculated using the formula below:
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                            <mml:mtext>SROI Ratio</mml:mtext>
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                                            <mml:mi mathvariant="normal">B</mml:mi>
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                                        <mml:mi mathvariant="normal">T</mml:mi>
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                                            <mml:mi mathvariant="normal">C</mml:mi>
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                        <label>(1)</label>
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                <p>B means net social impact and C means costs, while T means the number of years of an NFP project and t is the particular financial year.</p>
                <p>Gargani uses a model in which only the NFP with the highest SROI ratio is selected. 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref26">Yates and Marra (2017)</xref> indicate the weak points of SROI and warn that SROI may lead to radical concentration of donations in the real world. Speaking not of social impact in general but of SROI itself, whether the concentration is positive or negative for contributors is controversial and beyond the scope of this study.</p>
                <p>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref15">MacAskill (2015)</xref> is a typical and practical example of literature on effective altruism based on rationality. The basis of SROI is utilitarianism, as 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref17">Maier 
                        <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2015)</xref> states, and utilitarianism is a philosophical thought based on rationality. Some supporters of effective altruism are utilitarian. 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref22">Singer (2015)</xref> in particular is clearly based on utilitarianism and is also widely read. MacAskill is not written from the viewpoint of an extreme risk-lover, meaning that executives of a NFP who want to generate high social impact cannot neglect this book.</p>
                <p>On the other hand, scholars such as 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref20">Pahlevani 
                        <italic toggle="yes">et al</italic>. (2021)</xref> have considered a portfolio of donations. 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref13">Luenberger (2014)</xref> is a widely read textbook about financial engineering that contains explanations of the Markowitz model, a model created by Nobel laureate Harry Markowitz that has become the standard for scholars. The Markowitz model is suited to risk-averse investors, whose optimal portfolio is one that is not too concentrated.</p>
                <p>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref14">Lukomnik and Hawley (2021)</xref> depict the Markowitz model as a bloodless model that cannot tackle social problems, implying that the Markowitz model is harmful for stakeholders. Their emphasis on social problems themselves is agreed upon by most investors and contributors, as governments around the world aim to achieve the United Nations&#x2019; Sustainable Development Goals (SDGs) with the cooperation of profit-oriented entities.</p>
                <p>Taking into account the history of the Markowitz model as described in 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref23">Townsend (2020)</xref>, it is doubtful that this model is really bloodless. Certainly, in the past it was commonly thought that a portfolio should be only based on the pecuniary aspects of the Markowitz model. However, Nobel laureate Milton Friedman indicated the necessity of social responsibility and Markowitz himself had the same opinion as Friedman.</p>
                <p>Through empirical research, 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref9">Davis (2020)</xref> discovered that Canadian grassroots international NGOs concentrate on a few activities in the aspect of their foci and countries. Popular foci are education, health, and social services. Popular countries are India, Kenya, Haiti, and Uganda. 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref9">Davis (2020)</xref> indicates Canadian international NGOs generally followed global trends.</p>
                <p>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref5">Buchak (2023)</xref> explains risk and ambiguity from a utilitarianism perspective. Decision making depends on whether stakeholders maximize (simple) expected utility or risk-weighted expected utility. Ambiguity means stakeholders cannot know the sharp probabilities of previous results. Thus, some scholars of decision theory regard stakeholders as calculating &#x03b1;-maximin and they can make decisions. If the results of this study show executives of a NFP build portfolios, they are maximizing risk-weighted expected utility. Hence, if there is a pattern in portfolios, executives of a NFP are not taking random measures against ambiguity but calculated measures and the calculated measures may be &#x03b1;-maximin.</p>
                <p>Regarding methodology, 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref8">Clark 
                        <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2022)</xref> show that simple methodologies sometimes bring interesting findings on economics. 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref10">Flori 
                        <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2019)</xref> is an influential paper stating that the Herfindahl-Hirschman index (HHI) can be used to quantify concentration of investments. As 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref7">Chikoto 
                        <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2016)</xref> say, HHI is widely used in research on the revenue concentration of NFPs. 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref21">Rimes 
                        <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2019)</xref> adopts HHI to examine the concentration of giving which are expenditures for contributors. HHI is appropriate for both revenue and expenditure. 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref2">Basu 
                        <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2009)</xref>, a somewhat older study, used non-parametric tests extensively, showing that accounting researchers can adopt not only parametric tests but non-parametric tests as well. 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref16">Marklein 
                        <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2019)</xref> is a current study in the social sciences, adopting the Mann-Whitney U-Test which is a non-parametric test.</p>
                <p>It is difficult to foresee the results of statistical methods, because of the difference between NFPs and profit-oriented entities. 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref1">Angerer 
                        <italic toggle="yes">et al</italic>. (2015)</xref> shows that higher risk tolerance among contributors relates to higher contributions. Some contributors may be even risk-lovers. In contrast, mainstream investors in profit-oriented entities are obviously risk-averse.</p>
            </sec>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec2" sec-type="methods">
            <title>Methods</title>
            <p>Due to a small sample size that makes postulating Gaussian distribution impossible, this study uses a simple methodology which utilizes non-parametric tests, which can be used for small sample sizes and do not require Gaussian distribution. Non-parametric tests can be conducted even on a small-size sample.</p>
            <p>The research methods consist of two parts. Part one is an analysis of the world&#x2019;s top NFPs. Part two is a comparison between the world&#x2019;s top NFPs and more grassroots NFPs.</p>
            <p>Sample NFPs were collected from NGO Advisor&#x2019;s &#x201c;World 200 Best SGOs&#x201d; for 2021. This is a leading ranking of NFPs. NGO Advisor is a Swiss organization that provides a wealth of information on NFPs in English and French and sometimes uses the word SGO (social good organization). This abbreviation was perhaps influenced by the word 
                <italic toggle="yes">association</italic> in French. Although the definitions of NFP and NGO are almost identical, the definitions of NFP and SGO are completely different. All organizations referred to in the following paragraphs are both NFPs and SGOs.</p>
            <p>While the characteristics of each NFP often differ, Mercy Corps, Oxfam, and Save the Children rank high on the list and have similar characteristics. Thus, this study sampled NFPs whose activities are similar to these three NFPs, are concerned with SROI, and whose headquarters are within the English-speaking world. If detailed financial information on an NFP was difficult to collect from its annual report, it was excluded from this study.</p>
            <p>According to NGO Advisor&#x2019;s webpage, their ranking is from scores on NFPs&#x2019; social impact, innovation, and governance. Although it is a little difficult to evaluate in terms of innovation, good governance shows that agents fulfill principals&#x2019; needs. NFPs ranked in the World 200 Best SGOs are excellent in the aspect of social impact, and executives who use SROI in such NFPs are assumed to carefully consider how to invest donations received into their activities.</p>
            <p>Each NFP conducts several activities, and the HHI of these activities can be calculated from financial reporting. Numbers showing each NFP&#x2019;s investments into each segment were gathered. This study assumes that disclosed data on activities is similar to segment reporting by profit-oriented entities, which NFP executives use in their decision-making. The objective financial information used was as the list in the next section.</p>
            <p>Data from before the coronavirus disease (COVID-19) pandemic was used in order for this study to be applicable to a wider range of situations than the special circumstances of the pandemic. The time lag between financial information and the world ranking is not an issue for this study. Whether an NFP conducted emergency relief for the pandemic does not affect how investments in activities were made in the past, and thus it is expected that the world ranking is based on investments before the pandemic.</p>
            <p>This study calculates the HHI of each NFP in order to see how each NFP distributes the donations received among their activities. The percentage invested in each activity within the NFP was used for this calculation. If HHI was low, it can be assumed that building a portfolio rather than concentrating donations in one area is a preferable strategy for NFPs.</p>
            <p>This study uses Spearman&#x2019;s rank correlation coefficient, which is widely used among scholars, to calculate correlation between HHI and the rank of the NFP on the world ranking. A statistically significant correlation (
                <italic toggle="yes">p</italic> &lt; 0.05) would indicate that these high-ranking NFPs have not built an optimal portfolio of investments in activities. This study also calculates Kendall&#x2019;s rank correlation coefficient, which is not widely used among scholars, as a supplement because it is known that these two statistical methods sometimes show different results.</p>
            <p>Part two sampled NFPs with similar characteristics as samples in part one from GuideStar. The NFPs are located in Washington, D.C. and are labelled as platinum. In order to proceed with the Mann-Whitney U-Test, it is technically desirable for the sample size of more grassroots NFPs to be the same as the sample size of part one. From the high-ranked NFPs in the search results on GuideStar in 2023 September, samples with their 2019 segment information were collected.</p>
            <p>IBM SPSS Statistics 29, a reliable application widely used in social sciences, was used to calculate these two statistical methods. The HHI of each NFP is calculated by a spreadsheet.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec3" sec-type="results">
            <title>Results</title>
            <p>Six NFPs met the requirements of this study, meaning that the sample size was 6. Data were collected from the below documents:
                <list list-type="bullet">
                    <list-item>
                        <label>&#x2022;</label>
                        <p>
                            <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://www.mercycorps.org/sites/default/files/2020-01/Mercy_Corps_Ventures_2019_Impact_Report_web.pdf">
                                <italic toggle="yes">2019 Annual Impact Report</italic>
                            </ext-link> by Mercy Corps (The left schedule of page 14.)</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <label>&#x2022;</label>
                        <p>
                            <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://www.oxfam.org.uk/documents/107/Annual_Report_2019.pdf">
                                <italic toggle="yes">Annual Report 2018-19</italic>
                            </ext-link> by Oxfam (The right schedule of page 47.)</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <label>&#x2022;</label>
                        <p>
                            <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://www.savethechildren.org/content/dam/usa/reports/annual-report/annual-report/annual-report-save-the-children-2019.pdf">
                                <italic toggle="yes">Save the Children Annual Report</italic> 2019</ext-link> by Save the Children (The upper right graph of page 23.)</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <label>&#x2022;</label>
                        <p>
                            <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://www.care.org/wp-content/uploads/2020/06/FY2019_CARE_Annual_Report_spreads.pdf">
                                <italic toggle="yes">CARE USA 2019 Annual Report</italic>
                            </ext-link> by CARE (The graph named &#x201c;How We Work&#x201d; of page 31.)</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <label>&#x2022;</label>
                        <p>
                            <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://www.childfund.org/globalassets/uploaded-files/newcf/impact/childfund_2020_annual_report_final.pdf">
                                <italic toggle="yes">2020 Annual Report</italic>
                            </ext-link> by ChildFund (The right financial statement of page 11.)</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <label>&#x2022;</label>
                        <p>
                            <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://www.vsointernational.org/sites/default/files/VSOannual%20report1819.pdf">
                                <italic toggle="yes">Annual Report and Accounts 2018/2019</italic>
                            </ext-link> by Voluntary Service Overseas (VSO) (The upper graph of page 38.)</p>
                    </list-item>
                </list>
            </p>
            <p>The name, rank, and rounded HHI of each NFP are shown in 
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T1">Table 1</xref>.</p>
            <table-wrap id="T1" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                <label>Table 1. </label>
                <caption>
                    <title>Statistical data in part one.</title>
                </caption>
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                    <thead>
                        <tr>
                            <th align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Name</th>
                            <th align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Rank</th>
                            <th align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Herfindahl-Hirschman index (HHI)</th>
                        </tr>
                    </thead>
                    <tbody>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Mercy Corps</td>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">6</td>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">2540</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Oxfam</td>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">12</td>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">2152</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Save the Children</td>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">15</td>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">2610</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">CARE</td>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">46</td>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">2688</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">ChildFund</td>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">112</td>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">2274</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Voluntary Service Overseas (VSO)</td>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">147</td>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">2013</td>
                        </tr>
                    </tbody>
                </table>
            </table-wrap>
            <p>The HHI of the six NFPs ranged from 2013 to 2688. There were no NFPs that met the requirements of the study below rank 148 in this ranking.</p>
            <p>A scatter chart is shown in 
                <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1</xref>. At a glance, there is no significant correlation between rank and HHI.</p>
            <fig fig-type="figure" id="f1" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                <label>Figure 1. </label>
                <caption>
                    <title>Scatter plot.</title>
                </caption>
                <graphic id="gr1" orientation="portrait" position="float" xlink:href="https://f1000research-files.f1000.com/manuscripts/157875/d6f8b489-1ce3-4386-a93d-0f55c989667b_figure1.gif"/>
            </fig>
            <p>Spearman&#x2019;s rank correlation coefficient was &#x03c1; = -0.314, statistically not significant with not only 
                <italic toggle="yes">p</italic> &#x2265; 0.05, but 
                <italic toggle="yes">p</italic> &#x2265; 0.1. Kendall&#x2019;s rank correlation coefficient was Tau-b = -0.2, also statistically not significant at 
                <italic toggle="yes">p</italic> &#x2265; 0.1. Neither of these results denies that rank and HHI are independent of each other.</p>
            <p>Additionally, most of the six NFPs&#x2019; investments in activities were in accord with their core competencies. Even the NFP that made the largest investments in activities not in accord with its core competence among the six NFPs invested more than two-thirds in activities that were in accord with its core competence.</p>
            <p>In part two data were collected from the following documents:
                <list list-type="bullet">
                    <list-item>
                        <label>&#x2022;</label>
                        <p>
                            <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://www.padf.org/wp-content/uploads/2020/07/PADF_AnnualReport_2019_Final_English.pdf">
                                <italic toggle="yes">2019 Annual Report</italic>
                            </ext-link> by PADF (The righthand graph on page 12.)</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <label>&#x2022;</label>
                        <p>
                            <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://www.anera.org/wp-content/uploads/2019/11/Anera-Annual-Report-2019.pdf">
                                <italic toggle="yes">2019 Annual Report</italic>
                            </ext-link> by Anera (The lefthand financial statement on page 10.)</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <label>&#x2022;</label>
                        <p>
                            <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://www.nokidhungry.org/sites/default/files/2020-05/SOS%202019-06%20AUDIT%20Final%20FS.pdf">
                                <italic toggle="yes">2019 Audited Financials</italic>
                            </ext-link> by No Kid Hungry by Share Our Strength (The statement on page 5.)</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <label>&#x2022;</label>
                        <p>
                            <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://prosperitynow.org/sites/default/files/PDFs/Annual%20Reports/Audited%20Financial%20Statements/2019_Prosperity-Now-FS.pdf">
                                <italic toggle="yes">2019 Audited Financial Statements</italic>
                            </ext-link> by Prosperity Now (The financial statement on page 5.)</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <label>&#x2022;</label>
                        <p>
                            <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://foodandfriends.org/wp-content/uploads/2021/12/Food-Friends-Inc.-9-30-2019-Final.pdf">
                                <italic toggle="yes">FY2019 Financial Statement</italic>
                            </ext-link> by Food &amp; Friends (The statement on page 7.)</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <label>&#x2022;</label>
                        <p>
                            <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://housingup.org/wp-content/uploads/2020/11/Housing-Up-2019-Audit.pdf">
                                <italic toggle="yes">Housing Up and Affiliates</italic>
                            </ext-link> 
                            <italic toggle="yes">FY2019 Audit</italic> by Housing Up (The statement on page 9.)</p>
                    </list-item>
                </list>
            </p>
            <p>The name, and rounded HHI of each NFP are shown in 
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T2">Table 2</xref>. These data are designated as group B and data from the part one are designated as group A.</p>
            <table-wrap id="T2" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                <label>Table 2. </label>
                <caption>
                    <title>Statistical data on part two.</title>
                </caption>
                <table content-type="article-table" frame="hsides">
                    <thead>
                        <tr>
                            <th align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Name</th>
                            <th align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Herfindahl-Hirschman index (HHI)</th>
                        </tr>
                    </thead>
                    <tbody>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">PADF</td>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">3342</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Anera</td>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">4687</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">No Kid Hungry by Share Our Strength</td>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">8854</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Prosperity Now</td>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">3903</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Food &amp; Friends</td>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">4574</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Housing Up</td>
                            <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">6207</td>
                        </tr>
                    </tbody>
                </table>
            </table-wrap>
            <p>A graph of distributions for both groups are shown in 
                <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f2">Figure 2</xref>. At a glance, the distributions of both groups are different.</p>
            <fig fig-type="figure" id="f2" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                <label>Figure 2. </label>
                <caption>
                    <title>Graph about distributions of both groups.</title>
                </caption>
                <graphic id="gr2" orientation="portrait" position="float" xlink:href="https://f1000research-files.f1000.com/manuscripts/157875/d6f8b489-1ce3-4386-a93d-0f55c989667b_figure2.gif"/>
            </fig>
            <p>U was 36 and statistically significant with p &lt; 0.01. Thus, distributions of both groups are different.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec4">
            <title>Discussion</title>
            <p>Part one provided three insights. First, all six NFPs showed low HHI, showing that executives of these NFPs have built portfolios. Second, because all six NFPs had similar HHI, it would seem at a glance that an optimal portfolio exists. Statistical analysis does not deny the existence of an optimal portfolio. Finally, executives of all six NFPs appeared to prefer an optimal portfolio with the HHI ranging from 2013 to 2688 that consisted of activities in accord with the NFPs&#x2019; core competencies.</p>
            <p>This suggests that skillful and rational executives build a portfolio, and that an optimal portfolio of investments into activities exists; if NFP executives neglect their core competencies, their social impact will be low. The existence of an optimal portfolio of investments also shows that NFP executives are not taking random measures against ambiguity but calculated measures and the calculated measures may be &#x03b1;-maximin.</p>
            <p>Part two also provided another insight. The result of Mann-Whitney U-Test and 
                <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f2">Figure 2</xref> showed that the world&#x2019;s top NFPs are building portfolios while more grassroots NFPs do not necessarily build portfolios. Building a portfolio isn&#x2019;t a priori for all NFPs but optimal practices conducted by the world&#x2019;s top NFPs.</p>
            <p>This suggests that following this optimal practice makes NFPs which were used not to build portfolio socially more impactful.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec5" sec-type="conclusions">
            <title>Conclusions</title>
            <p>These findings suggest that skillful and rational NFP executives avoid concentrating on only a few activities. Such executives build a portfolio of investments based on their activities. Similarly, from the statistical analysis, it can be assumed that building a portfolio of investments would benefit contributors as well. There also appears to be an optimal portfolio of investments. Besides, building portfolio is a priori for not all NFPs but is considered the optimal practice. This study also suggests that core competencies should not be neglected, and that the Markowitz model is likely not bloodless.</p>
            <p>This paper suggests that investment professionals should avoid overly concentrating investments, but instead build a portfolio for risk-averse clients, who make up the majority of clients. CFOs in NFPs, who serve as their agents, will be able to better fulfill their obligations to contributors, their principals, than in the past, and advisors will be able to provide better services for their clients, who are NFP contributors.</p>
            <p>Contrary to the recommendation of 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref15">MacAskill (2015)</xref>, the world&#x2019;s top NFPs, NFPs with high social impact, avoid concentrating on a few activities. This is surprising, considering that 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref15">MacAskill (2015)</xref> is essential and thoughtful literature for scholars researching NFPs. Executives of the world&#x2019;s top NFPs maximize risk-weighted utility which is a particular type of utility in 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref5">Buchak (2023)</xref>. The statistical analysis of part two is supportive for 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref9">Davis (2020)</xref> regarding grassroots NFPs.</p>
            <p>One of the limitations of this study is its small sample size. The findings of this study could be checked more rigorously if there were a method to increase the sample size. Another limitation is the widely known limits of statistical methods, which are suitable for finding differences but are not as suitable for finding similarities. The well-known statistical methods can only show that something is not denied, a slightly ambiguous indication. A method suited to finding similarities may be preferable.</p>
            <p>Even with the limitations above, the findings of this study should be sufficiently practical in helping NFP executives and contributors decide whether to build a portfolio and, if so, how.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec6">
            <title>Data availability</title>
            <sec id="sec7">
                <title>Source data</title>
                <p>Data for part one was collected from a webpage of a third party &#x201c;NGO Advisor&#x201d;. Because NGO Advisor changed its name to thedotgood in 2022, readers can access the data from the website of thedotgood. Its URL is 
                    <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://thedotgood.net/">https://thedotgood.net/</ext-link>. The author utilized &#x201c;World 200 Best SGOs&#x201d; for 2021. In order to access the full data, registration is required. The cost for purchasing a pass varies depending on the type of the pass. The latest ranking is for 2022 in July 2022. If a reader wants to view the ranking not for 2022 but for 2021, they need to send an inquiry to thedotgood.</p>
                <p>Data for part two was collected from a third party webpage called &#x201c;Candid&#x2019;s Guidestar.&#x201d; Candid provides GuideStar and readers can access the data from its website. Its URL is 
                    <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://www.guidestar.org/">https://www.guidestar.org/</ext-link>. In order to access the database, registration is required. Some of Candid&#x2019;s are free in 2023.</p>
            </sec>
        </sec>
    </body>
    <back>
        <ack>
            <title>Acknowledgment</title>
            <p>The author would like to thank b-cause Inc. for its English proofreading service.</p>
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                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 2</article-title>
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            <contrib-group>
                <contrib contrib-type="author">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Bellucci</surname>
                        <given-names>Marco</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="r219329a1">1</xref>
                    <role>Referee</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0002-4014-4418</uri>
                </contrib>
                <aff id="r219329a1">
                    <label>1</label>Department of Economics and Management, University of Florence, Florence, Italy</aff>
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                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
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                <day>31</day>
                <month>1</month>
                <year>2024</year>
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            <p>The author has included all my suggestions, No further comments.</p>
            <p>Is the work clearly and accurately presented and does it cite the current literature?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>If applicable, is the statistical analysis and its interpretation appropriate?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Are all the source data underlying the results available to ensure full reproducibility?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Is the study design appropriate and is the work technically sound?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the results?</p>
            <p>No</p>
            <p>Are sufficient details of methods and analysis provided to allow replication by others?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>Accounting</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard.</p>
        </body>
    </sub-article>
    <sub-article article-type="reviewer-report" id="report219328">
        <front-stub>
            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.5256/f1000research.157875.r219328</article-id>
            <title-group>
                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 2</article-title>
            </title-group>
            <contrib-group>
                <contrib contrib-type="author">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Parsons</surname>
                        <given-names>Linda M.</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="r219328a1">1</xref>
                    <role>Referee</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0002-5522-5894</uri>
                </contrib>
                <aff id="r219328a1">
                    <label>1</label>The University of Alabama, Tuscaloosa, Alabama, USA</aff>
            </contrib-group>
            <author-notes>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                </fn>
            </author-notes>
            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>8</day>
                <month>11</month>
                <year>2023</year>
            </pub-date>
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                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2023 Parsons LM</copyright-statement>
                <copyright-year>2023</copyright-year>
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            <p>The author did a good job responding to my questions and suggestions. While the sample size is small and the analysis is simple, I think the findings are informative to those who are concerned about the need to concentrate efforts on one or a few program areas in order to provide the greatest impact on society.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> The question is an interesting one and this study provides some information about current practices.</p>
            <p>Is the work clearly and accurately presented and does it cite the current literature?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>If applicable, is the statistical analysis and its interpretation appropriate?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Are all the source data underlying the results available to ensure full reproducibility?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Is the study design appropriate and is the work technically sound?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the results?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Are sufficient details of methods and analysis provided to allow replication by others?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>Nonprofit accounting research using archival reports and disclosures.</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard.</p>
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            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.5256/f1000research.135771.r178726</article-id>
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                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 1</article-title>
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                <contrib contrib-type="author">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Parsons</surname>
                        <given-names>Linda M.</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="r178726a1">1</xref>
                    <role>Referee</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0002-5522-5894</uri>
                </contrib>
                <aff id="r178726a1">
                    <label>1</label>The University of Alabama, Tuscaloosa, Alabama, USA</aff>
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            <author-notes>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
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            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>3</day>
                <month>8</month>
                <year>2023</year>
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            <p>The author examines whether a common claim that concentrating investments (rather than building a portfolio of activities) leads to better social return on investment (SROI). This is an interesting question and, as is often the case in the nonprofit sector, involves considering the appropriateness of using corporate (profit-maximizing) techniques in nonprofit organizations. In this example, financial theory suggests a diversified portfolio is less risky and more profitable than a concentrated one. However, given the focus on SROI, perhaps dedicating nonprofit resources and expertise to a specific activity is more effective.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> The primary question/concern is the measures employed. Rather than directly measuring social impact, the author uses the ranking from a reputable international source. The assumption is that ranking of the 200 best social good organizations is an appropriate proxy for (and highly correlated with) social impact. If this is the case, a sentence or two to acknowledge this assumption and the logic of doing so would be helpful. Are there other factors (such as organizational growth or governance) that significantly affect rankings?</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> The author calculates the correlation of ranking (as a proxy for impact) with a widely-accepted measure of portfolio diversity, the Herfindahl-Hirschman Index (HHI). The results show no significant association between HHI and ranking of six large nonprofits. However, later the author states that there is little variation in the HHI of the sample organizations. The lack of variation implies that both high- and lower-ranked organizations have similar investment diversity. The conclusion is that diversifying does not appear to lead to a high or low ranking, and that results &#x201c;suggest that investment professionals should avoid overly concentrating investments.&#x201d; I don&#x2019;t think the results allow this conclusion. You show that the organizations in your sample (which are all in the top 200 internationally) do, in fact, diversify, and that this diversity is similar for those at the top of the ranking and those further down the list. What you cannot observe is whether concentrating investments would improve rankings for those at the bottom or hurt the rankings of those at the top. A more appropriate comparison (to reach your conclusion) would be a look at organizations that are not in the top 200 to see if their investments are more or less concentrated.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> I think the author can address these questions/concerns with a little more explanation of the choice of measures.</p>
            <p>Is the work clearly and accurately presented and does it cite the current literature?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>If applicable, is the statistical analysis and its interpretation appropriate?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Are all the source data underlying the results available to ensure full reproducibility?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Is the study design appropriate and is the work technically sound?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the results?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Are sufficient details of methods and analysis provided to allow replication by others?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>Nonprofit accounting research using archival reports and disclosures.</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard, however I have significant reservations, as outlined above.</p>
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                        <name>
                            <surname>Mizutani</surname>
                            <given-names>Fuminobu</given-names>
                        </name>
                        <aff>Business Administration, Kanto Gakuin University, Yokohama, Japan</aff>
                    </contrib>
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                    <fn fn-type="conflict">
                        <p>
                            <bold>Competing interests: </bold>I am this manuscript's author.</p>
                    </fn>
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                <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                    <day>4</day>
                    <month>8</month>
                    <year>2023</year>
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            <body>
                <p>Thank you very much for your valuable reviewing. I will revise this manuscript as soon as possible.</p>
            </body>
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                    <contrib contrib-type="author">
                        <name>
                            <surname>Mizutani</surname>
                            <given-names>Fuminobu</given-names>
                        </name>
                        <aff>Business Administration, Kanto Gakuin University, Yokohama, Japan</aff>
                    </contrib>
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                <author-notes>
                    <fn fn-type="conflict">
                        <p>
                            <bold>Competing interests: </bold>NA</p>
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                <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                    <day>20</day>
                    <month>10</month>
                    <year>2023</year>
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            <body>
                <p>Thank you very much for your comments. Your comments were helpful for the revision.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> Paragraph 1</p>
                <p> This paper&#x2019;s title was changed. This paper&#x2019;s focus moved from SROI to social impact in general.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> Paragraph 2</p>
                <p> More explanations of the data source were added in &#x201c;methods&#x201d;.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> Paragraph3</p>
                <p> Additional data were collected and another statistical analysis was conducted.</p>
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                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 1</article-title>
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                <contrib contrib-type="author">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Bellucci</surname>
                        <given-names>Marco</given-names>
                    </name>
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                    <role>Referee</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0002-4014-4418</uri>
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                <aff id="r148079a1">
                    <label>1</label>Department of Economics and Management, University of Florence, Florence, Italy</aff>
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                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
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                <day>1</day>
                <month>9</month>
                <year>2022</year>
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            <p>Thanks for the opportunity to read and review this study that investigates "whether it is desirable for executives and contributors of NFPs to build a portfolio rather than maximize the expected SROI ratio". While the topic is relevant and interesting, I believe the present version of this study would benefit from several revisions to the literature review, research design and discussion of contributions. The subject of the paper is more than relevant nowadays, but, in my view, the study also presents an important set of shortcomings that hampers, in this present version, its potential to contribute to the literature.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> From a constructive perspective, the authors could consider the following suggestions. 
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                        <p>I have several concerns about the study's premises. The calculation of an SROI ratio and the construction of a portfolio are not incompatible avenues, and they are not alternatives to each other. This is especially true if we consider the usefulness of SROI as a planning and control tool. The paper is highly focused on the calculation of the SROI ratio and the selection of projects with a higher value. Still, in this way, it oversees how an organization can use the process behind the SROI methodology to foster social impact.</p>
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                        <p>The literature review is scarce and ignores recent contributions on this topic. Moreover, the SROI methodology, the Markowitz model, and the HHI are not properly presented nor framed in the context of NFPs.</p>
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                        <p>It is not completely clear how the author built the sample for this study, and the author should address how the criteria behind the report on the "200 Best SGOs" could affect his results. Moreover, the paper uses many terms (NGOs, NFPs, SGOs, associations) that refer to different organizations in the third sector. Furthermore, the study is based on six organizations, and this may not be enough to provide significant findings.</p>
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                        <p>The author sometimes refers to "an optimal portfolio of donations". For whom? For the donor organization? For the beneficiaries? For the society at large? I fear this utilitarian perspective may neglect the true significance of social impact. I think the author should better clarify the contribution of this study in terms of how it can improve the selection of projects to be financed and, thus, their social impact.</p>
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                        <p>In this version, the author does not clearly explain how he calculated the HHI and how this financial measure of market concentration can be useful to explain the choice of an "optimal portfolio" for nonprofit donors.</p>
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                        <p>The absence of a theoretical framework led to a very brief and underwhelming discussion of results.</p>
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                        <p>The author writes that "These findings suggest that skillful and rational NFP executives build a portfolio of investments based on their activities. Similarly, from the statistical analysis, it can be assumed that building a portfolio of donations would benefit contributors as well". However, in the present version, I do not see how the results can support this conclusion; moreover, it is difficult to know the contribution to the literature on SROI and social impact evaluation.</p>
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            <p> In general, I believe that author would need to consider deeply revising their study, particularly concerning the theoretical and managerial contribution and the research premises. I do realize that I have been critical throughout this review, but I also truly hope this feedback can help the authors to reconsider their conceptual approach to this interesting research strand.</p>
            <p>Is the work clearly and accurately presented and does it cite the current literature?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>If applicable, is the statistical analysis and its interpretation appropriate?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Are all the source data underlying the results available to ensure full reproducibility?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Is the study design appropriate and is the work technically sound?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the results?</p>
            <p>No</p>
            <p>Are sufficient details of methods and analysis provided to allow replication by others?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>Accounting</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to state that I do not consider it to be of an acceptable scientific standard, for reasons outlined above.</p>
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                    <contrib contrib-type="author">
                        <name>
                            <surname>Mizutani</surname>
                            <given-names>Fuminobu</given-names>
                        </name>
                        <aff>Business Administration, Kanto Gakuin University, Yokohama, Japan</aff>
                    </contrib>
                </contrib-group>
                <author-notes>
                    <fn fn-type="conflict">
                        <p>
                            <bold>Competing interests: </bold>N/A</p>
                    </fn>
                </author-notes>
                <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                    <day>2</day>
                    <month>9</month>
                    <year>2022</year>
                </pub-date>
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            <body>
                <p>Thank you very much for your report. I would like to revise my manuscript after receiving other reviewers' comments.</p>
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        </sub-article>
        <sub-article article-type="response" id="comment10426-148079">
            <front-stub>
                <contrib-group>
                    <contrib contrib-type="author">
                        <name>
                            <surname>Mizutani</surname>
                            <given-names>Fuminobu</given-names>
                        </name>
                        <aff>Business Administration, Kanto Gakuin University, Yokohama, Japan</aff>
                    </contrib>
                </contrib-group>
                <author-notes>
                    <fn fn-type="conflict">
                        <p>
                            <bold>Competing interests: </bold>NA</p>
                    </fn>
                </author-notes>
                <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                    <day>20</day>
                    <month>10</month>
                    <year>2023</year>
                </pub-date>
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            <body>
                <p>Thank you very much for your comments. Your comments were helpful for the revision.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 1. This paper&#x2019;s focus moved from SROI to social impact in general.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 2. The section of literature review was revised to explain SROI, Markowitz model, and HHI in the context of NFPs.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 3. The direct explanation of sampling is in paragraph 3 of &#x201c;Methods&#x201d; and the sampling of part two made the sampling criteria clearer.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 4. If the limitation is necessary, for contributors who are principles as explained in &#x201c;Introduction&#x201d;.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 5. HHI was calculated by a spreadsheet as written in &#x201c;Methods&#x201d;. Why optimal was explained through Buchak (2023).</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 6. Some sentences were added to &#x201c;Discussion&#x201d;.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 7. Additional data were collected and another statistical analysis were conducted.</p>
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