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            <journal-id journal-id-type="pmc">F1000Research</journal-id>
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                <journal-title>F1000Research</journal-title>
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            <issn pub-type="epub">2046-1402</issn>
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                <publisher-name>F1000 Research Limited</publisher-name>
                <publisher-loc>London, UK</publisher-loc>
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            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.12688/f1000research.2-128.v1</article-id>
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                <subj-group subj-group-type="heading">
                    <subject>Commentary</subject>
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                <subj-group>
                    <subject>Articles</subject>
                    <subj-group>
                        <subject>Community Ecology &amp; Biodiversity</subject>
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                    <subj-group>
                        <subject>Population Ecology</subject>
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            <title-group>
                <article-title>Discovery of continental-scale travelling waves and lagged synchrony in geometrid moth outbreaks prompt a re-evaluation of mountain birch/geometrid studies</article-title>
                <fn-group content-type="pub-status">
                    <fn>
                        <p>[version 1; peer review: 2 approved]</p>
                    </fn>
                </fn-group>
            </title-group>
            <contrib-group>
                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="yes">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Tenow</surname>
                        <given-names>Olle</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <xref ref-type="corresp" rid="c1">a</xref>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a1">1</xref>
                </contrib>
                <aff id="a1">
                    <label>1</label>Department of Ecology, Swedish University of Agricultural Sciences, Uppsala, SE-750 07, Sweden</aff>
            </contrib-group>
            <author-notes>
                <corresp id="c1">
                    <label>a</label>
                    <email xlink:href="mailto:olle.tenow@blixtmail.se">olle.tenow@blixtmail.se</email>
                </corresp>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                </fn>
            </author-notes>
            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>20</day>
                <month>5</month>
                <year>2013</year>
            </pub-date>
            <pub-date pub-type="collection">
                <year>2013</year>
            </pub-date>
            <volume>2</volume>
            <elocation-id>128</elocation-id>
            <history>
                <date date-type="accepted">
                    <day>7</day>
                    <month>5</month>
                    <year>2013</year>
                </date>
            </history>
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                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2013 Tenow O</copyright-statement>
                <copyright-year>2013</copyright-year>
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            <abstract>
                <p>The spatio-temporal dynamics of populations of two 9&#x2013;10 year cyclic-outbreaking geometrids, 
                    <italic toggle="yes">Operophtera brumata</italic> and 
                    <italic toggle="yes">Epirrita autumnata</italic> in mountain birch forests in northern Fennoscandia, have been studied since the 1970&#x00b4;s by a Swedish-Norwegian research team and, during the last decade, by Norwegian and Finnish research teams. Some of the early results have been challenged by the Norwegian team. To examine the base for disagreements, five of the papers published by the Norwegian team (2004&#x2013;2011) are reviewed. It is found that conclusions in these papers are questionable or data could not be interpreted fully because two decisive traits in the spatio-temporal behaviour of outbreaks of the two species were not considered.</p>
            </abstract>
            <kwd-group kwd-group-type="author">
                <kwd>Operophtera brumata; Epirrita autumnata</kwd>
                <kwd>defoliation</kwd>
                <kwd>Scandinavia</kwd>
                <kwd>population dynamics</kwd>
            </kwd-group>
            <funding-group>
                <funding-statement>The author(s) declared that no grants were involved in supporting this work.</funding-statement>
            </funding-group>
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    <body>
        <sec sec-type="intro">
            <title>Introduction</title>
            <p>Two recent observations of the spatio-temporal outbreak pattern of some extensively studied geometrid moth species necessitate a re-evaluation of previously published findings. Firstly, it has been demonstrated that defoliating outbreaks on deciduous trees of the winter moth (
                <italic toggle="yes">Operophtera brumata</italic> L.) and associated geometrids every 9&#x2013;10 years travel as a wave across Europe from east to west with the front of the wave stretching from high to low latitudes
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-1">1</xref>
                </sup>. Secondly, long-term studies on the temporal behaviour of 
                <italic toggle="yes">Epirrita autumnata</italic>, an associated geometrid, and 
                <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> in the mountain chain of Scandinavia (the Scandes) and northern Finland show that outbreaks of 
                <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> have been synchronized with those of 
                <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> with a time lag of about 1&#x2013;2 years
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-2">2</xref>&#x2013;
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-4">4</xref>
                </sup>.</p>
            <p>Temporal dynamics of populations of cyclic geometrids have been studied in some parts of central Europe (e.g. Raimondo 
                <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2004
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-5">5</xref>
                </sup>; Glavendeki&#x0107; 2002
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-6">6</xref>
                </sup>; Kula 2008
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-7">7</xref>
                </sup>). However, research on spatio-temporal behaviour seems to have been undertaken only in Fennoscandia (Norway, Sweden and Finland), i.e., on 
                <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic>, 
                <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> and 
                <italic toggle="yes">Agriopis aurantiaria</italic> on birch (
                <italic toggle="yes">Betula pubescens</italic> and 
                <italic toggle="yes">B. p. czerepanovii</italic>=mountain birch). These studies started with a historical survey of outbreaks on birch of 
                <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> and 
                <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> that covered the years 1862&#x2013;1968 in the geographical area of Fennoscandia
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-8">8</xref>
                </sup>. It revealed that 12 outbreak periods had occurred during the surveyed period, with an average interval of 9&#x2013;10 years. The survey was followed-up for the years 1969&#x2013;2001
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-9">9</xref>
                </sup>, adding three more outbreak periods, this time with quantitative data (including for 
                <italic toggle="yes">A. aurantiaria</italic>) for the period 1990&#x2013;2001
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-3">3</xref>
                </sup>. In these studies, it was found that outbreaks sometimes occurred contemporaneously along the Scandes and sometimes moved as a wave from north to south along the Scandes or from south to north. Although true within the scope of these studies, it has now been demonstrated that the patterns described are illusions caused by continental-scale outbreak waves passing the Scandes either in parallel or obliquely from north or south
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-1">1</xref>
                </sup>. Another study, also restricted to Fennoscandia, showed that waves of 
                <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> outbreaks during the four outbreak periods from 1970&#x2013;2004 have, on average, travelled across Fennoscandia from about NE/E to SW/W
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-1">1</xref>
                </sup>. This aligns with the results in Klemola 
                <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2006)
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-10">10</xref>
                </sup>.</p>
            <p>In Tenow 
                <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2013)
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-1">1</xref>
                </sup>, it is argued that local and even regional population dynamics of a species cannot be properly understood if large-scale waves in cyclic populations occur without them being recognized. The prime examples of such misinterpretations on a regional scale are the descriptions of outbreak waves in the above-mentioned papers
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-8">8</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-9">9</xref>
                </sup>. The purpose of this paper is to expose further examples of similar shortcomings.</p>
            <sec>
                <title>Commentary on five papers regarding the local and regional spatio-temporal population behaviour of 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> and 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic>
                </title>
                <p>In 1999, a Norwegian project was launched to cover one cycle of the population ecology of 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> and 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> in northern Fennoscandia. The project has hitherto (2013) produced 22 papers (
                    <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="http://www.birchmoth.com/">http://www.birchmoth.com/</ext-link>) of which nine focus on local and regional spatio-temporal population behaviour of mainly 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic>. The results and conclusions in five of them are relevant in the present context. These papers are Ims 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2004)
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-11">11</xref>
                    </sup>, Hagen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2008)
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-12">12</xref>
                    </sup>, Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2009a)
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-13">13</xref>
                    </sup>, Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2009b)
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-14">14</xref>
                    </sup> and Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2011)
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>
                    </sup>. The papers are interconnected, and to a large extent written by the same authors, and are therefore considered together. They are commented on in order of publication year.</p>
                <p>For information on the investigation region, area and sites, see maps, 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1</xref>, modified from Tenow 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2007, Figure 3)
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-3">3</xref>
                    </sup> and Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2011, Figure 3)
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>
                    </sup>.</p>
                <fig fig-type="figure" id="f1" orientation="portrait" position="float">
                    <label>Figure 1. </label>
                    <caption>
                        <p>
                            <bold>a</bold>) Map of northern Fennoscandia where defoliations of birch forests during outbreaks of 
                            <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> and 
                            <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> in 2000&#x2013;2008 were mapped from satellite imagery (Jepsen 
                            <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2009a
                            <sup>
                                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-13">13</xref>
                            </sup>; 2009b
                            <sup>
                                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-14">14</xref>
                            </sup>). Framed area marks the area for intensive studies of 
                            <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> occurrence in 1999&#x2013;2009 (Ims 
                            <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2004
                            <sup>
                                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-11">11</xref>
                            </sup>; Hagen 
                            <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2008
                            <sup>
                                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-12">12</xref>
                            </sup>; Jepsen 
                            <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2011
                            <sup>
                                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>
                            </sup>). 
                            <bold>b</bold>) Map of intensive study area with study sites and indicated movement directions of the wave of the 1990s 
                            <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> occurrence (Ims 
                            <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2004
                            <sup>
                                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-11">11</xref>
                            </sup>; Hagen 
                            <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2008
                            <sup>
                                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-12">12</xref>
                            </sup>; Jepsen 
                            <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2011
                            <sup>
                                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>
                            </sup>). Pink = the wave has passed the sites and populations are in the low phase; green = crash phase; blue = peak and crash phases. Island sites: 12 (&#x00c5;r&#x00f8;y), 10 (Karls&#x00f8;y), 8 (D&#x00e5;v&#x00f8;y), 6 (Vengs&#x00f8;y), 4 (Rekvik), 2 (Tuss&#x00f8;y). Mainland sites: 11 (Lyngen), 9 (Rein&#x00f8;y), 7 (D&#x00e5;fjord), 5 (Skulsfjord), 3 (Tromvik), 1 (Sandvik). Numbers of sites are from Jepsen 
                            <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2011, Figure 3)
                            <sup>
                                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>
                            </sup>; corresponding names from Ims 
                            <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2004, 
                            <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1</xref>)
                            <sup>
                                <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-11">11</xref>
                            </sup>.</p>
                    </caption>
                    <graphic orientation="portrait" position="float" xlink:href="https://f1000research-files.f1000.com/manuscripts/855/44368c3c-4caa-4833-b72d-80121fdf9681_figure1.gif"/>
                </fig>
                <p>Ims 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2004) Do sub-Arctic winter moth populations in coastal birch forest exhibit spatially synchronous dynamics? 
                    <italic toggle="yes">Journal of Animal Ecology</italic> 73: 1129&#x2013;1136
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-11">11</xref>
                    </sup>.</p>
                <p>This paper deals with the spatio-temporal behaviour of 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> populations in north-western-most Norway (Troms County; 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1a</xref>) in 1999&#x2013;2002 (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1</xref> in the paper; cf. Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2011 below
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>
                    </sup>). 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> was omitted from the study because of insufficient numbers in this coastal area. In an early study
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-8">8</xref>
                    </sup> based on historical documentation, it was suggested that climatic forcing (the Moran effect) may have synchronized the 9&#x2013;10-year cyclic outbreaks of 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> (and 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic>) occurring in the Scandes and northern Finland. The actual study raised the question as to whether this suggestion withstands closer scrutiny in terms of more detailed quantitative data. Commenting on the short duration of the study, it is said</p>
                <p>&#x201c;&#x2026;
                    <italic toggle="yes">although studies of dynamics of cyclic populations for many purposes need to span a longer time period than the time period of a cycle (i.e., 10 years for the focal moth species) the degree of synchronous dynamics can be evaluated from more short termed data (.....)"</italic>, and, 
                    <italic toggle="yes">"for cyclic populations, identifying and comparing the phase among sites at any given time would be sufficient to verify the prevalence of synchrony. Here we use the latter approach on our 4-year data set&#x2026;</italic>&#x201d;.</p>
                <p>The female 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> moth has stunted wings and cannot fly. Physical barriers, such as sea water between mainland and islands at the coast, may therefore prevent the spread of females and isolate island populations. On the understanding that the climate is identical, differing population dynamics on the mainland and nearby islands should imply the disruption of the Moran effect. Six pairs of sites were selected from east to west in the north-western coastal part of Troms, each with one site on the mainland (or a large island) and one on a medium-sized island, separated by &gt;1.5 km of open sea (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1b</xref>). At each site, the number of caterpillars per sampled twig at a number of stations up-slope was recorded over four years (1999&#x2013;2002).</p>
                <p>It was found that population densities were low on all islands, except for one (site 2, Tuss&#x00f8;y), and that populations there were maximally out of phase with peaking populations on the mainland, or populations that had recently peaked, except for one (site 1, Sandvik). The authors concluded that</p>
                <p>&#x201c;&#x2026;
                    <italic toggle="yes">the distinct asynchrony between adjacent sites (&lt;10 km apart) clearly belonging to the same climatic domain rules out the possibility that climate or, for that matter any other supposedly large-scale phenomenon (.....) could be responsible for the population phase differences</italic>&#x201d;.</p>
                <p>Thus, the notion of a large-scale spatial synchrony due to a Moran effect was rejected, at least for coastal birch forest.</p>
                <p>Later, it was shown
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-3">3</xref>
                    </sup> that a large-scale 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata/O. brumata</italic> outbreak wave arrived at northern Fennoscandia from the east in 1991&#x2013;1992. The wave travelled westward across the region and reached the eastern part of Troms in 1994&#x2013;1995, and finally the west coast of Troms in about 2000 where the mainland/island study was performed. It was stated in Tenow 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2007)
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-3">3</xref>
                    </sup> that this wave must be considered when the results of that study are to be interpreted.</p>
                <p>Since then, Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2011)
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>
                    </sup> have added seven more years to the data set, which now comprises the years 1999&#x2013;2009. This offers an opportunity to re-evaluate the 2004 results. The low density island sites, seen in 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1</xref> in the paper, may be subdivided into three groups from east to west within the investigation area (cf. enlargement of population curves for 1999&#x2013;2002 in Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2011, Figure 3, and comments to that paper below
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>
                    </sup>): one group consisting of the easternmost site and the two northernmost sites that experienced an evident low during the study time (1999&#x2013;2002) (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1b</xref>: sites 8, 10, 12) and one group of the next two island sites to the south-west that underwent the greatest crash phase during the same period (sites 4, 6). Finally, the south-western-most island site (2) exhibited a full peak and a crash. The mainland sites may also be divided into three groups; the easternmost site with an evident low during the study (11), the two northernmost sites with a crash (7, 9; although site 9 shows a deviating population curve), and the three south-western-most sites with a full peak and a crash (1, 3, 5). This demonstrates that the wave of the 1990s, which arrived to eastern Troms in 1994&#x2013;1995 and then continued westward, had already passed across the northern part of the investigation area before the study, i.e., about the middle of the 1990s. Then, in 1999&#x2013;2002, the wave was recorded at the south-western island sites in its crash phase and finally, in 2000&#x2013;2004, it was caught up lingering at the south-western-most mainland sites in its peak and crash phases. Hence, by first reaching the island sites in the north in the direction E-W, then the island sites along the west coast in the direction N-S, and finally the mainland sites inside the islands, it behaved like a wave "breaking" successively over the mainland part of the investigation area (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1b</xref>). Of the six pairs of sites, only one (9, 10) indicates populations that may have been maximally out of phase-one branch of the wave passed south of the investigation area already in 1994&#x2013;1995
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-3">3</xref>
                    </sup>.</p>
                <p>In conclusion, there were no distinct, maximally out of phase of population dynamics between sites on mainland and nearby islands. Hence, the Moran effect cannot be discarded. Instead, there was a continuous progression over the investigation area of the large-scale wave of the 1990s, first via the island sites then to the mainland sites. Therefore, at any given time, populations separated in space in the direction of the wave had been in continuous change in larval density. Furthermore, the continuation of the study (cf. Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2011
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>
                    </sup>) clearly demonstrates that a four-year study in this case was not sufficient to allow a correct interpretation.</p>
                <p>Hagen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2008) Anisotropic patterned population synchrony in climatic gradients indicates nonlinear climatic forcing. 
                    <italic toggle="yes">Proceedings of the Royal Society</italic> B 275: 1509&#x2013;1515
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-12">12</xref>
                    </sup>.</p>
                <p>The paper gives detailed data on spatio-temporal changes in larval abundance of 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> and 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> in vertical and horizontal directions on a coastal mountain slope (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1b</xref>: site 9, Rein&#x00f8;ya) in 2001&#x2013;2007. It is assumed that the air temperature gradients decrease linearly with increasing altitude whereas the temperature is approximately the same in a horizontal direction at each altitude. It is predicted that the varying sensitivity of different insect life stages to climate can cause a non-linear forcing on population synchrony along altitudinal air temperature gradients on slopes. If there is a nonlinear forcing in this case, a synchronisation caused by a Moran effect could be rejected. It is stated that the `global spline correlogram&#x00b4;, applied for each species, was based on all population time series (i.e., 2001&#x2013;2007). In the beginning of the results section, the authors stated:</p>
                <p>&#x201c;
                    <italic toggle="yes">The 7-year time series of both species exhibit sufficient temporal variation to provide an useful basis for investigating patterns of population synchrony (&#x2026;.). That is, all populations had crashed at the end of the study, enabling us to highlight synchrony of the crash phase of the population cycle</italic>&#x201d;.</p>
                <p>It is shown that 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> went through all stages of a regular cycle (increase, peak, and crash during 5 years, followed by a low) during the 7 years. The changes of the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> population showed more variation but the overall trend was less steep and often lagged behind 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic>. There is no mention of cycle phases other than the crash phase (
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic>), nor mention of successive population cycles or of outbreak waves (cf. Tenow 1972
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-8">8</xref>
                    </sup>; Tenow 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2007
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-3">3</xref>
                    </sup>) only of &#x201c;more complex spatial patterns&#x201d;. Directional (anisotropic) correlograms for 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> showed that the synchrony declined steeply in altitudinal direction but not in the horizontal direction of the slope. 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> did not exhibit any anisotropy in either direction.</p>
                <p>These results can be compared with Schott 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2010)
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-16">16</xref>
                    </sup>, a study based on the same data. That study clearly points out a crash phase for 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic>, for the cycle of the 1990s, in addition to that of the first decade of the twenty-first century. The crash of the 1990s occurred in 2001 or 2000&#x2013;2001, followed by a population low in 2002 (Schott 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2010, Figure 3
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-16">16</xref>
                    </sup>, most distinct at higher altitudes). The same low is visible, although faint, for the same site in Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2011; Figure 3
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>
                    </sup>). For 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic>, the crash phase of the cycle of the 1990s had occurred before the start of the project. The low occurred in 2001 or 2000&#x2013;2001, i.e., 1&#x2013;2 years ahead of 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic>. Evidently, the low for each species separated the cycle/wave of the 1990s (cf. Ims 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2004 above
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-11">11</xref>
                    </sup>) from the following one in the 2000s (cf. Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2011 below
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>
                    </sup>). For 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic>, the peak of the latter cycle occurred in 2004&#x2013;2005 at the two highest altitudes, followed by a crash at all altitudes in 2006&#x2013;2007. For 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic>, the peak of the same cycle occurred contemporaneously at all altitudes in 2002&#x2013;2003, two years ahead of 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> at the two highest altitudes (Schott 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2010, Figure 3
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-16">16</xref>
                    </sup>). The crash followed in 2005&#x2013;2006, also at all altitudes.</p>
                <p>The 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> low in 2002, shown in Schott 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2010, Figure 3
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-16">16</xref>
                    </sup>), means that 2002 was a year of transition between the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> cycle of 1990s and that of the 2000s. In the analysis of the spatially directed (anisotropic) synchrony patterns, this low is not acknowledged, although visible with an expected time lag after 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> in Figure 4 of the paper (cf. Schott 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2010, Figure 3
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-16">16</xref>
                    </sup>), and the 7-year time series for 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> seems to have been treated as one single long crash phase. It is important here to point out that no specific cycle (increase, peak and crash) lasts 7 years, not to mention the crash phase, which used to be the most rapid of the three phases. As a consequence, two successive 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> cycles became involved in the analysis, the crash in 2001 of the cycle of the 1990s, the low in 2002 and the full cycle of the 2000s. According to Figure 3 in Schott 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2010)
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-16">16</xref>
                    </sup>, populations at the same altitudes (240, 170 and 100 m above sea level, respectively) were much less synchronized during the crash of the cycle of the 1990s than during phases of the cycle of the 2000s, including the crash. Despite the fact that these fluctuations constitute a minor part in the analysis, they may have created undue variation. In addition, to be comparable, the analysis for the two geometrids should probably have covered the same phases of the outbreak cycle (increase, peak, crash), or the years 2002&#x2013;2004 (2005) for 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> and, with the time lag, the years 2003&#x2013;2005 (2006) for 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic>. It is obvious from Figure 4 in the paper that the spatio-temporal population behaviour during the same phases was similar for the two species. These circumstances cast doubt on the claim that there was an &#x201c;anisotropic patterned population synchrony in climatic gradients&#x201d; for 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic>.</p>
                <p>The &#x201c;target&#x201d; concept is mentioned in the paper; implying that the target, the Moran effect, will be aimed at with precision and accuracy. However, the precision of advanced statistical methods is in vain when accuracy is poor, as can be suspected in this case. The study did not account for the cycles in two successive outbreak waves that passed the site. This makes it open to questions. Does this omission imply that the analysis of the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> data became biased and that the result therefore is unreliable?</p>
                <p>Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2009a) Monitoring the spatio-temporal dynamics of geometrid moth outbreaks in birch forest using MODIS-NDVI data. 
                    <italic toggle="yes">Remote Sensing of Environment</italic> 113: 1939&#x2013;1947
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-13">13</xref>
                    </sup>.</p>
                <p>This study monitored the defoliations of mountain birch forests across northern Fennoscandia (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1a</xref>) in 2000&#x2013;2008. This was achieved by satellite imagery and the different contributions from the two geometrids 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> and 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> were not specified. One result identified was that the defoliation had spread north-eastward along the mountain chain. Thereby, the conclusion in Tenow 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2007)
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-3">3</xref>
                    </sup> is challenged namely that outbreaks, like that during the preceding period 1990&#x2013;1999, obey a consistent pattern by moving in a wave-like fashion broadly from east to west. Instead, it is stated that</p>
                <p>&#x201c;
                    <italic toggle="yes">Even without a formal analysis of the spatial dynamics of defoliation, our data indicate that this is not so. Future analysis of the spatio-temporal dynamics of defoliation patterns will substantiate this</italic>&#x201d;.</p>
                <p>In any case, here the existence of unidirectional outbreak movements in northern Fennoscandia seems to be accepted (cf. below).</p>
                <p>The surveyed region stretches from Varangerfjord in north-eastern-most Norway to the outer coast of Troms County in north-western Norway, a distance of about 400 km (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1a</xref>). Visible defoliations appeared first at the inner part of Varangerfjord in 2002 where they peaked in 2003. In 2004, widespread defoliations could be seen in the middle and the south-western-most parts of the surveyed region (south-west Troms and adjoining parts of Sweden and Finland, 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1a</xref>). In 2005, they faded away farthest to the southwest while expanding in the middle part. In 2005, defoliations were again visible at Varangerfjord. They peaked in 2006&#x2013;2007 and ceased in 2008 (Figure 7 in the paper).</p>
                <p>It is known that the defoliations at Varangerfjord in 2002&#x2013;2003 were caused by 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> (Klemola, T. 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2008, 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1</xref>
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-4">4</xref>
                    </sup>). It is also known that the 2004&#x2013;2005 defoliations in the middle, inner parts, e.g. Kilpisj&#x00e4;rvi-Enonteki&#x00f6; (
                    <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="http://www.metsa.fi/news">Forststyrelsen, Finland</ext-link>; 
                    <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="http://www.naturochmiljo.fi/sve/arkiv/artiklar">Finlands Natur</ext-link> 4/5/2005) and Karasjok-Kautokeino areas in Norway and Finland (
                    <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="http://.skogforsk.no/skogskade/">Skogskader p&#x00e5; Internet</ext-link> 22/6/2005) and in the inner, south-western-most part, e.g. in Dividalen in Norway (
                    <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="http://.skogforsk.no/skogskade/">Skogskader p&#x00e5; Internet</ext-link> 6/7/2004) and the Lake Tornetr&#x00e4;sk-Kiruna area in Sweden (
                    <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="http://www.esil.se/prot">Entomologiska S&#x00e4;llskapet i Lund</ext-link> 24/9/2004; Dagens Nyheter 26/7/2004) were caused by 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic>. Finally, there were again defoliations at Varangerfjord in 2005&#x2013;2007, however, this time by 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic>
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-4">4</xref>
                    </sup>. It is stated that</p>
                <p>" 
                    <italic toggle="yes">Where the two species occur sympatrically within their outbreak range, there is a partial interspecific synchrony in the timing of the outbreaks, but with winter moth often lagging 1&#x2013;2 years behind autumnal moth</italic>&#x2026;".</p>
                <p>If this well-known 1&#x2013;2 year lag (e.g. Hagen 2007
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-17">17</xref>
                    </sup>; Tenow 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2007
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-3">3</xref>
                    </sup>; Klemola 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2008
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-4">4</xref>
                    </sup>) is applied to the satellite mapping (in addition to the acceptance of waves), it is evident that there was also a lagged defoliation pattern in this case, i.e., defoliations by 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> in 2002&#x2013;2003 at Varangerfjord and then by 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> in 2005&#x2013;2007 in the same area. In the meantime, the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> defoliations had spread westward to the middle and south-western parts in 2004. In 2005, the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> defoliations faded away in the south-western-most part while expanding in the middle part of the region. Therefore, when the species and time lag were not recognized, the pattern seen by satellite in 2004&#x2013;2007 was erroneously interpreted as outbreaks moving from the south-western part in 2004 via the middle part in 2005 to Varangerfjord in 2005&#x2013;2007, that is from SW to NE. As has been shown, the consistent pattern of outbreak movements is the reverse; that outbreak waves travel broadly from east to west in northern Fennoscandia (1, 3, 10). In accordance with a broadly E-W wave, 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> peaked at outbreak levels at inner coast sites of Troms in 2006
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-17">17</xref>
                    </sup> and at low densities further west at outer coast sites in 2006&#x2013;2008 (Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2011, Figure 3, site 1, 3, 5; cf. 
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1b</xref>
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>
                    </sup>), with a subsequent outbreak here in 2007&#x2013;2008 (Skogfjord, Ringvass&#x00f8;ya; cf. also Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2009b below
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-14">14</xref>
                    </sup>), i.e., with a delay of about 1 and 2 years, respectively, compared with Varangerfjord.</p>
                <p>It can be concluded that the outbreak wave of the 2000s travelled broadly E-W over northern Fennoscandia as waves have done as far back in time as can be surveyed and not occasionally in the opposite direction as stated in the paper.</p>
                <p>Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2009b) Phase-dependent outbreak dynamics of geometrid moth linked to host plant phenology. 
                    <italic toggle="yes">Proceedings of the Royal Society</italic> B 276: 4119&#x2013;4128
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-14">14</xref>
                    </sup>.</p>
                <p>This study is based on the same 2000&#x2013;2008 satellite imagery mapping of defoliations across northern Fennoscandia (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1a</xref>) as used by Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2009a; above)
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-13">13</xref>
                    </sup>. The satellite mapping did not discriminate between 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> and 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> defoliations because, again, their different contributions could not be separated. The authors applied two analytical approaches to the spatio-temporal defoliation data. The first approach was focused on population synchrony, namely to assess how synchrony depends on distance. Synchrony can take the form of phase-dependent synchrony, meaning that the degree of synchrony may differ between the increase, peak and crash phases (here evidently implying that phases for the two species coincided). The second approach focused on the rate of spread of defoliation. It was found that defoliation could be divided in three phases. Thus, the analyses comprised estimation of the area of defoliated forest during each of the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">incipient</italic> (2000&#x2013;2002), 
                    <italic toggle="yes">epidemic</italic> (2003&#x2013;2005) and 
                    <italic toggle="yes">crash</italic> (2006&#x2013;2008) 
                    <italic toggle="yes">phases</italic> (Figure 2 in the paper). The analyses revealed that the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">incipient phase</italic> was characterized by high regional synchrony and long defoliation spread distances per year, whereas the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">epidemic</italic> and 
                    <italic toggle="yes">crash phases</italic> were characterized by much lower regional synchrony and a much shorter spread of defoliation. This suggests two independent spread-steps, one long-range process and one very short-range diffusion-like process. As for defoliation, the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">incipient phase</italic> of the outbreak showed a higher regional synchrony in the onset of plant growth (budburst) than the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">later phases</italic> of the outbreak.</p>
                <p>There is no discussion about potential outbreak waves crossing the region (cf. Klemola. 2006
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-10">10</xref>
                    </sup>; Tenow 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2007
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-3">3</xref>
                    </sup>). It is assumed (in the Introduction) that the spatio-temporal synchrony of large-scale outbreaks may be explained by a putative regionalized Moran effect, e.g. a match/mismatch between moth and host phonologies</p>
                <p>&#x201c;
                    <italic toggle="yes">Such a phenological mismatch-driven Moran effect could also be responsible for the more complex dynamics recently reported for birch forest moths (Klemola et al. 2006; Tenow et al. 2007)</italic>&#x201d;.</p>
                <p>We now know that geometrid outbreak wave travelled from south-eastern Europe to the Atlantic coast in the 2000s and in the 1990s (as well as in earlier decades
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-1">1</xref>
                    </sup>). It is evident from comments to papers above that both waves crossed the region. During the investigation period (2000&#x2013;2008), the wave of the 1990s still lingered during 2000&#x2013;2004 in the coastal area farthest to the west (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1b</xref>: sites 1&#x2013;3, 5; Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2011, Figure 3
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>
                    </sup>; cf. below). It also embraced the low between the two waves, which should have been in 2000&#x2013;2002, as a mean for this particular region (Figure 2 a in Tenow 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2013
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-1">1</xref>
                    </sup>), that is, during the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">incipient phase</italic>. At the end of a low, local populations become released from delayed density-dependent constraints. In older literature, this phase is named the latent phase, with populations still low but prone to increase, for the geometrids according to their 9&#x2013;10-year cyclicity. The average travel speed of the wave during the 2000s can be approximated to about 300 km/year (Figure 2 a in Tenow 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2013
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-1">1</xref>
                    </sup>). When the low between the two waves travelled westward at about 300 km year by year, the populations passed by the low should have been in the latent/increase phase at that point. This should apply for most of the populations within the approximately 400 km wide region mapped during the 2000&#x2013;2002 low (cf. Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2009a above
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-13">13</xref>
                    </sup>).</p>
                <p>The average speed of about 300 km/year implies that the wave should have travelled the distance from Varangerfjord to the coast of Troms in about 2 years, allowing for delay in some coastal areas (Figure 3 in Tenow 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2007
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-3">3</xref>
                    </sup>; Figure 4 in Tenow 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2013
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-1">1</xref>
                    </sup>). This is in accordance with the time lapse of about 2 years between 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> outbreaks at Varangerfjord in 2002&#x2013;2003 and in the south-western most part of the region in 2004&#x2013;2005 (Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2009a above
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-13">13</xref>
                    </sup>), a distance of about 400 km, and of about 2 years between 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> outbreaks at Varangerfjord in 2005&#x2013;2007 and at Skogfjord at the coast in 2007&#x2013;2008 (Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2009a above
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-13">13</xref>
                    </sup>).</p>
                <p>A time lag between the defoliations is not discussed despite being acknowledged in previous papers
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-12">12</xref>,
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-17">17</xref>
                    </sup>. Instead, it is stated that 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> and 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic>
                </p>
                <p>&#x201c;&#x2026;
                    <italic toggle="yes">exhibit largely synchronous dynamics, with winter moth dominating at termination of the outbreaks</italic>&#x2026;&#x201d;.</p>
                <p>The lag between species was distinct for the Varangerfjord area to the east (high populations
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-4">4</xref>
                    </sup>). Also, in the western part (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1b</xref>), a time lag occurred between the two species (low populations) at site 11 (Lyngenfjord)
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-18">18</xref>
                    </sup> and was repeated one year later at site 9 (Rein&#x00f8;ya) to the northwest
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-16">16</xref>
                    </sup>.</p>
                <p>Because of the wave and the lag, the phase-dependent outbreak dynamics depicted was in reality two separate dynamics, one for each outbreak species. The 
                    <italic toggle="yes">incipient phase</italic> (2000&#x2013;2002) that occurred between the two waves should mainly have consisted of latent and slowly increasing populations of 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> over part of the region first, followed later by 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic>. Released in 2000&#x2013;2001, the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> populations at Varangerfjord peaked in 2002&#x2013;2003, partly within the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">incipient phase</italic>, with increasing areas being defoliated without any significant participation of 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic>
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-4">4</xref>
                    </sup>. They then crashed in 2004&#x2013;2005 during the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">epidemic phase</italic>. The 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> defoliations did not begin to increase in the Varangerfjord area until 2003&#x2013;2004 where they peaked in 2005&#x2013;2006
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-4">4</xref>
                    </sup> at the transition between the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">epidemic</italic> and 
                    <italic toggle="yes">crash phases</italic>, thus dominating in defoliated areas during the first year of the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">crash phase</italic> (cf. Figure 7 in Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2009a
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-13">13</xref>
                    </sup>). Finally, 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> crashed in 2007&#x2013;2008
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-4">4</xref>
                    </sup> (Figure 7 in Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2009a
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-13">13</xref>
                    </sup>) at the end of the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">crash phase</italic>. As the wave of outbreaks proceeded westward, 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> peaked over most of the region in 2004&#x2013;2005 and thereby completely dominated in defoliated areas during the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">epidemic phase</italic>. On the other hand, 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> came to peak at the west coast of Troms in 2006
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-17">17</xref>
                    </sup> and 2007&#x2013;2008 (Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2011, Figure 3
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>
                    </sup>) during the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">crash phase</italic>. In this area, the satellite did not record any extensive defoliation despite severe outbreaks. The topography is steep and the forest is fragmented. Because of this, the area of 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> defoliation is most likely to have been underestimated in the western coastal region compared with the area in the Varanger region with its smoother topography and more continuous forests
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-13">13</xref>
                    </sup>. This is supported by reports on large 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> outbreaks across northern Norway in 2006
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-17">17</xref>
                    </sup>, i.e., in areas that were closer to the coast than the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> outbreaks (cf. Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2008
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-19">19</xref>
                    </sup>). When summarising the time scales, it is obvious that 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> dominated defoliation that moved progressively from east to west during the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">incipient</italic> and 
                    <italic toggle="yes">epidemic phases</italic> (2002&#x2013;2005) and 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic>, with some overlap, in a similar way during the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">crash phase</italic> (2005&#x2013;2008), all according to the time lag between the species. Thus, neither dynamic fitted the applied presumed periods of the phase-dependent synchrony.</p>
                <p>According to the definition of a wave, defoliations that were widely separated in space can hardly have been contemporaneous during the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">incipient</italic>, 
                    <italic toggle="yes">epidemic</italic> and 
                    <italic toggle="yes">crash</italic> phases. In addition, these phases are split in one and the same area due to the time lag between species. Therefore, it cannot be claimed that the spread of defoliation was determined by a 
                    <italic toggle="yes">stationary</italic>, step-wise process, one incipient long-range step and one later short-range.</p>
                <p>The onset of plant growth (budburst) had a phase-dependent pattern of spatial synchrony during the 
                    <italic toggle="yes">incipient phase</italic> that was similar to that in the occurrence of defoliation (above; although with a much higher level of spatial synchrony for the former). This suggested to the authors that spring phenology plays a decisive role in the synchrony of moth outbreaks, i.e., an indirect Moran effect. However, contrary to defoliation, spring and budburst do not arrive to the region as a wave moving broadly from east to west. In line with a much higher level of spatial synchrony for budburst than for defoliation (above), budburst may occur over large areas at the same time and, probably, does not have much to do with the degree of defoliation (cf. Bylund 1999
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-20">20</xref>
                    </sup>; Nilssen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2007
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-9">9</xref>
                    </sup>). Defoliation events in northern Fennoscandia (as well as in Fennoscandia as a whole
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-8">8</xref>
                    </sup>), are cyclic and tightly connected to the outbreak waves that pass broadly from east to west approximately every 9&#x2013;10 years
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-1">1</xref>,
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-3">3</xref>,
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-10">10</xref>
                    </sup>. Why these waves travel as they do and if/how they force cyclicity upon local populations is not known. What can be said is that there is no known direct or indirect effect of climate forcing on any match/mismatch of plant/insect synchrony that, firstly, can cause a 9&#x2013;10-year cyclicity locally and, secondly, travels across Europe from east to west every 9&#x2013;10 years
                    <sup>
                        <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-1">1</xref>
                    </sup>. In addition, in northern Fennoscandia such an effect should act twice, first on 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> and then on 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic>, with a lag of 1&#x2013;2 years. Should the match/mismatch apply only to 
                    <italic toggle="yes">E. autumnata</italic> or to both species?</p>
                <p>In conclusion, the division of outbreak dynamics in phases with different synchrony and spread speed must be questioned. Instead, it is the wave and the time lag that are important. Furthermore, contrary to what is suggested, there can be no climate-mediated Moran effect that drives the 9&#x2013;10 year passages of continental travelling waves over the region and/or drives the local 9&#x2013;10-year population cycles.</p>
                <p>Jepsen 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> (2011) Rapid northwards expansion of forest insect pest attributed to spring phenology matching with sub-Arctic birch. 
                    <italic toggle="yes">Global Change Biology</italic> 17: 2071&#x2013;2083
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                <p>This paper surveys the time period 1999&#x2013;2009 and offers interesting quantitative data on the occurrence of 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> at the same 6 pairs of sites in the western, coastal part of northern Fennoscandia as mentioned above (
                    <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1b</xref>; Ims 
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                    <italic toggle="yes">A. aurantiaria</italic> in the area; outbreak waves were not considered.</p>
                <p>Taken together, comments on the papers above reveal that waves of 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> population peaks have travelled broadly from east to west in northern Fennoscandia. This is further substantiated by the population curves depicted in Figure 3 in the paper. There is only one comment on the representation of 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> in these curves</p>
                <p>&#x201c;
                    <italic toggle="yes">Curiously, O. brumata displayed a second, much smaller, peak in abundance during the years and sites where A. aurantiaria was most abundant (2005&#x2013;2009)</italic>&#x201d;.</p>
                <p>In fact, Figure 3 in the paper catches two successive travelling waves, the waves of the 1990s and the 2000s, which together shed light on the &#x201c;curious&#x201d; peak. The 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> population curves for the eastern-most and western-most sites reveal this most clearly. At the eastern-most inland pair of sites (11, 12) and the north-eastern-most island sites (8, 10), the wave of the 1990s had already passed at the time of the study (cf. Ims 
                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2004 above
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                    <italic toggle="yes">et al.</italic> 2004 above
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                    <italic toggle="yes">A. aurantiaria</italic> occurred (as an associated geometrid), it culminated in about the same years as 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> at most sites. At the remaining, intermediary sites (4, 6, 7, 9), the crash of the wave of the 1990s remains visible plus the wave of the 2000s. The two waves are distinctly separated by a population low around (2002) 2004&#x2013;2005 for sites 1&#x2013;3, 5 (Figure 3 in the paper). Hence, during the study period, the two waves crossed the area in continuous movements from east to west, first the wave of the 1990s, then that of the 2000s. The interval between the peaks was short, about 7&#x2013;9 years compared with the overall average of 9&#x2013;10-years; however, short intervals have not been uncommon in northern Fennoscandia
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                <p>In conclusion, as demonstrated with the &#x201c;curious&#x201d; 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> peak as an example, it is not possible to interpret long-term data fully if the continental-scale outbreak waves of 
                    <italic toggle="yes">O. brumata</italic> (and associated geometrids) that pass northern Fennoscandia are neglected or not known (however, see Hagen 
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                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 1</article-title>
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                    <name>
                        <surname>Tobin</surname>
                        <given-names>Patrick</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="r967a1">1</xref>
                    <role>Referee</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0003-0237-7963</uri>
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                <aff id="r967a1">
                    <label>1</label>Ecology and Management of Invasive Species and Forest Ecosystems Unit, USDA Forest Service, Northern Research Station, Morgantown, WV, USA</aff>
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            <author-notes>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                </fn>
            </author-notes>
            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>28</day>
                <month>5</month>
                <year>2013</year>
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            <permissions>
                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2013 Tobin P</copyright-statement>
                <copyright-year>2013</copyright-year>
                <license xlink:href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/">
                    <license-p>This is an open access peer review report distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution Licence, which permits unrestricted use, distribution, and reproduction in any medium, provided the original work is properly cited.</license-p>
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            <p>The study of forest insect population dynamics has a long and storied history, and many forest insect species have served as model systems for studying conceptual processes of population biology and ecology. This is particularly the case for two geometrid species undergoing cyclical populations in Fennoscandia. A recent paper by Tenow 
                <italic>et al.</italic> (2013)
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="rep-ref-967-1">1</xref>
                </sup>, recommended in F1000Prime
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="rep-ref-967-2">2</xref>
                </sup>) revealed the presence of regular travelling waves for the winter moth (
                <italic>Operophtera brumata</italic>) across the European continent, providing evidence of the importance of continental processes in understanding regional and local dynamics of cyclical populations.</p>
            <p>In this commentary paper, Tenow contends that due to the presence of these continental-scale travelling waves, other studies within this system that do not account for these patterns could be in fact missing an important driver of population dynamics. Tenow critiques five papers to challenge their respective conclusions.&#x00a0;</p>
            <p>This commentary should stimulate a thoughtful dialogue by all involved in these studies, which undoubtedly would a benefit to others involved in the study of insect spatial and temporal dynamics.</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>NA</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard.</p>
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            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.5256/f1000research.855.r965</article-id>
            <title-group>
                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 1</article-title>
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            <contrib-group>
                <contrib contrib-type="author">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Myers</surname>
                        <given-names>Judith H</given-names>
                    </name>
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                    <role>Referee</role>
                </contrib>
                <aff id="r965a1">
                    <label>1</label>Department of Zoology, and Biodiversity Research Centre, University of British Columbia, Vancouver, BC, Canada</aff>
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            <author-notes>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                </fn>
            </author-notes>
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                <day>24</day>
                <month>5</month>
                <year>2013</year>
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                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2013 Myers JH</copyright-statement>
                <copyright-year>2013</copyright-year>
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            <p>Population cycles of two species of forest caterpillars, winter moth 
                <italic>Operophtera brumata</italic> and the autumnal moth 
                <italic>Epirrita autumnata</italic> have been studied extensively over both spatial and temporal scales in Norway, Sweden and Finland by a number of workers. Two major findings are that the outbreaks of winter moth tend to lag those of autumnal moth by one to two years, and waves of population outbreaks of both species occur from east to west across Fennoscandia with a ten-year periodicity (
                <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/22897224">Tenow 2013</ext-link>). Over the years there has been much interest in the synchronous population dynamics of cyclic species and whether this is associated with some environmental cue, wide ranging dispersal, or the movement of natural enemies among populations. The lag in outbreaks of winter moth and autumnal moth and the waves of outbreaks suggest that a single environmental cue is unlikely to explain the outbreak dynamics.</p>
            <p>Here Tenow reinterprets the results of 5 publications of population outbreaks of winter moth and autumnal moth in Norway to show how interpretations could be different if the lag between the two species and the waves of outbreaks were considered. The descriptions are complex and the paper would be clearer if the figures from the original papers were included so that it was evident what the population trends were that were being discussed. Given the extensive amount of work on this system it is useful to reevaluate earlier studies in light of more recent findings as is done here.&#x00a0;</p>
            <p>Remaining interesting questions are&#x00a0;</p>
            <p>1. What factors determine the geographical waves of outbreaks? And&#x00a0;</p>
            <p>2. Why does this apparently consistent lag occur in outbreaks of two species feeding on the same host trees?</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>NA</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard.</p>
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                    <contrib contrib-type="author">
                        <name>
                            <surname>Tenow</surname>
                            <given-names>Olle</given-names>
                        </name>
                        <aff>Swedish University of Agricultural Sciences, Sweden</aff>
                    </contrib>
                </contrib-group>
                <author-notes>
                    <fn fn-type="conflict">
                        <p>
                            <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                    </fn>
                </author-notes>
                <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                    <day>6</day>
                    <month>9</month>
                    <year>2013</year>
                </pub-date>
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                <p>Professor Meyers, many thanks for your referee report of 24 May! In it you asked for figures from the&#x00a0;papers I treated&#x00a0;to be inserted in my article to make it easier for the reader&#x00a0;to follow the text. I can only say that I asked the copyright-holders for permission to use some specified&#x00a0;figures&#x00a0;but they, sorry to say, did not allow me to do&#x00a0;that. &#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;&#x00a0;</p>
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