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            <issn pub-type="epub">2046-1402</issn>
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                <publisher-name>F1000 Research Limited</publisher-name>
                <publisher-loc>London, UK</publisher-loc>
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            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.12688/f1000research.138765.1</article-id>
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                    <subject>Study Protocol</subject>
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                    <subject>Articles</subject>
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            <title-group>
                <article-title>Study protocol for supplementation of single high dose Vitamin D in deficient critically ill children and assessment of their short-term outcome: An open label randomized control trial</article-title>
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                    <fn>
                        <p>[version 1; peer review: 1 approved with reservations, 1 not approved]</p>
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            <contrib-group>
                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="yes">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Vagha</surname>
                        <given-names>Keta</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Data Curation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Methodology</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Project Administration</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Original Draft Preparation</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0001-8262-6346</uri>
                    <xref ref-type="corresp" rid="c1">a</xref>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a1">1</xref>
                </contrib>
                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="no">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Lohiya</surname>
                        <given-names>Sham</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Conceptualization</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Review &amp; Editing</role>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a1">1</xref>
                </contrib>
                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="no">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Vagha</surname>
                        <given-names>Jayant</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Review &amp; Editing</role>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a1">1</xref>
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                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="no">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Vagha</surname>
                        <given-names>Sunita</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Supervision</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Review &amp; Editing</role>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a1">1</xref>
                </contrib>
                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="no">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Taksande</surname>
                        <given-names>Amar</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Review &amp; Editing</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0003-3097-7405</uri>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a1">1</xref>
                </contrib>
                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="no">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Chaudhary</surname>
                        <given-names>Richa</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Review &amp; Editing</role>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a1">1</xref>
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                <aff id="a1">
                    <label>1</label>Pediatrics, Jawaharlal Nehru Medical College, Wardha, Maharashtra, 442001, India</aff>
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            <author-notes>
                <corresp id="c1">
                    <label>a</label>
                    <email xlink:href="mailto:keta.pediatrics@dmiher.edu.in">keta.pediatrics@dmiher.edu.in</email>
                </corresp>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                </fn>
            </author-notes>
            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>29</day>
                <month>8</month>
                <year>2023</year>
            </pub-date>
            <pub-date pub-type="collection">
                <year>2023</year>
            </pub-date>
            <volume>12</volume>
            <elocation-id>1047</elocation-id>
            <history>
                <date date-type="accepted">
                    <day>27</day>
                    <month>6</month>
                    <year>2023</year>
                </date>
            </history>
            <permissions>
                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2023 Vagha K et al.</copyright-statement>
                <copyright-year>2023</copyright-year>
                <license xlink:href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/">
                    <license-p>This is an open access article distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution Licence, which permits unrestricted use, distribution, and reproduction in any medium, provided the original work is properly cited.</license-p>
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            <abstract>
                <p>Vitamin D is a fat-soluble vitamin and is classically considered to play a major role in bone metabolism and maintaining Calcium and phosphorus equilibrium. With progressing research, other roles of Vitamin D are surfacing. The pleotropic functions of Vitamin D regulate cell proliferation, differentiation, apoptosis, and angiogenesis. In critically ill children, Vitamin D deficiency is associated with poor outcomes in the form of increased PICU stay, increased duration of mechanical ventilation, higher rate of Ventilator Associated Pneumonias, increased incidence of sepsis, higher intensive care scores and increased incidence of end organ dysfunction. With this background, we aim to conduct an open label Randomized Control Trial to study the short-term outcome of Vitamin D deficient critically ill children after supplementation of a single high dose oral Vitamin D. This will be an open label randomized control trial conducted at a tertiary care hospital in central India. Children aged 1 month to 18 years, admitted in the pediatric intensive care unit with Serum Vitamin D level less than 20 ng/dL will be the study group. These children will be randomized into two groups as per the computer-generated randomization. Group A will receive standard treatment protocol with 10,000 IU/Kg to 400,000 IU (maximum) Vitamin D via mouth or nasogastric tube, whereas Group B will receive standard treatment protocol. Urinary calcium-creatinine ratio will be done on day 3 in Group A to check for hypervitaminosis D. The outcome of both the groups will be assessed. All the data will be added to a Microsoft Excel sheet. Results and interpretation will be determined on the basis of the obtained observation.</p>
                <p>
                    <bold>Trial registration:</bold> CTRI/2022/10/046556.</p>
            </abstract>
            <kwd-group kwd-group-type="author">
                <kwd>Vitamin D</kwd>
                <kwd>Steroid hormone</kwd>
                <kwd>Critically ill children</kwd>
                <kwd>study protocol</kwd>
                <kwd>Intensive care</kwd>
            </kwd-group>
            <funding-group>
                <award-group id="fund-1">
                    <funding-source>Datta Meghe Institute of Higher Education and Research</funding-source>
                    <award-id>DMIHER(DU)R&amp;D/2022/511</award-id>
                </award-group>
                <funding-statement>Funding has been received from the Research and Development Department, Datta Meghe Institute of Higher Education and Research (DMIHER(DU) R&amp;D/2022/511).</funding-statement>
                <funding-statement>
                    <italic>The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.</italic>
                </funding-statement>
            </funding-group>
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        <sec id="sec1" sec-type="intro">
            <title>Introduction</title>
            <p>Vitamin D is a fat-soluble vitamin and is classically considered to play a major role in bone metabolism and maintaining calcium and phosphorus equilibrium.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref1">1</xref>
                </sup> With progressing research, other roles of Vitamin D are surfacing. This has been driven by the presence of Vitamin D receptors for cholecalciferol on most body tissues.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref2">2</xref>
                </sup> The pleotropic functions of Vitamin D include regulation of expression of genes in many organs like immune cells, brain, colon, kidneys etc. which are of importance in critically ill children. These added functions of Vitamin D regulate cell proliferation, differentiation, apoptosis, and angiogenesis.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref3">3</xref>
                </sup> These non-skeletal actions of vitamin D are similar to that of steroid hormones therefore Vitamin D is considered equivalent to a steroid hormone than just a vitamin.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref4">4</xref>
                </sup> The majority of Vitamin D requirement is fulfilled by exposure to sunlight and lesser amount is obtained through diet. Despite sufficient sunlight in India, prevalence of Vitamin D deficiency is accounted to be 50% of critically ill children.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref5">5</xref>
                </sup> In critically ill children, Vitamin D deficiency is associated with poor outcome in form of increased PICU stay, increased duration of mechanical ventilation, higher rate of Ventilator Associated Pneumonias, increased incidence of sepsis, higher intensive care scores and increased incidence of end organ dysfunction.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref5">5</xref>
                </sup>
                <sup>&#x2013;</sup>
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref10">10</xref>
                </sup>
            </p>
            <p>There have been many studies conducted to determine the outcome of critically ill Vitamin D deficient children but there is a sparse data about the outcome of these children after supplementation of Vitamin D therefore we wish to take up this study. There are multiple dosing regimens and routes of administration of Vitamin D. In most of the studies, cholecalciferol was used from 200 to 540,000 IU in oral or intramuscular injection form either in single or multiple doses. The daily supplementation of Vitamin D takes months to replenish the body stores but there is a need of its rapid optimization in critically children if we desire its immunomodulatory function.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref11">11</xref>
                </sup> A systematic review and meta-analysis conducted by Mc Nally 
                <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> studied more than one hundred research studies, from which it was inferred that Vitamin D at a dose of 10,000 IU/Kg to maximum up to 400,000 IU is associated with no adverse effects. Therefore in our study we will be using this dosing regimen.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref12">12</xref>
                </sup> With this background, we aim to conduct an open label Randomized Control Trial to study the short-term outcome of Vitamin D deficient critically ill children after supplementation of a single high dose oral Vitamin D.</p>
            <sec id="sec2">
                <title>Objectives</title>
                <p>The main objective of this study is to assess the short-term outcome of Vitamin D deficient critically ill children after supplementation of single high dose oral Vitamin D. Secondly, to determine the prevalence of Vitamin D deficiency in critically ill children in our area (Central India) and lastly, to assess the effect of single high dose oral Vitamin D supplementation on the immediate outcome.</p>
            </sec>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec3" sec-type="methods">
            <title>Methods</title>
            <sec id="sec4">
                <title>Research questions</title>
                <p>
                    <list list-type="order">
                        <list-item>
                            <label>1.</label>
                            <p>Can supplementation of single dose Vitamin D orally, improve the short term outcome in critically ill children?</p>
                        </list-item>
                        <list-item>
                            <label>2.</label>
                            <p>What is the prevalence of Vitamin-D deficiency in critically ill children in our area (Central India).</p>
                        </list-item>
                        <list-item>
                            <label>3.</label>
                            <p>What is the effect of single high dose oral Vitamin D supplementation on the immediate outcome?</p>
                        </list-item>
                    </list>
                </p>
            </sec>
            <sec id="sec5">
                <title>Study design</title>
                <p>This will be an open-label randomized control trial. This study will be conducted at Acharya Vinoba Bhave Rural Hospital, a 1525 bedded tertiary care hospital located at Sawangi (Meghe), Wardha, Maharashtra in the duration of three years with total sample size of 
                    <bold>100</bold>. The Insititutional Ethics Committee clearance has been obtained with reference number 
                    <bold>DMIMS (DU)/IEC/2022/207</bold>. This open label randomized control trial is also registered on the National Clinical Trial registration portal with reference number - 
                    <bold>CTRI/2022/10/046556</bold>.</p>
            </sec>
            <sec id="sec6">
                <title>Inclusion criteria</title>
                <p>Children aged 1 month to 18 years, admitted in the Pediatric Intensive care unit with Serum Vitamin D level less than 20 ng/dL will be included in this study.</p>
            </sec>
            <sec id="sec7">
                <title>Exclusion criteria</title>
                <p>The following will be excluded from the study.
                    <list list-type="order">
                        <list-item>
                            <label>1.</label>
                            <p>All the cases of Rickets (already diagnosed or diagnosed on this admission)</p>
                        </list-item>
                        <list-item>
                            <label>2.</label>
                            <p>Patients admitted in the PICU for monitoring purpose like post operative cases, for performance of a procedure like lumbar puncture, bone marrow aspiration etc.</p>
                        </list-item>
                        <list-item>
                            <label>3.</label>
                            <p>Patients who have received Vitamin D supplementation in the last 30 days.</p>
                        </list-item>
                        <list-item>
                            <label>4.</label>
                            <p>Patients with abdominal pathology.</p>
                        </list-item>
                        <list-item>
                            <label>5.</label>
                            <p>Patients requiring Intensive Care Unit stay less than 24 hours.</p>
                        </list-item>
                    </list>
                </p>
                <p>
                    <bold>Participants</bold>: Children aged 1 month to 18 years, admitted in the Pediatric Intensive care unit with Serum Vitamin D level less than 20 ng/dL.</p>
                <p>
                    <bold>Intervention</bold>: Single high dose Vitamin-D orally or via nasogastric tube.</p>
                <p>
                    <bold>Comparison</bold>: No supplementation of Vitamin-D.</p>
                <p>
                    <bold>Outcome:</bold> Short term outcome in form of number of days of Paediatric Intensive Care Unit stay, duration of mechanical ventilation, occurrence of Hospital acquired infection like Ventilator Associated Pneumonia and Central Line Associated Blood Stream Infection, Acute Kidney Injury, Multiorgan dysfunction, maximum Vasoactive-Inotrope Score and mortality.</p>
                <p>All the children admitted in the PICU will be screened using exclusion/inclusion criteria. After excluding those children, the Serum Vitamin D level of the study group will be measured in the hospital laboratory. Children with serum Vitamin D level less than 20 ng/dL will be included in the study. Children included in the study will undergo computer generated randomization into two groups: Group A receiving the Standard treatment protocol along with 10,000 IU/kg to maximum up to 4,00,000 IU single dose Vitamin D via mouth or through the nasogastric tube and Group B receiving the Standard treatment protocol. The participants will be registered after obtaining the written parental consent. Randomization will be carried out using the WINPEPI software, and the patients will be allocated a case number and randomized. All the children will be divided equally between the experimental or research group (Group A) and the control group (Group B).</p>
                <p>Nutritional status assessment in both the groups will be done as per WHO criteria in which wasting is defined as weight for height (gender specific) to be less than -2 standard deviation on the growth chart and stunting is defined as height for age (gender specific) to be less than -2 standard deviation on the growth chart. The baseline blood investigations done in critically ill children like Complete Blood Count, Liver Function Test, Kidney Function Test and Serum Lactate levels, coagulation profile along with inflammatory markers such as C-Reactive Protein and Lactic Dehydrogenase will be sent on Day 0 (Day of admission) and Day 3 of admission of both the groups (before and after administration of Vitamin D in Group B). Urinary calcium-creatinine ratio will be done on day 3 in Group A to check for hypervitaminosis D. The multiorgan dysfunction will be assessed by Pediatric Logistic Organ Dysfunction Logistic- 2 scoring system on day 0 and day 3. The magnitude of requirement of ionotropic support will be assessed by Vasoactive-Ionotropic Score, the maximum score will be considered for comparison in both the groups. Acute Kidney Injury will be defined based on Urine Output and serum creatinine level as per Pediatric RIFLE criteria.</p>
                <p>The outcome of both the groups in form of number of days of Paediatric Intensive Care Unit stay, duration of mechanical ventilation, occurrence of Hospital acquired infection like Ventilator Associated Pneumonia and Central Line Associated Blood Stream Infection, Acute Kidney Injury, Multiorgan dysfunction, maximum Vasoactive-Inotrope Score and mortality will be noted and compared in both the groups. End of the study will be considered at the day of discharge or mortality of the patient. Group B will receive the therapeutic dose of Vitamin D at the end of the study. All the data will be added to a Microsfot Excel spreadsheet. Results and interpretation will be determined on the basis of the obtained observation. The methodology is been depicted in a flowchart in 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1</xref>.</p>
                <fig fig-type="figure" id="f1" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                    <label>Figure 1. </label>
                    <caption>
                        <title>Flowchart depicting the methodology of the proposed study.</title>
                    </caption>
                    <graphic id="gr1" orientation="portrait" position="float" xlink:href="https://f1000research-files.f1000.com/manuscripts/151991/ee6ed8c6-2c1f-4cf5-bed2-a5ee627b0c2c_figure1.gif"/>
                </fig>
            </sec>
            <sec id="sec8">
                <title>Statistical analysis</title>
                <p>STATA 12 software will be used to analyse data. The graphs will be done using Microsoft Excel 2007. Numerical data will be summarized using means and standard deviations. The baseline measures will be compared using the paired-samples, two-sided t- test. PeLOd 2 scores and VIS across groups will be compared using the analysis of variance (ANOVA) test. Scheffe&#x2019;s test will be used for post-hoc comparison to find out the presence of any significant differences between groups. P values &lt;0.05 will be considered significant.</p>
            </sec>
            <sec id="sec9">
                <title>Study status</title>
                <p>The recruitment of the children began on 01 April 2023. As of publication, 16 patients have been included and randomized into Group A and Group B.</p>
            </sec>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec10" sec-type="discussion">
            <title>Discussion</title>
            <p>In literature, benefits of Vitamin D as a fat soluble vitamin in calcium and bone metabolism is well known but its pleotropic functions and its actions like a steroid hormone are lesser known. With recent research studies, these lesser known functions of Vitamin D are becoming evident. Vitamin D has a immunomodulatory function as it helps in regulating the cellular proliferation, differentiation, apoptosis and angiogenesis which can be crucial in a critically ill child. There have been many studies conducted to determine the outcome of Vitamin D deficient critically ill children but the outcome of these children on supplementation of Vitamin D is less studied upon.</p>
            <p>Yung Wang 
                <italic toggle="yes">et al</italic>.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref13">13</xref>
                </sup> conducted a study with 150,000 IU supplementation of Vitamin D in the study group of Vitamin D deficient septic children and found that the group with supplementation had a better outcome. El Gendy 
                <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic>
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref14">14</xref>
                </sup> had a conducted a study like Yung Wang 
                <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> where the study group was Vitamin D deficient septic children. Labib 
                <italic toggle="yes">et al.,</italic>
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref15">15</xref>
                </sup> studied the outcome of supplementation of Vitamin D in deficient children with Pneumonia. These studies have categorised their study group to one particular ailment. But we want to include all the Vitamin D deficient critically ill children in our study and no one particular ailment. This is the research gap. We wish to determine the outcome in all the critically ill children irrespective of their illness.</p>
            <p>Therefore, we have taken up this study to determine the outcome in Vitamin D deficient critically ill children after its supplementation. The supplements of Vitamin D are easily available, well tolerated and cost effective therefore this can be a novel addition to our Paediatric Intensive Care unit protocol which can improve the short term outcome of these children.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec11">
            <title>Ethics approval and consent to participate</title>
            <p>The institutional ethics committee has granted the permission to conduct the study with reference number - 
                <bold>DMIMS (DU)/IEC/2022/207.</bold> Consent will be obtained from all the participants in the local language while enrolling them in the study.</p>
        </sec>
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        <sec id="sec14" sec-type="data-availability">
            <title>Data availability</title>
            <p>No data are associated with this article.</p>
        </sec>
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    <sub-article article-type="reviewer-report" id="report205666">
        <front-stub>
            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.5256/f1000research.151991.r205666</article-id>
            <title-group>
                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 1</article-title>
            </title-group>
            <contrib-group>
                <contrib contrib-type="author">
                    <name>
                        <surname>McNally</surname>
                        <given-names>Dayre</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="r205666a1">1</xref>
                    <role>Referee</role>
                </contrib>
                <aff id="r205666a1">
                    <label>1</label>University of Ottawa, Ottawa, Canada</aff>
            </contrib-group>
            <author-notes>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>I am running a similar trial in Canada, a phase III double blind placebo controlled study that intends to recruit 766 patients. We are presently at 380.</p>
                </fn>
            </author-notes>
            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>5</day>
                <month>10</month>
                <year>2023</year>
            </pub-date>
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                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2023 McNally D</copyright-statement>
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        <body>
            <p>This study will add value to the field. Congrats to the team for identifying this question and seeking to help provide an answer.&#x00a0;</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> However, there &#x00a0;are aspects of the report that warrant clarification. See comments below. In particular be clear what the primary clinical outcome will be AND how the sample size was calculated. I also did not follow the rationale for some of the statistical plan.&#x00a0;</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> Abstract 
                <list list-type="bullet">
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Capitalization on words and phrases (was the intention to then provide an acronym)</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Make it more clear when you refer to vitamin D you are talking about cholecalciferol</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Urine calcium:creatinine levels are a poor marker/indicator of hypervitaminosis. Multiple pediatric and adult studies have not shown a relationship between receipt of high dose vitamin D and urine calcium levels. More related to critical illness and Lasix</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>What does &#x201c;the outcome of both groups will be assessed&#x201d; mean. What is the primary?</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>No need to mention Microsoft excel sheet in abstract.</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Abstract should indicate proposed sample size</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>The line &#x201c;Results and interpretation will be determined on the basis of the obtained observation.&#x201d; Is not sufficiently clear. Remove or improve</p>
                    </list-item>
                </list> Introduction 
                <list list-type="bullet">
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Remove etc from the line&#x201d; The pleotropic functions of Vitamin D include regulation of expression of genes in many organs like immune cells, brain, colon, kidneys etc&#x201d;</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Improve on the line:&#x201d; These non-skeletal actions of vitamin D are similar to that of steroid hormones therefore Vitamin D is considered equivalent to a steroid hormone than just a vitamin&#x201d;</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>What is meant by &#x201c;higher intensive care scores&#x00a0;&#x201c;. Are you referring to PRISM, PIM etc? if so, consider providing examples</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Agree with the point of the sentence, but it needs improvement: &#x201c;There have been many studies conducted to determine the outcome of critically ill Vitamin D deficient children but there is a sparse data about the outcome of these children after supplementation of Vitamin D therefore we wish to take up this study. &#x201c; consider changing to state sparse data on whether modifying vitamin D status, influences outcome. Remove the comment about &#x201c;we wish to take up&#x201d;</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Clarify two points in the line: &#x201c;A systematic review and meta-analysis conducted by Mc Nally&#x00a0;
                            <italic>et al.</italic>&#x00a0;studied more than one hundred research studies, from which it was inferred that Vitamin D at a dose of 10,000 IU/Kg to maximum up to 400,000 IU is associated with no adverse effects.&#x201d;. These were 100 interventional trials, and that the level would raise levels into the high normal range in 2-3 days</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Find a way to combine the following two sentences: Therefore in our study we will be using this dosing regimen.
                            <sup>
                                <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://f1000research.com/my/referee/report/205666#ref12">12</ext-link>
                            </sup>&#x00a0;With this background, we aim to conduct an open label Randomized Control Trial to study the short-term outcome of Vitamin D deficient critically ill children after supplementation of a single high dose oral Vitamin D.</p>
                    </list-item>
                </list> Methods 
                <list list-type="bullet">
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Are there three objectives or two? &#x201c;The main objective of this study is to assess the short-term outcome of Vitamin D deficient critically ill children after supplementation of single high dose oral Vitamin D. Secondly, to determine the prevalence of Vitamin D deficiency in critically ill children in our area (Central India) and lastly, to assess the effect of single high dose oral Vitamin D supplementation on the immediate outcome.&#x201d; 
                            <list list-type="bullet">
                                <list-item>
                                    <p>Determine prevalence</p>
                                </list-item>
                                <list-item>
                                    <p>Determine whether supplementation influences short term outcome.</p>
                                </list-item>
                            </list> </p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>It is customary to be more clear what the primary outcome measure is for objective</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Be more clear the study is being conducted in India (say the country)</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Be more clear the vitamin D level you are referring to is 25 hydroxyvitamin D</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Can you be more clear what type of dosing you are referring to when you say: &#x201c;Patients who have received Vitamin D supplementation in the last 30 days.&#x201d; Also I do not see that it matters if they received vitamin D in the past, if they are vitamin D deficient at time of PICU admission</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Can you clarify whether it would be unacceptable for them to receive ANY vitamin D. In our setting it would be unacceptable for us to not allow ANY vitamin D supplementation as it is standard of care to receive 400-600 IU/day (which takes a month or more to raise levels)</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Outcome: While it would usual for a study to report on multiple outcomes, it is unusual for a study not to be clear on a primary, secondary and then a set a tertiary outcomes.</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Please fix the error in the sentence: &#x00a0;Group A receiving the Standard treatment protocol along with 10,000 IU/kg to maximum up to 4,00,000 IU single</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>As some of the patient are teenage, and the criteria do not clearly make it evident patients are intubated and/or incapacitated should consent and assent be considered as well</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Provide the reference or citation for the line: &#x201c;Nutritional status assessment in both the groups will be done as per WHO criteria in which wasting is defined as weight for height (gender specific) to be less than -2 standard deviation on the growth chart and stunting is defined as height for age (gender specific) to be less than -2 standard deviation on the growth chart&#x201d;</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Please re-evaluate how the dates of blood collection are described. Is day zero the day of randomization or admission? Is day 3, day 3 of admission or after receipt of drug</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>In the description of group B, can it made be very clear whether they will receive a placebo or not.</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Hypervitaminosis is usually measured using 25OHD. There is no clearly established threshold for definition</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>When describing scores and states such as AKI and Inotrope score, provide citations so the reader can know precisely how you will approach measurement</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>&#x201c;End of the study will be considered at the day of discharge or mortality of the patient&#x201d; Do you mean PICU or hospital?</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Again no need to mention excel</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>Main of your outcomes will NOT be normally distributed and reporting as means and analyzing using t test will not be appropriate</p>
                    </list-item>
                    <list-item>
                        <p>I don&#x2019;t understand the need for ANOVA in this two arm study. Are there three or more times points for analysis? Same re: Scheffe&#x2019;s test</p>
                    </list-item>
                </list> Discussion 
                <list list-type="bullet">
                    <list-item>
                        <p>In the discussion there is a paragraph: &#x201c;Yung Wang&#x00a0;
                            <italic>et al</italic>.
                            <sup>
                                <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://f1000research.com/my/referee/report/205666#ref13">13</ext-link>
                            </sup>&#x00a0;conducted a study with 150,000 IU supplementation of Vitamin D in the study group of Vitamin D deficient septic children and found that the group with supplementation had a better outcome. El Gendy&#x00a0;
                            <italic>et al.</italic>
                            <sup>
                                <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://f1000research.com/my/referee/report/205666#ref14">14</ext-link>
                            </sup>&#x00a0;had a conducted a study like Yung Wang&#x00a0;
                            <italic>et al.</italic>&#x00a0;where the study group was Vitamin D deficient septic children. Labib&#x00a0;
                            <italic>et al.,</italic>
                            <sup>
                                <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://f1000research.com/my/referee/report/205666#ref15">15</ext-link>
                            </sup>&#x00a0;studied the outcome of supplementation of Vitamin D in deficient children with Pneumonia.&#x201d; It is not clear which studies are interventional and which are observational. You are also missing details on the citation for the Labib study.</p>
                    </list-item>
                </list>
            </p>
            <p>Is the study design appropriate for the research question?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Is the rationale for, and objectives of, the study clearly described?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Are sufficient details of the methods provided to allow replication by others?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Are the datasets clearly presented in a useable and accessible format?</p>
            <p>Not applicable</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>15 years of clinical trial experience including vitamin D supplementation in PICU</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard, however I have significant reservations, as outlined above.</p>
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        <sub-article article-type="response" id="comment11242-205666">
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                <contrib-group>
                    <contrib contrib-type="author">
                        <name>
                            <surname>Vagha</surname>
                            <given-names>Keta</given-names>
                        </name>
                        <aff>Pediatrics, Jawaharlal Nehru Medical College, Sawangi (Meghe), Wardha, Maharashtra, India</aff>
                    </contrib>
                </contrib-group>
                <author-notes>
                    <fn fn-type="conflict">
                        <p>
                            <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                    </fn>
                </author-notes>
                <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                    <day>9</day>
                    <month>3</month>
                    <year>2024</year>
                </pub-date>
            </front-stub>
            <body>
                <p>I wish to express my sincere gratitude for your thoughtful review of the manuscript. Rest assured, I highly value your insights, and I am committed to incorporating all of your corrections diligently. The necessary adjustments will be made, and I am eager to resubmit the refined manuscript promptly. Thank you once again for your invaluable feedback.</p>
            </body>
        </sub-article>
    </sub-article>
    <sub-article article-type="reviewer-report" id="report202369">
        <front-stub>
            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.5256/f1000research.151991.r202369</article-id>
            <title-group>
                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 1</article-title>
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            <contrib-group>
                <contrib contrib-type="author">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Jagzape</surname>
                        <given-names>Tushar</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="r202369a1">1</xref>
                    <role>Referee</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0002-4462-4494</uri>
                </contrib>
                <aff id="r202369a1">
                    <label>1</label>Department of Pediatrics, All India Institute of Medical Sciences (AIIMS), Raipur, Chhattisgarh, India</aff>
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            <author-notes>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                </fn>
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            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>20</day>
                <month>9</month>
                <year>2023</year>
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                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2023 Jagzape T</copyright-statement>
                <copyright-year>2023</copyright-year>
                <license xlink:href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/">
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            <p>The researchers are doing a randomized controlled trial (open label) to study the effect of single high dose of vitamin D in vitamin D deficient children admitted to the Pediatric intensive care unit.&#x00a0;</p>
            <p> Following are my observations:&#x00a0; 
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                        <p>The authors have chosen a very wide age range (1 month to 18 years). The cause of morbidity and morbidity in different age groups is different. Hence the researchers should at least use stratified sampling or quota sampling in order to avoid skewed data.&#x00a0;</p>
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                        <p>The authors have not specified any severity of the illness, except that the patient should be in the ICU for more than 24 hours and not pre-operatively or post operatively. It would be better if a specific cut off of pSOFA score or PeLOd2 scores are used for inclusion and exclusion criteria.&#x00a0;</p>
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                        <p>Sample size calculation is not mentioned. Why only 100 patients are being studied?</p>
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                        <p>Better to use block randomization.&#x00a0;</p>
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                        <p>The data analysis plan does not mention if it would be a per protocol analysis or intention to treat analysis.&#x00a0;</p>
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                        <p>The most important flaw in the study plan is withholding Vitamin D supplementation in the control group. At one place it has also been mentioned that the other group will be supplemented vitamin D at the end of the study (which is either discharge or death). It is ethically not correct to deny treatment, when it is available just for the research purpose.&#x00a0;</p>
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            <p>Is the study design appropriate for the research question?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Is the rationale for, and objectives of, the study clearly described?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Are sufficient details of the methods provided to allow replication by others?</p>
            <p>No</p>
            <p>Are the datasets clearly presented in a useable and accessible format?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>General Pediatrics, Ethics, Medical education</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to state that I do not consider it to be of an acceptable scientific standard, for reasons outlined above.</p>
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        <sub-article article-type="response" id="comment11244-202369">
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                        <name>
                            <surname>Vagha</surname>
                            <given-names>Keta</given-names>
                        </name>
                        <aff>Pediatrics, Jawaharlal Nehru Medical College, Sawangi (Meghe), Wardha, Maharashtra, India</aff>
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                        <p>
                            <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
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                </author-notes>
                <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                    <day>9</day>
                    <month>3</month>
                    <year>2024</year>
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                <p>I would like to express my sincere appreciation for your thoughtful review of the manuscript. I would like to address a few misunderstandings regarding the drafting of the manuscript:</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 1. Regarding the impact of age on the modulation of immunity by Vitamin D at the cellular level, it is important to note that Vitamin D plays a significant role in cellular-level modulation across various diseases, rendering the age factor less influential. This aspect has been elucidated in the manuscript.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 2. The sample size calculation was initially included in previous drafts but was subsequently edited out by preliminary editors. I acknowledge this oversight and assure you that it will be reinstated in the revised version.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 3. Notably, the sampling technique has been refined and enhanced in the updated version of the manuscript.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> 4. Your ethical concern about the absence of vitamin D supplementation in the control group has been duly addressed. In the revised manuscript, a regular dose of vitamin D has been incorporated, assuaging the previously raised ethical concern.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> While it is disheartening that the manuscript was rejected due to misinterpretations, I acknowledge your genuine concerns. I regret any confusion and wish to highlight that the intent is not to challenge the decision but to offer clarifications and improvements.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> I understand your perspective on publishing the study protocol to solicit feedback from esteemed faculty. I appreciate your suggestion and am open to exploring such avenues in the future. Nevertheless, I am grateful for the time and consideration you have dedicated to the manuscript review. Thank you for your valuable insights, and I am committed to addressing the concerns raised in the revised submission.</p>
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