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            <issn pub-type="epub">2046-1402</issn>
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                <publisher-name>F1000 Research Limited</publisher-name>
                <publisher-loc>London, UK</publisher-loc>
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            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.12688/f1000research.149948.1</article-id>
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                    <subject>Research Article</subject>
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                <article-title>A long tail of truth and beauty: A zigzag pattern of feather formation determines the symmetry, complexity, and beauty of the peacock&#x2019;s tail</article-title>
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                        <p>[version 1; peer review: 2 approved with reservations]</p>
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                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="yes">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Singh</surname>
                        <given-names>Rama</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Conceptualization</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Data Curation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Formal Analysis</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Funding Acquisition</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Investigation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Methodology</role>
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                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Software</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Supervision</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Validation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Visualization</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Original Draft Preparation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Review &amp; Editing</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0002-5407-537X</uri>
                    <xref ref-type="corresp" rid="c1">a</xref>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a1">1</xref>
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                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="no">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Jagadeeshan</surname>
                        <given-names>Santosh</given-names>
                    </name>
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                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0002-4285-9281</uri>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a1">1</xref>
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                <aff id="a1">
                    <label>1</label>Biology, McMaster University, Hamilton, Ontario, L8S 4A9, Canada</aff>
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            <author-notes>
                <corresp id="c1">
                    <label>a</label>
                    <email xlink:href="mailto:singh@mcmaster.ca">singh@mcmaster.ca</email>
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                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
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            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>22</day>
                <month>5</month>
                <year>2024</year>
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            <pub-date pub-type="collection">
                <year>2024</year>
            </pub-date>
            <volume>13</volume>
            <elocation-id>520</elocation-id>
            <history>
                <date date-type="accepted">
                    <day>9</day>
                    <month>5</month>
                    <year>2024</year>
                </date>
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                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2024 Singh R and Jagadeeshan S</copyright-statement>
                <copyright-year>2024</copyright-year>
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                    <license-p>This is an open access article distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution Licence, which permits unrestricted use, distribution, and reproduction in any medium, provided the original work is properly cited.</license-p>
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            <abstract>
                <sec>
                    <title>Background</title>
                    <p>Darwin assumed that the peacock&#x2019;s long train was maladaptive and was the indirect effect of selection by female mate choice based on the train&#x2019;s beauty. While a relationship between the feathers&#x2019; elaborate features and mating success has been shown, what features of the train females are attracted to remains controversial.</p>
                </sec>
                <sec>
                    <title>Methods</title>
                    <p>We used museum specimens to examine the anatomical plan underlying feather development responsible for the symmetry of the train. We developed a model based on an alternate arrangement of primordial feather buds during development and locations of concentric circles of symmetric eyespot distribution using the pattern seen on the train as a template.</p>
                </sec>
                <sec>
                    <title>Results</title>
                    <p>We observed a zigzag pattern of feather follicles that determined both the number and the hexagonal arrangement of eyespots on the train. Our model explained not only the alternate arrangement of feathers on the train but also the arrangement of the concentric color rings of the eyespots. While the zigzag pattern explains the symmetry, complexity, and structural beauty of the peacock&#x2019;s train, it also precludes variation in eyespot number except by annual addition of new rows of feathers as a function of age.</p>
                </sec>
                <sec>
                    <title>Conclusions</title>
                    <p>Since eyespot number and feather length are developmentally correlated and an asymptotic function of a male&#x2019;s age, their effects on female choice would be confounded and inseparable, and male vigor would be a crucial factor affecting male fitness. Females may not always choose males with the largest number of eyespots, as older males may lack vigor. We propose a multimodal model of female choice 
                        <italic toggle="yes">where females see eyespot and train size not as separate traits but as one complex trait combining both.</italic> The new model may be able to explain conflicting results and why eyespot number alone may not be sufficient to explain female choice.</p>
                </sec>
            </abstract>
            <kwd-group kwd-group-type="author">
                <kwd>peacock&#x2019;s tail</kwd>
                <kwd>sexual selection</kwd>
                <kwd>mate choice</kwd>
                <kwd>female choice theory</kwd>
                <kwd>eyespots</kwd>
                <kwd>complexity</kwd>
                <kwd>symmetry</kwd>
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            <funding-group>
                <award-group id="fund-1" xlink:href="http://dx.doi.org/10.13039/501100000038">
                    <funding-source>Natural Sciences and Engineering Research Council of Canada</funding-source>
                </award-group>
                <award-group id="fund-2" xlink:href="http://dx.doi.org/10.13039/100009776">
                    <funding-source>McMaster University</funding-source>
                </award-group>
                <funding-statement>This work was supported by grants from a Natural Sciences and Engineering Research Council of Canada and McMaster University to RSS </funding-statement>
                <funding-statement>
                    <italic>The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.</italic>
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    <body>
        <disp-quote>
            <p>
                <italic toggle="yes">Beauty is truth, truth beauty.</italic>
            </p>
            <p>&#x2003;&#x2003;&#x2003;&#x2003;&#x2003;&#x2003;&#x2003;&#x2003;Keats</p>
        </disp-quote>
        <sec id="sec5" sec-type="intro">
            <title>Introduction</title>
            <p>The Indian blue peacock&#x2019;s, 
                <italic toggle="yes">Pavo cristatus,</italic> elaborate and long tail (we use 
                <italic toggle="yes">tail</italic> and 
                <italic toggle="yes">train</italic> interchangeably, as appropriate- former to signify the long horizontal tail, the latter in expanded vertical position) has long represented a paradigmatic case for the theory of sexual selection by female choice. However, even after 150 years, the problem of the evolution of the peacock&#x2019;s long tail remains unsolved&#x2014;we still do not know the basis (target) of female choice in peafowl. 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref10">Darwin (1859)</xref> recognized the peacock&#x2019;s long tail as a problem for his theory of evolution by natural selection as he conjectured it was too long to be of adaptive use to the animal; therefore, it was maladaptive. Unlike in other animals, where a sexually selected trait may be directly under female choice selection, there are three aspects of the peacock&#x2019;s tail: length, and structural complexity, and &#x201c;beauty.&#x201d; By beauty here we are concerned with the structural arrangement and the color of the eyespots, which adds to the overall beauty of the peacock&#x2019;s tail. Darwin chose to focus on the beauty of the tail and supplied an explanation through sexual selection: that females may prefer to mate with males who possess more beautiful and elaborate tails (
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref11">Darwin, 1981</xref>). It was thought that this reproductive advantage enjoyed by males with more elaborate tails would compensate for any loss of male fitness such as reduced survivorship due to predation. This explanation sets the stage for research to focus on elucidating how females assess &#x201c;beauty&#x201d; or attractive traits (in peacocks and other birds) in their choice of mates (
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref1">Andersson, 1994</xref>).</p>
            <p>Two key requisites for evolutionary theory, be it via natural or sexual selection, are variation and heritability. If the peacock&#x2019;s train is a target of female choice, then there must be genetic or phenotypic variation in female preference that would directly or indirectly depend on variation in the peacock&#x2019;s train morphology (size, shape, and/or coloration). Although female choice is widely assumed to be responsible for the evolution of the peacock&#x2019;s tail, research on this matter has produced mixed results to date. While several researchers have shown a relationship between train features and mating success (
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref30">Petrie et al., 1991</xref>; 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref29">Petrie and Halliday, 1994</xref>; 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref38">Yasmin and Yahya, 1996</xref>; 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref40">Loyau et al., 2005</xref>; 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref13">Harikrishnan et al., 2010</xref>), a comprehensive 7-year re-evaluation by 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref37">Takahashi et al. (2008)</xref> found no evidence of train morphology (either train length or eyespot number) influencing the number of copulations a male achieves. More importantly, this re-evaluation uncovered little variation in train morphology across populations, thereby calling into question the idea that the peacock&#x2019;s train is a target of female choice (however, see 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref22">Loyau et al., 2008</xref>). Similarly, in another important study based on close observation of eyespot distribution on the train, 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref8">Dakin and Montgomerie (2011)</xref> found that males over the age of four generally produce between 165 and 170 eyespots before the onset of the mating season. They found little variation within and between populations in terms of eyespot number and noted that what little variation existed seemed to be due to extrinsic factors. 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref8">Dakin and Montgomerie (2011)</xref> rather intuitively suggested this lack of variation in train morphology possibly reflects developmental constraints. There may be variation in eyespot number between growing males (
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref24">Manning, 1989</xref>) but the number in adult males appears invariant (
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref24">Manning, 1989</xref>; 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref37">Takahashi et al., 2008</xref>; 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref8">Dakin and Montgomerie, 2011</xref>).</p>
            <p>While much work has been done to investigate the basis of female choice, less work has addressed the structure of the trait, i.e., the train itself. The peacock&#x2019;s train is a complex structure, with the upper train coverts comprising a diverse variety of feather types, each varying in structure, iridescence level, color pattern and symmetry (see 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref18">Lillie, 1942</xref> and 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref25">Manning and Hartley, 1991</xref> for details). The complexity and the bilateral symmetry of the train (
                <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1</xref>) can be appreciated by connecting the eyespots in any direction (see 
                <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f2">Figure 2A</xref>). To achieve this remarkable symmetry in a fan formation, the feather follicles must develop in a specific arrangement at their origin, i.e., on the uropygium. Upon failing to find significant variation within and between populations in terms of eyespot number, 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref8">Dakin and Montgomerie (2011)</xref> inspected the outer surface of a male peacock&#x2019;s uropygium and found a constant number and uniform arrangement of feathers, which suggests that train feather development may be anatomically determined in all males. This suggests that the extraordinary symmetry of the train (
                <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figures 1</xref> and 
                <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f2">2</xref>) is dictated by developmental plans which may not allow for intrinsic variation in train morphology.</p>
            <fig fig-type="figure" id="f1" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                <label>Figure 1. </label>
                <caption>
                    <title>A picture of a peacock tail showing the symmetry of the train and eyespots.</title>
                    <p>Concentric circles show spaced-out eyespots towards the periphery (picture from Wikipedia/ThiminduGoonatil lake from Colombo, Sri Lanka).</p>
                </caption>
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            </fig>
            <fig fig-type="figure" id="f2" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                <label>Figure 2. </label>
                <caption>
                    <title>Geometrical designs and the symmetry of the train (A) and the position of follicles on the anchor plate (B).</title>
                    <p>(Peacock picture from Wikipedia/ThiminduGoonatil lake from Colombo, Sri Lanka).</p>
                </caption>
                <graphic id="gr2" orientation="portrait" position="float" xlink:href="https://f1000research-files.f1000.com/manuscripts/164464/d4f07e13-f792-4235-a075-636c779fc0a3_figure2.gif"/>
            </fig>
            <p>To explain the remarkable symmetry of the structural arrangement and iridescence of the train and to understand the nature of variation in eyespot number we investigated the anatomical development plan of peacock train morphology. We uncovered developmental and anatomical evidence demonstrating that the nature of bilateral symmetry in the development of the peacock&#x2019;s upper-tail covert feathers or train feathers) would preclude genetic variation in the number of individual eyespots. Accordingly, the only source of intrinsic variation in feather and eyespot number would be between age classes, arising from the age-dependent addition of new rows of feathers. On the other hand, feather length&#x2014;being a quantitative trait&#x2014;is expected to show variation within as well as between age classes. Thus, all intrinsic between-individual variation in eyespots may be related to animal age, which may reach a developmentally pre-determined limit in all animals (
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref8">Dakin and Montgomerie, 2011</xref>). This would explain why researchers have not found significant (genetic) variation in eyespot number in natural populations (
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref37">Takahashi et al., 2008</xref>; 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref8">Dakin and Montgomerie, 2011</xref>).</p>
            <p>In this report based on observations on museum specimens of peacock tails, we show that a simple zigzag pattern of feather formation giving rise to hexagonal arrangement of eyespots uniquely determines the symmetry, complexity, and beauty of eyespots in the peacock&#x2019;s tail. The zig-jag arrangement is not unique to train feathers; it is common to all feathers covering the body of the bird and is the result of alternate packing of cells during development. Hexagonal arrangement of cells arises from alternate cell packing, and it was shown to apply to the origin of feathers in birds (
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref34">Sengel, 1976</xref>). By beauty, in this manuscript, we only mean the structural complexity of eyespot color and their distribution and do not want to confuse with everyday and wider meaning of the word beauty. Second, we show that eyespot feathers originate in alternate, zigzagging rows of 10/11 annually, making the total number of eyespots an intrinsically determined trait. Third, we argue that both feather number (
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref24">Manning, 1989</xref>) and feather growth are asymptotic functions of age that&#x2014;when considered with the male vigor which must peak at reproduction time and then decline&#x2014;may explain the contradictory results reported between different studies (
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref22">Loyau et al., 2008</xref>; 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref37">Takahashi et al., 2008</xref>). We discuss the implications of these results, especially the lack of genetic variation in eyespot number, for sexual selection theories and how alternative explanations are required to explain the basis of female choice and the evolution of the peacock&#x2019;s elaborate train. We propose a multimodal model of female choice based on male&#x2019;s train size, vigor, and beauty that aligns with recent calls for more inclusive and multimodal perspectives to understand how sexual selection operates (
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref26">Mitoyen et al., 2019</xref>), as it highlights the multiple factors which may jointly determine the female choice of best mates. We propose that many conflicting results can be explained by assuming that females do not base their mate choice on eyespot number or train size alone but on a complex trait combining both.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec6" sec-type="methods">
            <title>Methods</title>
            <sec id="sec7">
                <title>Peacock specimens</title>
                <p>The data presented in this report are based on observations of the tail structures of museum specimens kept at the Royal Ontario Museum, Toronto, Canada, and the American Museum of Natural History, New York, USA. Only specimens in good condition were included in this study. A total of 21 samples of blue fowl (
                    <italic toggle="yes">P. cristatus</italic>), including two albinos and two hybrids (between strains originating from Bangkok and Cameroon), were examined. The wild blue fowl samples originated from India (N = 3), Sri Lanka (N = 2), Kenya (N = 1), or were captive samples originating from the United States (N = 4 blue, N = 2 albino). The remaining 11 samples were of unknown origin and included two hybrids. We also had access to seven green fowl (
                    <italic toggle="yes">P. muticus</italic>) samples at the Natural History Museum, which originated from Malaysia (N = 4), Bangkok (N = 1), or were of unknown origin (N = 2). Wherever dates were noted, most of the field samples were collected during the early 1900s. Conversely, the captive samples were collected as recently as 1942.</p>
            </sec>
            <sec id="sec8">
                <title>Data collection</title>
                <p>We counted the number of eyespots, eyespot feathers, and fishtail feathers displayed by the included specimens (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f3">Figure 3</xref>). In the cases where an eyespot was missing due to damage, we counted it as if it were present to estimate the total number of eyespots. Very few of the samples had a uropygium that was in good condition. Of the museum specimens six had intact uropygia in 
                    <italic toggle="yes">P. cristatus</italic> and one in 
                    <italic toggle="yes">P. muticus.</italic> Wherever we were certain that the integrity of the sample had not been compromised, we counted the rows of feather imprints on the uropygium (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f2">Figures 2B</xref>, 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f4">4</xref>). Dryad: A long tail of truth and beauty: The developmental basis of complexity, symmetry, and beauty in the evolution of the peacock&#x2019;s tail. Dryad My Dataset: doi: 
                    <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://doi.org/10.5061/dryad.1g1jwstwg">10.5061/dryad.1g1jwstwg</ext-link>.</p>
                <fig fig-type="figure" id="f3" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                    <label>Figure 3. </label>
                    <caption>
                        <title>Dorsal and ventral side of uropygium.</title>
                        <p>A: Dorsal side showing the newest rows of feathers at the bottom; B: Ventral side depicting alternating rows of 10 or 11 feather cell imprints. The smallest feather row at the bottom of panel A corresponds to the smallest row of follicles at the bottom of panel B. The top 3-5 rows depending on the age of the animal give rise to fishtail feathers and the rest eyespot feathers.</p>
                    </caption>
                    <graphic id="gr3" orientation="portrait" position="float" xlink:href="https://f1000research-files.f1000.com/manuscripts/164464/d4f07e13-f792-4235-a075-636c779fc0a3_figure3.gif"/>
                </fig>
                <fig fig-type="figure" id="f4" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                    <label>Figure 4. </label>
                    <caption>
                        <title>A graph showing independence of eyespot and fishtail feather numbers.</title>
                        <p>Dotted lines represent number of fishtails (30+, 40+, 50+) consisting of 3, 4, and 5 rows of feathers (details provided in the text). Closed bar: eyespot feathers; open bar: fishtail feathers. The hybrid (BC) is between Bangkok and Cameroon.</p>
                    </caption>
                    <graphic id="gr4" orientation="portrait" position="float" xlink:href="https://f1000research-files.f1000.com/manuscripts/164464/d4f07e13-f792-4235-a075-636c779fc0a3_figure4.gif"/>
                </fig>
            </sec>
            <sec id="sec9">
                <title>Simulating train expansion</title>
                <p>To illustrate the eyespot symmetry exhibited by trains in displays (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f5">Figure 5</xref>), we made use of Adobe Illustrator&#x2019;s built-in features (Adobe Photoshop and Adobe InDesign) provided by Graphic Designers&#x2019; services at Media Production Services, McMaster University. Briefly, Adobe Illustrator was used to map concentric circles following eyespot distribution on the train in the display by using 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1</xref> as a template. These sets of concentric circles were used as the basis for text paths to determine how eyespots may distribute themselves upon the unfolding of the train for display.</p>
                <fig fig-type="figure" id="f5" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                    <label>Figure 5. </label>
                    <caption>
                        <title>Illustrations from graphic simulations of eyespot symmetry.</title>
                        <p>Layout of feathers on the anchor plate (below) and the resulting eyespot patterns produced by a bilateral symmetrical train (above). The outer spots (green) represent fishtail feathers. (A) 10/11 zigzag pattern; (B) 10/11 parallel pattern; (C) 10/10 zigzag pattern, (D) 11/11 zigzag pattern. Compare the hexagon cellular packing on the uropygium and the expanded train in A with that seen on the animal&#x2019;s train in 
                            <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1</xref> (for details see the text).</p>
                    </caption>
                    <graphic id="gr5" orientation="portrait" position="float" xlink:href="https://f1000research-files.f1000.com/manuscripts/164464/d4f07e13-f792-4235-a075-636c779fc0a3_figure5.gif"/>
                </fig>
                <p>To simulate and illustrate the train&#x2019;s eyespot distribution, we used the following observations and/or assumptions: (1) Based on our overall observations (7 
                    <italic toggle="yes">P. cristatus</italic>, and 1 
                    <italic toggle="yes">P. muticus</italic>), we concluded that each cell on the uropygium (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1B</xref>) represents the base of a corresponding feather (attempting to determine direct one-to-one correspondence would have required damaging the specimens); (2) we used a row of 10 or 11 dots in the shape of the (oval) uropygium to represent train feathers but we used a flat and not a convex surface as the latter was not possible. In the result section we discuss why using a convex surface in the simulation would not have changed the outcome; (3) In line with our observation (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1</xref>), we used an arbitrary constant distance between spots within a row and we progressively increased the size of the dot spots between rows, from the bottom (newest) to the top (oldest) feathers, to represent the size of the eyespots as seen on the train; (4) We assumed that each dot represents an eyespot at the end of the feather which is supported by our observation; and (5) we only simulated 2-dimensional position of eyespot distribution and not their three dimensional distribution on the train surface. We simulated four spatial feather arrangements: 10/11 zigzag, 10/11 parallel, 10/10 zigzag, and 11/11 zigzag (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f5">Figure 5</xref>). The feather grid was expanded bilaterally symmetrically to mimic the animal&#x2019;s train expansion. It is important to point out that the simulated surface shown in 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f5">Figure 5</xref> represents the front, flat face of the train.</p>
            </sec>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec10" sec-type="results">
            <title>Results</title>
            <sec id="sec11">
                <title>The origin of bilateral symmetry in the peacock&#x2019;s train</title>
                <p>To uncover the anatomical development plan that determines the bilateral symmetry of eyespots on the train, we examined the uropygium (N = 6) of museum specimens. The uropygium is a fleshy and bony structure at the posterior extremity of a bird&#x2019;s body that supports the tail feathers. Tail feathers are attached to the dorsal (convex) side of the oval-shaped uropygium, which serves as an anchor plate (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f3">Figure 3</xref>). The ventral (concave) side of the anchor plate exhibits several interesting features: 1) It has basal impressions of tightly-packed, parallel rows of feather follicle insertion points; 2) The feather follicles grow progressively larger from the anterior (bottom, younger) to the posterior (top, older) end and are laid out in sequential but alternating rows of 10/11, corroborating the alternate arrangement of 10/11 feathers first reported by 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref8">Dakin and Montgomerie (2011)</xref> except that the alternate rows have a zigzag pattern; 3) The posterior feather follicles radiate in an arch, mimicking the fan formation shape of the train in the display. The convexity of the anchor plate makes the train a three-dimensional structure (i.e., an oval trapezoid-shaped dish), such that the feathers are projected outwards at different angles and lengths. Notably, the anchor plate itself appears to be a product of continuous growth and the sequential addition of new rows of feathers each year. The one-to-one correspondence between the pattern of the feather follicles (size, alternate arrangement, and progression from anterior to posterior) on the ventral side of the anchor plate and the symmetrical positions and size of the feathers on the dorsal side is unmistakable and is supported by our observations (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f2">Figure 2</xref>).</p>
            </sec>
            <sec id="sec12">
                <title>Variation in eyespot number</title>
                <p>To determine whether any variation exists in the anatomical development plan found on the uropygium that would affect the number of eyespots, we examined several specimens from the Royal Ontario Museum and the American Museum of Natural History. The results of this analysis, based on a limited number of specimens in good shape, are summarized in 
                    <xref ref-type="table" rid="T1">Table 1</xref> and 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f4">Figure 4</xref>. First, the number of feather rows, as determined by the number of follicle rows on the uropygium, varied from 17 to 19 (N = 7), whilst the anterior two to three rows had minor eyespots. Notably, this result is consistent with the findings of 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref8">Dakin and Montgomerie (2011)</xref>. The anterior-most rows of eyespots appear minor due to their slow growth and maturity. If one or a few rows of feathers are added each year, then based on the peacock&#x2019;s longevity of about 20 years in nature (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref19">Lindstedt and Calder, 1976</xref>) the number of eyespots can reach over 200; however, the late-aged, developmentally immature eyespots (small size and lack of full coloration) will remain insignificant in their effect on female choice.</p>
                <table-wrap id="T1" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                    <label>Table 1. </label>
                    <caption>
                        <title>Variation in peacock train morphology between 
                            <italic toggle="yes">P. cristatus</italic> and 
                            <italic toggle="yes">P. muticus.</italic>
                        </title>
                    </caption>
                    <table content-type="article-table" frame="hsides">
                        <thead>
                            <tr>
                                <th align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top"/>
                                <th align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Feather rows</th>
                                <th align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Feathers per row</th>
                                <th align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Eyespots number</th>
                                <th align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Fishtails number</th>
                                <th align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">ESL (cm)</th>
                                <th align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">FTL (cm)</th>
                            </tr>
                        </thead>
                        <tbody>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="7" rowspan="1" valign="top">
                                    <italic toggle="yes">P. cristatus</italic>
                                </td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">
                                    <italic toggle="yes">N</italic>
                                </td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">7</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">7</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">8</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">22</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">21</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">21</td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Mean</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">18</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">10/11</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">129.44</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">34.42</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">112.68</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">134.15</td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">SD</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">0.63</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">0</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">35.70</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">5.77</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">25.58</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">32.17</td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Range</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">17&#x2013;19</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">10/11</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">101&#x2013;161</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">24&#x2013;45</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">47&#x2013;143</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">58&#x2013;160</td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="7" rowspan="1" valign="top">
                                    <italic toggle="yes">P. muticus</italic>
                                </td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">
                                    <italic toggle="yes">N</italic>
                                </td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">1</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">1</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">7</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">7</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">7</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">7</td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Mean</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">19</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">10/11</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">137.50</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">36.00</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">101.66</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">120.16</td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">SD</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">-</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">-</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">14.94</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">3.52</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">25.53</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">29&#x2013;49</td>
                            </tr>
                            <tr>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">Range</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">-</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">-</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">112&#x2013;157</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">30&#x2013;40</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">71&#x2013;128</td>
                                <td align="left" colspan="1" rowspan="1" valign="top">85&#x2013;150</td>
                            </tr>
                        </tbody>
                    </table>
                    <table-wrap-foot>
                        <p>N = Number of individuals; ESL: Eyespot feather length, FTL: Fishtail feather length, SD = Standard deviation (for raw data, see 
                            <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref42">Singh, 2021</xref>).</p>
                    </table-wrap-foot>
                </table-wrap>
                <p>Second, the zigzag arrangement of feathers appeared as an invariant trait in our sample (
                    <xref ref-type="table" rid="T1">Table 1</xref>). While this one-to-one correspondence between clearly visible follicle insertion patterns and train morphology may be expected, our data suggest that the developmental plan does not permit random (one feather at a time) variation in eyespot number (
                    <xref ref-type="table" rid="T1">Table 1</xref>).</p>
                <p>Third, the number of fishtail feathers varied around the modal number of 30, 40, or 50 (N = 21), which is what we would expect if fishtail feathers were produced by three, four, or five rows of feather follicles during development, respectively (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f4">Figure 4</xref>). In our museum samples, the highest number of fishtail feathers observed was around 40. However, 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1</xref> indicates that the number of fishtail feathers can exceed 50.</p>
                <p>Fourth, the number of eyespot feathers varied from 101 to 161 (N = 21), not counting the minor feathers. This variation is attributable to individual variation in terms of age, time of year at capture, and any damage from prior handling at the museum.</p>
                <p>Fifth, we speculate that number of eyespot feathers and feather length are independent traits that vary asymptotically as a function of age. This is consistent with 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref24">Manning&#x2019;s (1989)</xref> finding that eyespot number increases during the first 4 to 7 years of the animal&#x2019;s life and thereafter increases more slowly or remains effectively constant.</p>
            </sec>
            <sec id="sec13">
                <title>Interspecies variation: 
                    <italic toggle="yes">P. cristatus</italic> vs. 
                    <italic toggle="yes">P. muticus</italic>
                </title>
                <p>We also had access to a small number of 
                    <italic toggle="yes">P. muticus</italic> (green peacock) specimens (
                    <italic toggle="yes">N</italic> = 7) from Southeast Asia (
                    <xref ref-type="table" rid="T1">Table 1</xref>; 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f4">Figure 4</xref>) for comparative analyses, which could provide clues as to whether peacock train morphology reflects a similar developmental pattern across taxa or whether sexual selection and other environmental factors have resulted in different trajectories of train morphology. In the green peacock, the number of fishtails ranged from 38 to 39 (around the expected mode of 42), while the number of eyespots ranged from 115 to 154.</p>
                <p>Data from both species appeared to be homogenous (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f4">Figure 4</xref>). One green peacock specimen was in pristine condition, which enabled us to assess the anatomical development pattern of feather follicle rows in the uropygium. As per the blue peacock, feather follicle rows in the green fowl followed the same alternating 10/11 arrangement, suggesting that this developmental arrangement may be an invariant feature across peafowl species. Interestingly, similar alternating patterns of train feather arrangements are also found in the wild turkey, 
                    <italic toggle="yes">Meleagris ocellata</italic>, a member of the same family (Phasianidae). This observation entertains further research on whether the alternating pattern of feather arrangement might be common across other members of the family and thus an invariant developmental trait.</p>
            </sec>
            <sec id="sec14">
                <title>Speciation 
                    <italic toggle="yes">in-silico</italic>: The origin of the train&#x2019;s symmetry and complexity</title>
                <p>We investigated the significance of the arrangement of feathers in rows of 10/11 and their &#x201c;zigzag&#x201d; alignment (see 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f2">Figure 2</xref>). To achieve this, we used graphic design software to reconstruct the unfolding of the peacock&#x2019;s open train based on the developmental layout of the feather follicle insertion points observed in the anchor plate (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f5">Figure 5</xref>, left). For simplicity, we assumed that the feather follicle insertion points were eyespots without the feather stalks. Using Adobe Illustrator, we modeled the fan formation in &#x201c;display.&#x201d; We subjected the eyespot distribution on the anchor plate to a uniform, bilaterally symmetrical force to spread the eyespots to the left, right, and upward, thereby pushing them radially and uniformly outward in a curved semi-circular space to mimic the fanning pattern of the train during display. Remarkably, our reconstruction yielded an eyespot distribution that is very similar to that observed on the peacock train (compare 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f5">Figure 5A</xref> to 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f2">Figure 2</xref>), with five feathers on either side of the mid-feather in each row. As expected, we found a one-to-one correspondence between the condensed, developmental&#x2013;anatomical layout of the feather follicle insertion points on the uropygium and the symmetrical distribution of eyespots on the train. It is important to point out that the zigzag arrangement of cells, when spread out uniformly, gives rise to the well-known hexagon cellular packing (compare 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f5">Figure 5A</xref> and 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1</xref>). We did not simulate a convex surface as this was not possible, however doing so would not have changed the distribution pattern (hexagonal) of eyespot as we were simulating 2-D image of eyespots distribution as seen from front and not their 3-D distribution patterns. In other words, the simulation results presented in 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f5">Figure 5</xref> show what the imprint/picture would look like if an expanded train were compressed on a flat surface. This is what we would see from a distance.</p>
                <p>We further explored what the eyespots distribution pattern would be like if the feathers were arranged in 10/11 parallel rows instead of the zigzag arrangement that we observed in this study. Notably, the train eyespot pattern that we obtained is remarkably different from the 10/11 zigzag pattern. Our reconstruction of a parallel arrangement yielded a palm-leaf-like pattern that fanned out in parallel rows of eyespots rather than the pattern observed in a peacock&#x2019;s train on display (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f5">Figure 5B</xref>). While both patterns are striking, the 10/11 zigzag arrangement yields a denser and uniformly symmetrical arrangement of eyespots, as seen in the animal.</p>
                <p>Because the above results raised the question of why 10 or 11 rows were observed, we simulated a 10/10 parallel and 11/11 parallel pattern; the results are shown in 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f5">Figures 5C</xref> and 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f5">D</xref>. Although the 10/10 and 11/11 patterns were like the 10/11 parallel pattern, they showed certain interesting differences. While the feathers lined up in equally spaced, straight lines over the entire span in the 10/11 parallel pattern, the 10/10 and 11/11 parallel patterns resulted in the equal spacing of individual eyespots towards the end of the train, with wavy lines in the center. It is obvious that it was not the zigzag pattern itself but the zigzag pattern of 10/11 that gave rise to the uniform distribution of eyespots on the train. The 10/11 parallel pattern may not be developmentally possible.</p>
            </sec>
            <sec id="sec15">
                <title>A rudimentary model of eyespot development</title>
                <p>Feather is an important non-embryonic model of animal development (for a recent review see 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref5">Chen et al., 2015</xref>), and much research has been done both anatomical and molecular involving the role of genetic and epigenetic mechanisms (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref14">Jiang et al., 1999</xref>, 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref15">2004</xref>; 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref23">Maini et al., 2006</xref>; 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref5">Chen et al., 2015</xref>). Feathers develop from feather follicle buds on the surface of the epidermis (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref31">Prum, 1999</xref>; 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref5">Chen et al., 2015</xref>). Pigmentation based colors in plants and animals can be explained by local variation in gene expression. In birds, movement of melanocytes up the hollow core of the feather is said to control the variation in plumage color (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref32">Prum and Williamson, 2002</xref>; 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref5">Chen et al. 2015</xref>). In &#x201c;structural color,&#x201d; such as in peacock feathers, the colors are the result of light reflection from the modification and anatomical diversity of the barbules&#x2019; photonic structures (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref39">Zi et al., 2003</xref>; 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref12">Freyer et al. 2018</xref>).</p>
                <p>We were motivated by the superficial but interesting structural similarity between the iridescence patterning of the eyespots and that of the body plan of the whole animal with a fully expanded train. The entire peacock resembles one giant eyespot in the sense that it boasts a deep-blue body surrounded by a dense zone of bluish-green eyespots, which corresponds to an individual eyespot with its deep-blue inner circle surrounded by radiating oval rings of mixed colors. The same pattern of blue can be observed in the peacock&#x2019;s crest crown also (data not shown) which have been shown to be involved in communication (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref16">Kane et al., 2018</xref>).</p>
                <p>We hypothesized that the rings of eyespots may be determined by the same cellular plans as the color patterning of the whole animal. We took advantage of the similarity between the rings on the individual eyespots and the spatial eyespot rings traced on the train and modeled backward from the eyespot to feather follicles and back to the eyespot (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f6">Figure 6</xref>). Starting from each eyespot (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f6">Figure 6A</xref>) we inferred colored rings on the train following the pattern seen in one eyespot (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f6">Figure 6B</xref>) and from there on the follicle rows on the uropygium (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f6">Figure 6C</xref>). We inferred that the five feather follicles on each side of the central feather make an inverted palindrome and correspond to the five different structural colors seen in the eyespot (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f6">Figure 6D</xref>). From this we inferred follicles growth and epidermal invagination giving rise to a concentric ring of structural material (stem cells) (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f6">Figure 6E</xref>) inside the feathers which expand and create the ring pattern on the eyespot. (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f6">Figure 6F</xref>) Cellular invagination is a well-known process of embryology (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref33">Rauzi et al., 2013</xref>; 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref27">Pearl et al., 2017</xref>) but we stress that we are basically connecting dots from eyespot distribution on the train to the concentric rings of individual eyespots and it must remain speculation until further investigated.</p>
                <fig fig-type="figure" id="f6" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                    <label>Figure 6. </label>
                    <caption>
                        <title>A diagrammatic representation of a theoretical plan of eyespot development as deduced from eyespot to follicles to eyespot.</title>
                        <p>A. an eyespot and a bunch of eyespot fine feathers showing their multi-colored structures; B. modelling of eyespot rings using rings observed on the train; C. projection of train rings on the uropygium; D. cellular processes showing origination of 5 structurally different feather follicles, and their inverted tandem duplication; E. cell growth and invagination of a concentric ring of structural material giving rise to eyespot; F. a peacock feather showing internal component of eyespot fine feathers (for details see the text).</p>
                    </caption>
                    <graphic id="gr6" orientation="portrait" position="float" xlink:href="https://f1000research-files.f1000.com/manuscripts/164464/d4f07e13-f792-4235-a075-636c779fc0a3_figure6.gif"/>
                </fig>
            </sec>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec16" sec-type="discussion">
            <title>Discussion</title>
            <p>Mating success of peacocks has been shown to be affected by eyespots and train size, which appear to be correlated, but it has not been possible to determine if one or both affect mating success directly (
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref30">Petrie et al., 1991</xref>; 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref29">Petrie and Halliday, 1994</xref>; 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref38">Yasmin and Yahya, 1996</xref>; 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref40">Loyau et al., 2005</xref>; 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref13">Harikrishnan et al., 2010</xref>). Physically reducing the number of eyespots has a negative effect on mating success (
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref29">Petrie and Halliday, 1994</xref>); however, 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref8">Dakin and Montgomerie (2011)</xref> showed that females were insensitive to removal of as many as 20% of the eyespots before responding to the reduction. In the following, after showing that eyespot number and train length are intricately related and their roles are largely inseparable, and that male vigor would be an important factor mediating the relationship between males and females, we present a multimodal model of female choice based on a complex trait combining both train length 
                <italic toggle="yes">and</italic> eyespots (
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref1">Andersson, 1994</xref>; 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref4">Candolin, 2003</xref>; 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref3">Bro-J&#x00f8;rgensen, 2010</xref>; 
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref26">Mitoyen et al., 2019</xref>).</p>
            <sec id="sec17">
                <title>The zigzag feather pattern explains the train&#x2019;s symmetry and complexity</title>
                <p>The zigzag pattern of feather formation observed from the peacock&#x2019;s uropygium was able to explain both the hexagonal eyespot symmetry on the train and as well as the unique eyespot rings pattern within eyespots.</p>
                <p>The primordial feather follicles arising on the uropygium in rows of 10/11 are arranged in a zigzag manner. It is this zigzag arrangement of 10/11 that creates the complex hexagonal arrangement of eyespots in the peacock&#x2019;s tail, and thus its complexity and beauty (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f5">Figure 5</xref>, upper left). Hexagonal arrangement is a well-known feature of cellular arrangement in developmental biology (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref34">Sengel, 1976</xref>; 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref6">Classen et al., 2005</xref>). The same rule of zigzag arrangement between feather follicles that leads to the complex distribution of eyespots on the train also applies to cellular arrangement of cell lineages within feathers, giving rise to rings on the eyespot, which, in combination with the different structural -iridescence colors, imparts the eyespot its beauty. The qualitative annual growth of eyespot number in rows of 10/11 and the quantitative growth of train length and, essentially, of the former&#x2019;s dependence on the latter for its presentation and display to females may make the two traits inseparable in their effects on female choice.</p>
            </sec>
            <sec id="sec18">
                <title>Pattern of feather development constrains eyespot variation</title>
                <p>There are two aspects of development that constrain eyespot variation: bilateral symmetry and asymptotic tail growth. The anatomical arrangement and bilateral symmetry of eyespot feathers preclude random genetic variation by addition of single feather at a time and the only apparent source of variation in eyespot number is the annual addition of new feather rows as the animal grows. Thus, as 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref37">Takahashi et al. (2008)</xref> and 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref8">Dakin and Montgomerie (2011)</xref> found, most males produce approximately 165&#x2013;170 eyespots, and the small amount of eyespot number variation that exists within and between populations is due to extrinsic factors such as breakage or damage from predation. The actual number of eyespots can exceed 200, as suggested by the number of feather rows on the uropygium shown in 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f3">Figure 3</xref>, but many of them would be too small to be visible through photography or to be effective to illicit female response. The idea that the maximum eyespot number in adult animals is invariant within and across populations is consistent with the annual addition of new rows of feathers, which occurs rapidly at a younger age (~4&#x2013;7 years), while slowed growth or complete cessation of new feather development occurs after a certain age (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref24">Manning, 1989</xref>). It is important to point out that the lack of variation in eyespot number applies to the lifetime total number for individuals and not to the population, which may contain eyespot variation arising from different age classes.</p>
                <p>Asymptotic tail growth is the result of aging, loss of vigor and diminishing return in fitness accruing from tail growth. After a male has reached his peak reproductive age and achieved the threshold train size to begin mating, his mating success will increase as a function of both the size of his train and his vigor in mounting a display. But with declining vigor with age and competition from younger males, the individual fitness function will plateau and decline despite large train size. At this point, the law of diminishing returns will commence, and each additional row of feathers will grow slowly, making them look minor, and exert a minimal effect on the feather length and fitness function. Moreover, limitations with respect to maximum eyespot number and the lack of correlation between train length and mating success may&#x2014;as suggested by 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref37">Takahashi et al. (2008)</xref>&#x2014;indicate that these traits have reached a threshold. And since males do vary in mating success (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref30">Petrie et al., 1991</xref>; 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref38">Yasmin and Yahya, 1996</xref>; 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref22">Loyau et al., 2008</xref>), this variation cannot be due to variation in eyespot numbers and other factors may be involved.</p>
            </sec>
            <sec id="sec19">
                <title>Implication for sexual selection theories and a hypothesis</title>
                <p>Female choice theory, in the case of the peacock&#x2019;s tail, relies on the assumption that eyespot number and train length are correlated, and that female choice based on the former leads to a correlated increase in the latter. However, the results of this study, and others (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref37">Takahashi et al., 2008</xref>; 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref8">Dakin and Montgomerie, 2011</xref>), suggest that eyespot number is an internally-determined, invariable trait, and thus cannot be the sole factor driving the evolution of the peacock&#x2019;s long tail. Given that train feathers are rapidly added in rows of 10 or 11 during the first 4&#x2013;7 years of a peacock&#x2019;s life (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref24">Manning, 1989</xref>) to eventually reach 165&#x2013;170 at adulthood, any variation in feather growth rate could be the basis of female choice if the size of the train were directly or indirectly a criterion of female mate attraction&#x2014;or attention. As such, rapidly growing males may develop more elaborate trains with bigger size and more eyespots and thus become preferential targets of female choice during the peak period in the first 4&#x2013;7 years of life, after which feather number may increase at a slower rate (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref24">Manning, 1989</xref>).</p>
                <p>Our study brings out three important results that have implications for how females decide on mates. First, the invariant nature of the total number of eyespots in adult males does not allow for variation in fully adult males for selection; the only available variation is that between age classes in a population. Second, eyespots and train length are developmentally correlated; it is the tail growth that pulls the eyespots up, spreads them out, and makes them visible to females. While eyespot brightness has been shown to affect male mating success (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref41">Loyau et al., 2007</xref>; 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref9">Dakin and Montgomerie, 2013</xref>), we hypothesize that in deciding on mates, especially from distance, females may be using the size of the &#x201c;eyespot-studded train&#x201d; rather than the number of eyespots. This may explain why it has been difficult to separate the effect of eyespots from the effect of train size (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref30">Petrie et al., 1991</xref>).</p>
                <p>Finally, an important and hitherto neglected trait that is likely to mediate male&#x2013;female interaction is male vigor. Variation in vigor means that a younger youthful male with fewer eyespots may outperform an older and bigger male with more eyespots (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref28">Petrie, 1993</xref>). The new trait, eyespot&#x2013;train size, may either influence female choice directly through sensory capture (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref17">Kirkpatrick and Ryan, 1991</xref>) or indirectly through male vigor and beauty, but not solely based on eyespots (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref26">Mitoyen et al., 2019</xref>).</p>
                <p>We can consider a two-stage model of female choice, in which females are attracted by male size or train height and sounds from a distance, and exercise mate choice based on eyespot beauty, vigor, and behavior from close proximity. Such a model would be able to explain some of the contradictory results between different studies. It may explain, for example, why females were insensitive to removal of as much as 20% of the eyespots before showing any effect in their behavior (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref8">Dakin and Montgomerie, 2011</xref>).</p>
            </sec>
            <sec id="sec20">
                <title>Limitation and future work</title>
                <p>The small sample size of museum specimens used in this study may raise concerns about the validity of our results. The most important results of this study, shown in 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f5">Figure 5</xref> and 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f6">Figure 6</xref>, are qualitative and/or theoretical modelling, and are unaffected by sample size. Simulation is a form of hypothesis testing, but it lacks direct anatomical testing which is outside the scope of our lab. The zigzag arrangement of feathers and its effect on the train&#x2019;s symmetry and complexity (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f5">Figure 5</xref>) were simulated and shown to conform to observations from this work and at least the number and the symmetry of feathers is supported by previous work (
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref8">Dakin and Montgomerie, 2011</xref>). The rudimentary model of eyespot development (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f6">Figure 6</xref>) would also need to be investigated by developmental work. Future tests can involve (1) anatomical dissection of live animals to test the number and the arrangement of feathers as well as the correspondence between feathers and feather buds, (2) developmental work on young peacocks to test the addition of feather rows as well as feather growth as a function of age, (3) further work on the line of 
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref8">Dakin and Montgomerie (2011)</xref> to test the effect of varying eyespot numbers on female choice, and (4) work to test the effect of variation in male vigor as a function of age on female choice.</p>
            </sec>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec21" sec-type="conclusions">
            <title>Conclusions</title>
            <p>To summarize the results, we showed (1) that a zigzag pattern of feather formation affects the bilateral symmetry, eyespot complexity, and structural beauty of the peacock&#x2019;s tail; (2) that the same zigzag pattern, remarkably, can also explain the colorful rings of the eyespot; and (3) that the zigzag pattern would preclude intrinsic variation in the total number of eyespots among adult individuals. The only source of variation in eyespot number would be the annual addition of eyespot feathers, in rows of 10 or 11, giving rise to variation between age classes.</p>
            <p>These results led us to three insights that would help explain conflicting results between studies in the literature. First, eyespot number and train size are developmentally connected such that eyespots do not drive train length: it is the other way around&#x2014;it is the feather/train growth that pulls eyespots up, spreads them out, and makes them visible to the female from afar. Second, we showed that eyespot number and male tail growth both have asymptotic functions, which means that later stage addition of feathers would lead to minor and ineffective eyespots with no added benefit to males. Finally, we argue that male vigor is a crucial factor modulating the effects of male size and beauty. Two males can have the same number of eyespots but differ in their age and vigor. Taken together, these insights can explain many of the conflicting results reported from different studies in the past.</p>
            <p>Females prefer large ornaments (
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref36">Summers and Ord, 2022</xref>) and in case of the peacock the ornament can be the large &#x201c;eyespots-studded-train&#x201d; rather than the individual eyespots. Based on our results, we propose a two-stage, multimodal model of female choice based on male size, beauty, and vigor and suggest that females may not be using eyespot number or feather train size but a combined complex trait, &#x201c;eyespots and train size&#x201d;, as a basis of mate choice. Females may be attracted by train size from afar and eyespots may come into play when they are in close proximity. Females may be choosing the tallest, most vigorous, and most &#x201c;beautiful&#x201d; males. Our results solve the problem of the relationship between eyespot number and tail length and provide a new perspective on the role of male size, vigor, and beauty in female mate choice.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec22">
            <title>Author contributions</title>
            <p>RSS: Development of concept, collection of data, theoretical&#x2013;developmental modelling, critical review of sexual selection theories, preparation of the manuscript, and financial support; SJ: literature review, critical analysis of sexual selection theories, data analysis, and preparation of the manuscript.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec id="sec23">
            <title>Ethics and consent</title>
            <p>Ethical approval and written consent were not required.</p>
        </sec>
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        <sec id="sec26" sec-type="data-availability">
            <title>Data availability statement</title>
            <p>Dryad: A long tail of truth and beauty: a simple rule of pattern formation explains symmetry, complexity and beauty in the peacock&#x2019;s tail, 
                <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://doi.org/10.5061/dryad.1g1jwstwg">https://doi.org/10.5061/dryad.1g1jwstwg</ext-link> (
                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref42">Singh, 2021</xref>).</p>
            <p>Data is available under the terms of the (CC0 1.0) Public Domain Dedication license.</p>
        </sec>
        <ack>
            <title>Acknowledgements</title>
            <p>We thank Kevin Kerr (Toronto Zoo), Mark Peck (ROM), Paul Sweet, and Lydia Gaetano (AMNH) for their help with our work at the museum. We also extend our sincere thanks to Ellen Larsen, Daniel Hartl, Richard Morton, Bhagwati Gupta, Jonathan Stone, and Dave Rollo for their comments on the manuscript. We owe our gratitude to Robert Montgomerie and Roslyn Dakin for their expert, critical comments on the manuscript. We would like to thank all the anonymous reviewers of the earlier versions of this manuscript; their comments have made us think deeply and look for answers to explain the contradictory results reported from different studies. Michelle Brown provided technical support.</p>
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                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 1</article-title>
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                    <name>
                        <surname>Menezes</surname>
                        <given-names>Joao</given-names>
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                    <role>Referee</role>
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                    <label>1</label>Universidade Federal de S&#x00e3;o Paulo, S&#x00e3;o Paulo, Brazil</aff>
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                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
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                <day>5</day>
                <month>2</month>
                <year>2025</year>
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            <p>This manuscript investigates the anatomical basis of the peacock&#x2019;s train morphology, proposing that feather follicles follow a zigzag pattern that constrains eyespot number and contributes to the train&#x2019;s symmetry and complexity. Based on observations of museum specimens and graphical reconstructions, the authors argue that train size and eyespot distribution are largely predetermined by developmental constraints, which may explain inconsistencies in past studies of sexual selection in peafowl.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> The authors provides intriguing evidence that train morphology is largely constrained by developmental processes, with important implications for how sexual selection operates in peafowl, a textbook example of mate choice. By demonstrating that eyespot number is relatively fixed in adult males, the authors offer a potential explanation for conflicting findings in past studies on mate selection. Additionally, the use of graphical simulations is an original &#x2014; and visually appealing &#x2014; approach for visualizing the structural patterns underlying train symmetry.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> Having said that, while this study seems to present a promising contribution to the sexual selection literature, I found it difficult to fully assess its scientific merit due to the manuscript&#x2019;s lack of organization and clarity. The way information is presented both within and across sections makes it challenging to follow the logical progression of the study. Below, I outline major issues that, in my view, are preventing an effective communication of the manuscript's findings. I would be happy to assess the further merits of the study in a future, more reader-friendly version.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> *Overall organization*</p>
            <p> The manuscript lacks a clear and logical structure, making it difficult to navigate. This is most noticeable in the way that introduction, methods, results, and discussion are interwoven across the manuscript.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> First, while it is common to provide a brief preview of key findings at the end of the Introduction to help orient the reader, the manuscript dedicates two full paragraphs to presenting and discussing results. Such elaboration should ideally be reserved for the Results and Discussion sections.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> Similarly, the Results section includes substantial content that would be more appropriate in other sections. For example, details on how museum specimens were selected and how graphical simulations were performed should be in the Methods section, yet these details are scattered throughout the Results. Likewise, several sentences contain citations to previous studies, indicating that they belong either in the Introduction or the Discussion. Among many examples, the authors discuss Takahashi et al. (2008) and Dakin and Montgomerie (2011) when interpreting their own findings (something that should be done in the Discussion) and present background information on feather development (which would be better suited to the Introduction).</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> I highly recommend reorganizing the manuscript so that background information is confined to the Introduction, Methods are clearly described in a dedicated section (and only there), and Results present only the study&#x2019;s objective findings (without citations to external literature or interpretations). Such restructuring would make the paper significantly easier to follow and ensure that each section serves its intended purpose.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> *Logical flow and conciseness*</p>
            <p> Within sections, the manuscript is often difficult to follow due to unclear sentence structure, awkward phrasing, and abrupt shifts in focus. Many sentences are unnecessarily complex, often including parenthetical remarks that disrupt readability. For example, the opening sentence of the manuscript includes a long parenthetic note that, while potentially relevant, interrupts the flow of the introduction and could be better placed later in the text. Additionally, logical inconsistencies and imprecise wording make several sentences unclear. For instance, in the Introduction, the phrase starting with &#x201c;Unlike in other animals&#x2026;&#x201d; implies either that peacock&#x2019;s tail cannot be directly under female choice, or that sexually selected traits in other animals cannot have three aspects &#x2014; neither of which makes much sense. I chose two examples in the first paragraph because this paragraph is crucial to engaging readers, but these issues are present throughout the manuscript.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> The introduction also frequently presents ideas in a way that lacks explicit connections, making it difficult to follow the logic of the argument. The third paragraph, for example, abruptly moves from discussing previous studies on sexual selection to a description of train symmetry and feather follicle arrangements. The transition between these topics is unclear, and the sudden introduction of figures further disrupts the flow. Particular care should be given to this paragraph because it establishes the goals of the study and therefore is key for full comprehension of the manuscript.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> The manuscript would greatly benefit from more direct and concise writing, with clearer sentence structures, fewer parenthetical remarks, and better transitions between ideas.</p>
            <p>Is the work clearly and accurately presented and does it cite the current literature?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>If applicable, is the statistical analysis and its interpretation appropriate?</p>
            <p>Not applicable</p>
            <p>Are all the source data underlying the results available to ensure full reproducibility?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Is the study design appropriate and is the work technically sound?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the results?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Are sufficient details of methods and analysis provided to allow replication by others?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>animal communication, sexual selection, bioacoustics, ornithology, macroevolution</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard, however I have significant reservations, as outlined above.</p>
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                <contrib-group>
                    <contrib contrib-type="author">
                        <name>
                            <surname>Singh</surname>
                            <given-names>Rama</given-names>
                        </name>
                        <aff>McMaster University, Canada</aff>
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                <author-notes>
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                        <p>
                            <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
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                </author-notes>
                <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                    <day>7</day>
                    <month>2</month>
                    <year>2025</year>
                </pub-date>
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            <body>
                <p>Revisions made in Version 2:</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> Reviewer: Dr. Menezes</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> We sincerely thank the reviewer for liking the paper and noticing its originality. We see that the reviewer has read the paper very carefully as only a careful reading would pick up all the editorial sloppiness that has crept unnoticed in the manuscript! We have accepted all the suggestions. The paper has gone through thorough editing and cleaning up making it easier to read.</p>
                <p> We again thank the reviewers for their critical comments and hope that the revised paper will get their final Approval.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> Rama Singh</p>
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                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 1</article-title>
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                    <name>
                        <surname>Jordania</surname>
                        <given-names>Joseph</given-names>
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                    <role>Referee</role>
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                <aff id="r311984a1">
                    <label>1</label>University of Melbourne, Parkville, Australia</aff>
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                <fn fn-type="conflict">
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                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
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            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>8</day>
                <month>10</month>
                <year>2024</year>
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                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2024 Jordania J</copyright-statement>
                <copyright-year>2024</copyright-year>
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                    <license-p>This is an open access peer review report distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution Licence, which permits unrestricted use, distribution, and reproduction in any medium, provided the original work is properly cited.</license-p>
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            <p>Since the publication of Charles Darwin&#x2019;s book on human evolution via sexual selection (1871) the striking beauty of the male peafowl (peacock) tail has fascinated generations of scholars. Today there are quite a few hypotheses behind the possible evolutionary reasons of this remarkable phenomenon. But strangely, together with the admiration, this phenomenon suffered one of the longest scholarly neglects from behavioural ecologists. For more than a century after Darwin&#x2019;s initial hypothesis, scholars did not try to back up Darwin&#x2019;s hypothesis with any sort of data of experimental or field study. The first study was done in 1991, and we must be grateful to the authors of the pioneer study (Petrie et al. 1991).&#x00a0;</p>
            <p> Unfortunately, the study was very limited in many ways. For example, the researchers studied only one lek (a congregation of males) of 10 males during one month (by the way, the authors of the reviewed article do not mention these limitations). Also, the method employed did not convince everyone &#x2013; researchers disfigured some of the males&#x2019; tail feathers and covered several eyespots to observe the results, and the results appear only after 20 % of the eyespots wee disfigured.&#x00a0;</p>
            <p> It is important to remember the fact (also not mentioned in the reviewed article), that Takahachi et al study was expected to confirm the Petrie et al. 1991 findings with more solid field results. Very unexpectedly for them, the researchers came to a conclusion, that the peahens were totally indifferent to the peacocks&#x2019; tail beauty and eyespot numbers, and that generally the tail condition did not correlate with the reproductive success of their bearers.&#x00a0;</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> Authors of the reviewed article suggest an original idea that for their all-important &#x201c;female choice&#x201d; peahens use several elements of male train in combination. As I know, this idea was expressed for the first time in the published literature. So, my congratulations to the authors.</p>
            <p> At the same time, I would suggest to double-check the crucial premise of the article, (&#x201c;While a relationship between the feathers&#x2019; elaborate features and mating success has been shown&#x2026;&#x201d;) this hypothesis is by no means guaranteed. There is a relatively recent publication that suggests that the evolutionary mechanism behind the peacock&#x2019;s train must be found in natural selection theory, more precisely, on aposematic defense from predators (not sexual selection theory).</p>
            <p> As known to behavioural ecologists, aposematic species do not try to conceal themselves from predators. On the contrary, they try to &#x201c;announce&#x201d; their presence by all the possible modalities: they are often very visible by their body size and contrastive colours; they often make constant sounds as they walk and have very loud voice; and they often have a constant body odour and can produce stronger smell if threatened. Finally, when confronted by a potential predator, instead of running away, they try to intimidate the predator by their suddenly increased body size, threatening sounds, gestures, and fearless behaviour.&#x00a0;</p>
            <p> The author of &#x201c;aposematic hypothesis&#x201d; (Jordania, 2011, 2021) proposed that apart from huge and brilliant coloured body with many &#x201c;eyespots&#x201d; (visual signals), the peacock has a very strong, piercing voice (audio signal), secretes very smelly droppings if handled against its will (olfactory signal), and often does not go away even if a potential danger, for example, a tiger or a leopard, is nearby (behavioural signal, attested by many scholars, starting from George Schaller). So, aposematic hypothesis should be at least critically discussed in the reviewed article.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> In short, in my opinion, the presented article is a welcome addition to the scholarly discussion on this important topic. Therefore, I want say that I support indexing of this article, but with certain modifications and additions, as there is a plenty of room to make the article more informative and methodologically more robust. I will condense my comments to several concrete points:</p>
            <p> (1)&#x00a0;&#x00a0; &#x00a0; Most importantly, the article misses a mention and discussion of several important publications in the sphere, such as the following works:&#x00a0;</p>
            <p> Ref-1,2,3, 4</p>
            <p> (5)&#x00a0;&#x00a0; &#x00a0;Merle Jacob on the food courting theory, proposing that ocelli remind females blueberries. See: Jacobs, M. (1999) "A New Look at Darwinian Sexual Selection". NaturalSCIENCE. Heron Publishing.</p>
            <p> (6)&#x00a0;&#x00a0; &#x00a0; Also, the reviewed article could mention the early works of Huxley and Hingston, who are often mentioned together as they both proposed that peacock train was used to establish dominance among group of males. See: Huxley, J.S. 1938. Darwin's theory of sexual selection and the data subsumed by it in the light of recent research. American Naturalist 72:416-433. Also see: Hingston, R.W.G. 1933. The meaning of animal colour and adornment. Edward Arnold, London.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> I am by no means suggesting the authors of the reviewed article to alter in any way their original view on the subject, but I do believe that they should critically discuss the above-mentioned views on the subject. This will make their article more comprehensive and updated with contemporary literature on the subject.</p>
            <p>Is the work clearly and accurately presented and does it cite the current literature?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>If applicable, is the statistical analysis and its interpretation appropriate?</p>
            <p>Not applicable</p>
            <p>Are all the source data underlying the results available to ensure full reproducibility?</p>
            <p>No source data required</p>
            <p>Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the results?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Are sufficient details of methods and analysis provided to allow replication by others?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>Evolutionary psychology; Behavioural ecology; Animal defence strategies; Evolutionary musicology;</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard, however I have significant reservations, as outlined above.</p>
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                    <contrib contrib-type="author">
                        <name>
                            <surname>Singh</surname>
                            <given-names>Rama</given-names>
                        </name>
                        <aff>McMaster University, Canada</aff>
                    </contrib>
                </contrib-group>
                <author-notes>
                    <fn fn-type="conflict">
                        <p>
                            <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests are declared.</p>
                    </fn>
                </author-notes>
                <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                    <day>11</day>
                    <month>10</month>
                    <year>2024</year>
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                <p>Response to Reviewer (Dr. Joseph Jordania):</p>
                <p> A peacock manuscript coming from a fruit fly lab must surely appear as odd. Our long term research on sex and reproduction related genes and their role in evolution and speciation led our interest to sexual selection and mate choice. This gave rise important discoveries such as: the 
                    <italic>faster evolution of sex and reproduction related genes</italic> (Haerty et al. 2007. Genetics177: 1321-1335), 
                    <italic>a theory of male drive</italic> (Singh and Kulathinal 2005. BioEssays 27: 518-25; Jagadeeshan et al. 2015. PLoS ONE. doi:10.1371/journal.pone.0144672), and the 
                    <italic>mate choice theory of menopause</italic> (PLoS Com. Biol. 
                    <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pcbi.1003092">https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pcbi.1003092</ext-link>).</p>
                <p> A casual observation of a picture of the peacock&#x2019;s train in a Press Release from our lab drew our attention to the stunning geometric patterns of eyespots formation on the peacock&#x2019;s train. This led to over three years of investigation that is described in the article under review. We discovered a simple developmental rule behind the symmetry of the train and we thought our findings had important bearing on the theory of sexual selection and female choice. We wrote the paper, submitted it to the journal, and eagerly waited for the response. We got the response and we were disappointed.</p>
                <p> The main problem was that while the data and the results of the study had to do with 
                    <italic>anatomical development</italic>, their implications were in the area of evolution and sexual selection. &#x00a0;When the paper was submitted to developmental journals, we were told to submit it to evolution journals or to anatomy. When we submitted to evolutionary journals, we were told they had difficulty finding reviewers and when they did find reviewers, they had very little to say about what we had found and framed their reviews solely based on what they said were speculations about the significance of our work. We tried many journals (before this submission), and the outcomes were the same. You may ask: what was the main criticism?</p>
                <p> Simply put, reviewers did not like the hypothesis that the long tail meant tall train which would confer dominance on males which they could use in male-male competition and mate selection. We were forced down to remove almost any mention of male drive and male dominance in mate choice. And yet it is the same theory of male drive which was the basis of the mate choice theory of menopause which drew worldwide attention (Morton et al. 2013).</p>
                <p> In our opinion, Darwin missed out on the connection between the &#x201c;mal-adaptive&#x201d; long tail and the &#x201c;dominance-conferring&#x201d; tall train. A tall train allows males to compete against other males as well as serve as a big display to attract females. We thought we were proposing a new angle to look at the tail but it was treated as mere speculation. Evolutionary biology feeds on critical and thoughtful speculations as they become the basis for constructing new hypotheses. Darwin&#x2019;s big book was all speculations, albeit very thought out and persuasive speculations. When a study is about testing a hypothesis the results and implications can be straightforward. Our study was not about testing a hypothesis; our study was about exploring the rules of pattern formation in the peacock tail and our findings had implications to mate choice, both males and females. &#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;</p>
                <p> Our intention was more than simply to publish a paper. Our intention was to reopen the discussion on the female choice hypothesis which has dominated evolutionary biology for a century and a half and has shaped our thinking and societal sexual norms how mate choice works.</p>
                <p> We are pleased with the reviewer&#x2019;s comments and with his Approval (with revisions) of the papers but also for brining tour attention to literatures that we had ignored, in particular, the paper on aposematic hypothesis and its application to the evolution of peacock&#x2019;s train. We thank the reviewer for considering the publication of this paper and for enabling the discussion on the evolution of peacock&#x2019;s tail. Reviewers&#x2019; comments are all very helpful and they will be taken into consideration in revising the manuscript.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> We sincerely thank the reviewer for suggesting these interesting papers. All the changes suggested by the reviewer have been made and all the references/works have been included and discussed. This has led to rewriting of the section &#x201c;Implication for sexual selection theories and a hypothesis&#x201d; in the Discussion and the conclusions in the Abstract.</p>
                <p> </p>
                <p> Rama Singh (Author)</p>
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