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        <journal-meta>
            <journal-id journal-id-type="pmc">F1000Research</journal-id>
            <journal-title-group>
                <journal-title>F1000Research</journal-title>
            </journal-title-group>
            <issn pub-type="epub">2046-1402</issn>
            <publisher>
                <publisher-name>F1000 Research Limited</publisher-name>
                <publisher-loc>London, UK</publisher-loc>
            </publisher>
        </journal-meta>
        <article-meta>
            <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.12688/f1000research.12660.1</article-id>
            <article-categories>
                <subj-group subj-group-type="heading">
                    <subject>Research Note</subject>
                </subj-group>
                <subj-group>
                    <subject>Articles</subject>
                    <subj-group>
                        <subject>Marine &amp; Freshwater Ecology</subject>
                    </subj-group>
                </subj-group>
            </article-categories>
            <title-group>
                <article-title>Rapid coral mortality following doldrums-like conditions on Iriomote, Japan</article-title>
                <fn-group content-type="pub-status">
                    <fn>
                        <p>[version 1; peer review: 1 approved, 1 approved with reservations]</p>
                    </fn>
                </fn-group>
            </title-group>
            <contrib-group>
                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="yes">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Baird</surname>
                        <given-names>Andrew H</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Conceptualization</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Data Curation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Funding Acquisition</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Investigation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Methodology</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Resources</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Validation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Original Draft Preparation</role>
                    <uri content-type="orcid">https://orcid.org/0000-0001-8504-4077</uri>
                    <xref ref-type="corresp" rid="c1">a</xref>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a1">1</xref>
                </contrib>
                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="no">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Keith</surname>
                        <given-names>Sally A.</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Conceptualization</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Funding Acquisition</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Investigation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Methodology</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Review &amp; Editing</role>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a2">2</xref>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a3">3</xref>
                </contrib>
                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="no">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Woolsey</surname>
                        <given-names>Erika</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Conceptualization</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Investigation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Methodology</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Review &amp; Editing</role>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a4">4</xref>
                </contrib>
                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="no">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Yoshida</surname>
                        <given-names>Ryuta</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Investigation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Review &amp; Editing</role>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a5">5</xref>
                </contrib>
                <contrib contrib-type="author" corresp="no">
                    <name>
                        <surname>Naruse</surname>
                        <given-names>Tohru</given-names>
                    </name>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Conceptualization</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Data Curation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Investigation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Resources</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Original Draft Preparation</role>
                    <role content-type="http://credit.niso.org/">Writing &#x2013; Review &amp; Editing</role>
                    <xref ref-type="aff" rid="a5">5</xref>
                </contrib>
                <aff id="a1">
                    <label>1</label>ARC Centre of Excellence for Coral Reefs Studies, James Cook University, Queensland, Australia</aff>
                <aff id="a2">
                    <label>2</label>Centre for Macroecology, Evolution and Climate, Natural History Museum of Denmark, University of Copenhagen, Copenhagen, Denmark</aff>
                <aff id="a3">
                    <label>3</label>Lancaster Environment Centre, Lancaster University, Lancaster, UK</aff>
                <aff id="a4">
                    <label>4</label>The Hydrous, San Francisco, CA, USA</aff>
                <aff id="a5">
                    <label>5</label>Iriomote Station, Tropical Biosphere Research Center, University of the Ryukyus, Taketomi, Okinawa, Japan</aff>
            </contrib-group>
            <author-notes>
                <corresp id="c1">
                    <label>a</label>
                    <email xlink:href="mailto:andrew.baird@jcu.edu.au">andrew.baird@jcu.edu.au</email>
                </corresp>
                <fn fn-type="conflict">
                    <p>
                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
                </fn>
            </author-notes>
            <pub-date pub-type="epub">
                <day>22</day>
                <month>9</month>
                <year>2017</year>
            </pub-date>
            <pub-date pub-type="collection">
                <year>2017</year>
            </pub-date>
            <volume>6</volume>
            <elocation-id>1728</elocation-id>
            <history>
                <date date-type="accepted">
                    <day>19</day>
                    <month>6</month>
                    <year>2026</year>
                </date>
            </history>
            <permissions>
                <copyright-statement>Copyright: &#x00a9; 2017 Baird AH et al.</copyright-statement>
                <copyright-year>2017</copyright-year>
                <license xlink:href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/">
                    <license-p>This is an open access article distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution Licence, which permits unrestricted use, distribution, and reproduction in any medium, provided the original work is properly cited.</license-p>
                </license>
            </permissions>
            <self-uri content-type="pdf" xlink:href="https://f1000research.com/articles/6-1728/pdf"/>
            <abstract>
                <p>Coral bleaching can be induced by many different stressors, however, the most common cause of mass bleaching in the field is high sea temperatures (SST). Here, we describe an unusual bleaching event that followed very calm sea conditions combined with higher than average sea surface temperatures (SST). Patterns of mortality differed from typical thermal bleaching in four ways: 1) mortality was very rapid; 2) the suite of species most affected was different; 3) tissue mortality in 
                    <italic>Acropora</italic> spp. was often restricted to the center of the colony; 4) the event occurred early in the summer. The two weeks prior to the event included 8 days where the average wind speed was less than 3 ms
                    <sup>-1</sup>. In addition, SSTs in the weeks preceding this event were 1.0&#x2013;1.5&#x00b0;C higher than the mean for the last 30 years. We hypothesize that the lack of water movement induced by low wind speeds combined with high SST to cause colonies anoxic stress resulting in this unusual bleaching event.</p>
            </abstract>
            <kwd-group kwd-group-type="author">
                <kwd>climate change</kwd>
                <kwd>coral bleaching</kwd>
                <kwd>coral reefs</kwd>
                <kwd>disturbance</kwd>
            </kwd-group>
            <funding-group>
                <award-group id="fund-1" xlink:href="http://dx.doi.org/10.13039/100008398">
                    <funding-source>Villum Fonden</funding-source>
                    <award-id>10114</award-id>
                </award-group>
                <award-group id="fund-2" xlink:href="http://dx.doi.org/10.13039/501100000923">
                    <funding-source>Australian Research Council</funding-source>
                    <award-id>CE140100020</award-id>
                </award-group>
                <funding-statement>This work was funded by the Australian Research Council Centre of Excellence for Coral Reef Studies (CE140100020) and VILLUM FONDEN (10114). </funding-statement>
                <funding-statement>
                    <italic>The funders had no role in study design, data collection and analysis, decision to publish, or preparation of the manuscript.</italic>
                </funding-statement>
            </funding-group>
        </article-meta>
    </front>
    <body>
        <sec sec-type="intro">
            <title>Introduction</title>
            <p>Coral bleaching is a generalized response that can be induced by many different stressors
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-1">1</xref>&#x2013;
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-3">3</xref>
                </sup>. Whilst the most common cause of large scale bleaching on coral reefs is unusually high sea surface temperatures (SSTs)
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-4">4</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-5">5</xref>
                </sup>, prolonged periods of calm weather, known as the doldrums, have also been associated with mass bleaching events in the Caribbean
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-6">6</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-7">7</xref>
                </sup> and the Indo-Pacific
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-8">8</xref>&#x2013;
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-10">10</xref>
                </sup>. Experimental work has also confirmed that low water flow can exacerbate thermal bleaching
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-11">11</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-12">12</xref>
                </sup>.</p>
            <p>The ecology of thermal coral bleaching is reasonably well documented. For example, colonies affected by high temperatures typically take between two to six weeks to bleach and bleached tissue can take another two to twenty weeks to die
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-13">13</xref>
                </sup>. In addition, species vary in their susceptibility to thermal bleaching
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-14">14</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>
                </sup>, resulting in a predicable hierarchy of response
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-16">16</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-17">17</xref>
                </sup>. Temporal patterns are also apparent with most high temperature induced mass bleaching events generally occurring towards the end of the summer months
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-18">18</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-19">19</xref>
                </sup>. Any change in this predictable bleaching ecology suggests an alternative cause (i.e., not thermal stress) for a given bleaching event.</p>
            <p>Here, we describe an atypical bleaching event that we hypothesize was caused by an interaction of temperature with very calm sea conditions caused by an extended period of low winds. We identify a number of characteristic features of this doldrums bleaching that allow it to be distinguished from thermal bleaching in the field. Establishing the cause of specific bleaching events is vital in order to correctly attribute damage caused by climate change and other potential stressors.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec sec-type="methods">
            <title>Methods</title>
            <p>The study site was on the reef crest (1 m depth) at Nata Reef, Iriomote, Japan (24.4282&#x00b0;N, 123.7955&#x00b0;E). Initial observations at the site were made between 26 and 29 May, 2016 at which point in time no bleached corals were noted Surveys to quantify bleaching and mortality were conducted on 12 June, 2016. Twenty replicate 1m
                <sup>2</sup> quadrats were placed haphazardly on the reef crest, and the condition and species identity of all hard coral colonies with a maximum diameter greater than 5cm were recorded. Species were identified in the field following
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-20">20</xref>
                </sup> and the names updated to the currently accepted names following
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-21">21</xref>
                </sup> Colonies were placed in one of six bleaching categories following
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-21">21</xref>
                </sup>: (1) unbleached, (2) the entire colony pale, (3) 1&#x2013;50% of the colony white, (4) 51&#x2013;99% of the colony white, (5) 100% of colony white or fluorescent, or (6) recently dead. The data from the quadrats was pooled as the data was collected. The bleaching mortality index was calculated following
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-16">16</xref>
                </sup>. Data on environmental conditions leading up to the bleaching episode were obtained from the Japan Meteorological Agency, which allows for these data to be used as long as due credit is given.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec sec-type="results">
            <title>Results</title>
            <p>Bleaching and mortality was rapid. No colonies were bleached at the time of the first surveys (26 May, 2016) yet two weeks later (12 June, 2016), 5% of colonies were dead and a further 31% were bleached (
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T1">Table 1</xref>).</p>
            <table-wrap id="T1" position="anchor">
                <label>Table 1. </label>
                <caption>
                    <title>Bleaching categories of hard corals at Nata Reef on 12 June 2016.</title>
                    <p>BMI = Bleaching Mortality Index.</p>
                </caption>
                <table content-type="article-table" frame="hsides">
                    <thead>
                        <tr>
                            <th align="left" valign="top">taxa</th>
                            <th align="center" valign="top">unbleached</th>
                            <th align="center" valign="top">moderate</th>
                            <th align="center" valign="top">severe</th>
                            <th align="center" valign="top">dead</th>
                            <th align="center" valign="top">BMI</th>
                            <th align="center" valign="top">n</th>
                        </tr>
                    </thead>
                    <tbody>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Acropora aspera</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">100</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">1</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Acropora digitifera</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">81</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">19</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">6</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">32</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Acropora gemmifera</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">100</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">1</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Acropora hyacinthus</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">71</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">29</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">10</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">7</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Acropora nasuta</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">50</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">50</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">17</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">2</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Acropora selago</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">100</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">100</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">1</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Astrea annuligera</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">100</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">1</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Cyphastrea serailia</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">100</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">3</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Dipsastraea rotumana</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">100</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">33</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">1</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Dipsastrea pallida</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">30</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">50</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">20</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">30</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">10</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Favites abdita</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">100</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">3</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Favites halicora</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">86</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">14</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">5</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">7</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Favites magnistellata</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">100</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">2</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Galaxea fascicularis</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">82</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">18</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">6</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">11</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Goniastrea pectinata</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">50</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">50</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">50</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">2</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Goniastrea retiformis</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">86</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">14</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">5</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">14</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Milleporidae</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">17</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">33</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">50</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">44</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">6</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Montipora aequituberculata</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">100</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">100</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">3</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Montipora crassituberculata</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">46</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">32</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">18</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">4</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">26</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">28</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Montipora digitata</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">71</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">29</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">19</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">7</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Montipora efflorescens</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">27</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">27</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">45</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">73</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">11</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Montipora monasteriata</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">100</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">4</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Montipora turgescens</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">100</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">33</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">1</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Pavona decussata</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">100</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">2</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Pavona venosa</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">57</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">43</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">14</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">7</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Platygyra pini</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">75</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">25</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">8</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">4</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Platygyra ryukyuensis</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">25</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">50</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">25</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">33</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">4</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Platygyra verweyi</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">67</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">33</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">33</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">3</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Pocillopora damicornis</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">67</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">22</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">11</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">15</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">9</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Porites annae</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">60</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">40</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">13</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">5</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Porites cylindrica</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">77</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">23</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">8</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">13</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Porites lichen</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">100</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">3</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Porites lutea</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">100</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">1</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Porites rus</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">100</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">6</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">
                                <italic>Psammocora contigua</italic>
                            </td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">100</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">0</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">1</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="right" valign="top">total</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">64</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">23</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">8</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">5</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">216</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">18</td>
                        </tr>
                    </tbody>
                </table>
            </table-wrap>
            <p>Mortality was highest in 
                <italic>Montipora aequituberculata</italic> and 
                <italic>Montipora efflorescens</italic> (
                <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1A</xref>),
                <italic/> and in an additional three species of the family Merulinidae, who were also badly affected (
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T1">Table 1</xref>). Bleaching and tissue mortality were generally restricted to the center of colonies in the locally abundant species 
                <italic>Acropora digitifera</italic> and 
                <italic>Acropora hyacinthus</italic> (
                <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1B, C, D</xref>).</p>
            <fig fig-type="figure" id="f1" position="float">
                <label>Figure 1. </label>
                <caption>
                    <p>(
                        <bold>a</bold>) Dead and dying 
                        <italic>Montipora aequituberculata</italic> colonies (
                        <bold>b</bold>) 
                        <italic>Acropora hyacinthus</italic> colony with bleached and dying tissue in the middle of the colony (
                        <bold>c</bold>) a second 
                        <italic>A. hyacinthus</italic> colony (
                        <bold>d</bold>) close up of the colony in (
                        <bold>c</bold>).</p>
                </caption>
                <graphic xlink:href="https://f1000research-files.f1000.com/manuscripts/13707/7b7e0618-313e-4cc0-905e-c36bcd12c0d7_figure1.gif"/>
            </fig>
            <p>The bleaching event occurred early in June, the first month of the northern summer, following a period of low wind and higher than average sea surface temperature (SST). Eight days in the previous two weeks had average wind speeds of under 3 ms
                <sup>-1</sup> (
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T2">Table 2</xref>). Winds were also mostly from the south, which is offshore at the study site and therefore likely to further reduce wave size and water motion (
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T2">Table 2</xref>). Mean daily SSTs in the month preceding the second survey were 1.0&#x2013;1.5&#x00b0;C higher than the mean for the previous 30 years (
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T3">Table 3</xref>).</p>
            <table-wrap id="T2" position="anchor">
                <label>Table 2. </label>
                <caption>
                    <title>Mean daily wind speeds in the 12 days prior to the first observations of bleaching on 12 June 2016.</title>
                    <p>Data from Japan Meteorological Agency.</p>
                </caption>
                <table content-type="article-table" frame="hsides">
                    <thead>
                        <tr>
                            <th align="left" valign="top">date</th>
                            <th align="center" valign="top">Mean wind
                                <break/>speed (m/s)</th>
                            <th align="center" valign="top">Mean wind
                                <break/>speed (knots)</th>
                            <th align="center" valign="top">wind
                                <break/>direction</th>
                        </tr>
                    </thead>
                    <tbody>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">30/05/2016</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">2.1</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">4.1</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">ENE</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">31/05/2016</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">1.8</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">3.5</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">SE</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">1/06/2016</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">3.4</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">6.6</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">W</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">2/06/2016</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">3</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">5.8</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">NE</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">3/06/2016</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">2.1</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">4.1</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">SW</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">4/06/2016</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">2.1</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">4.1</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">ENE</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">5/06/2016</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">3.2</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">6.2</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">NE</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">6/06/2016</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">2.5</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">4.9</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">NE</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">7/06/2016</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">1.6</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">3.1</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">SE</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">8/06/2016</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">1.9</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">3.7</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">ESE</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">9/06/2016</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">2</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">3.9</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">ENE</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">10/06/2016</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">3</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">5.8</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">SSW</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">11/06/2016</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">6.4</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">12.4</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">SSW</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">12/06/2016</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">8.2</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">15.9</td>
                            <td align="center" valign="top">SSW</td>
                        </tr>
                    </tbody>
                </table>
            </table-wrap>
            <table-wrap id="T3" position="anchor">
                <label>Table 3. </label>
                <caption>
                    <title>Sea surface temperature anomalies in the weeks preceding the bleaching event on Nata Reef.</title>
                    <p>Values are the degrees in centigrade above the 30 year average for this site in each time interval. Data from the Japan Meteorological Agency.</p>
                </caption>
                <table content-type="article-table" frame="hsides">
                    <thead>
                        <tr>
                            <th align="left" valign="top">Week ending</th>
                            <th align="left" valign="top">Sea surface temperature
                                <break/>anomaly (&#x00b0;C)</th>
                        </tr>
                    </thead>
                    <tbody>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">27 April 2016</td>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">+1.5</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">9 May 2016</td>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">+1.5</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">19 May 2016</td>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">+1.0</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">30 May 2016</td>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">+1.5</td>
                        </tr>
                        <tr>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">9 June 2016</td>
                            <td align="left" valign="top">+1.5</td>
                        </tr>
                    </tbody>
                </table>
            </table-wrap>
        </sec>
        <sec sec-type="discussion">
            <title>Discussion</title>
            <p>This bleaching event was different to typical thermal bleaching in a number of important ways. In particular, rapid bleaching and tissue mortality restricted to the center of 
                <italic>Acropora</italic> colonies, an atypical hierarchy of susceptibility, and the occurrence of the event in early summer, all distinguish this event from typical thermal bleaching. We hypothesize that unusually high SST combined with a lack of water flow due to low winds speeds resulted in anoxic stress to these colonies. This hypothesis is supported by doldrums like conditions (
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T2">Table 2</xref>) combined with higher than average mean daily surface ocean temperatures (
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T3">Table 3</xref>) in the weeks prior to the event.</p>
            <p>In contrast to the typical thermal response, bleaching and mortality were very rapid, with a high proportion of colonies bleached and some dying within the two week period between the surveys (
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T1">Table 1</xref>). Bleaching and, in particular, mortality typically take between 4&#x2013;6 weeks to present in corals following thermal stress
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-13">13</xref>
                </sup>. In addition, the hierarchy of susceptibility was very different to that following thermal bleaching. Here, the worst affected species included two 
                <italic>Montipora</italic> spp. and a number of merulinids (
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T1">Table 1</xref>), when typically 
                <italic>Acropora</italic> spp. and 
                <italic>Pocillopora</italic> spp. are the most severely affected following thermal bleaching
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-5">5</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-15">15</xref>,
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-22">22</xref>
                </sup>.</p>
            <p>The pattern of tissue bleaching and mortality was also unusual. In 
                <italic>Acropora</italic> colonies the typical pattern following thermal stress is for the whole colony to bleach
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-13">13</xref>
                </sup>. In contrast, mortality was restricted to the center of most 
                <italic>Acropora</italic> colonies in this event (
                <xref ref-type="fig" rid="f1">Figure 1a, b, c</xref>). Tissue mortality beginning in the center of the colony typically indicates anoxia, which often occurs in aquaria with inadequate flow or oxygenation (pers obs). This pattern of mortality is also superficially similar to feeding scars caused by 
                <italic>Acanthaster planci</italic> or 
                <italic>Drupella</italic> spp.
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-23">23</xref>
                </sup> and a na&#x00ef;ve observer might well have attributed this mortality to either of these corallivores
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-24">24</xref>
                </sup>. A thorough search of the site, including underneath these and adjacent colonies, indicated that neither of these corallivores were present.</p>
            <p>The timing of the bleaching event in early summer is also unusual. Thermal bleaching typically occurs much later in the summer. For example, recurrent seasonal bleaching on Magnetic Island, Australia, occurs in the last month of the austral summer i.e., February
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-18">18</xref>
                </sup>. Similarly, the 1998 mass bleaching event in Japan was first noticed in the latter part of the summer i.e., late July
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-25">25</xref>
                </sup>. In contrast, this doldrums event occurred early in June, the first month of the northern summer.</p>
            <p>Doldrums-like conditions (defined by NOAA as days with average wind speeds of less than 3 ms
                <sup>-1</sup>) have previously been linked to mass bleaching events
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-6">6</xref>&#x2013;
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-9">9</xref>
                </sup>. However, the capacity of the doldrums to cause more localized damage outside of the typical thermal bleaching window in late summer has not previously been recognized. In addition, the potential link to anoxia, while tested in the laboratory
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-26">26</xref>
                </sup>, has not been made in the field. This observation is especially important in the context of the continuing increase in the scale and frequency of mass bleaching events
                <sup>
                    <xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref-27">27</xref>
                </sup> because it would generally be assumed that this small-scale phenomenon might presage a larger mass bleaching event. Determining the cause of specific bleaching events is vital in order to accurately distinguish the effects of climate change versus other causes of degradation on coral reefs.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec>
            <title>Data availability</title>
            <p>The pooled raw bleaching data is provided in 
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T1">Table 1</xref>.</p>
            <p>Source data for 
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T2">Table 2</xref> are available from the Japan Meteorological Agency, at: 
                <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="http://bit.ly/2hck2G6">http://bit.ly/2hck2G6</ext-link>, 
                <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="http://bit.ly/2wAVhcg">http://bit.ly/2wAVhcg</ext-link>.</p>
            <p>Source data to generate the values in 
                <xref ref-type="table" rid="T3">Table 3</xref> are available from the Japan Meteorological Agency, at: 
                <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:href="http://bit.ly/2y8qlBw">http://bit.ly/2y8qlBw</ext-link>.</p>
        </sec>
    </body>
    <back>
        <ack>
            <title>Acknowledgements</title>
            <p>We thank the staff at the Iriomote Tropical Biosphere Research Station, University of the Ryukyus, for their assistance.</p>
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            <p>The manuscript by Baird and colleagues is a useful contribution to the literature. There are however a few minor edits that are necessary to make this short contribution publishable.</p>
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            <p> Firstly, the title is inaccurate, or at least misleading. Doldrums is a maritime term that refers to the low-pressure area affected by the Intertropical Convergence Zone, where the prevailing winds are generally calm. The doldrums are considered to lie between 10
                <sup>o</sup>N and 10
                <sup>o</sup>S. Using the term doldrum-like conditions, instead of calm conditions, for a reef that is located at latitude 24 north confuses the terminology. I understand that NOAA, the US agency, has been using the term to refer to atypically calm periods irrespective of latitude, but again that doesn&#x2019;t make it correct because they are also misusing the term. Change the title to reflect a short, atypically calm period.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> Table 1 should not simply have the corals in alphabetical order, but instead sort the table from most to least impacted.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> Introduction</p>
            <p> Again, revise the use of the term doldrums.</p>
            <p> Methods</p>
            <p> Several periods are missing at the ends of sentences in the Methods section.</p>
            <p> Specify the aspect of the site. Which direction is the site facing?</p>
            <p> Data were pooled and were collected, not data was.</p>
            <p> Results</p>
            <p> Delete the word &#x201c;who&#x201d; in the sentence &#x201c;who were also badly affected (Table 1)&#x201d;</p>
            <p> Discussion</p>
            <p> &#x201c;was different from&#x2026;&#x201d;, not different to</p>
            <p> Revise doldrums-like conditions in several places.</p>
            <p> Again, different from, not different to.</p>
            <p> Periods are missing from the ends of sentences in several places of the Discussion.</p>
            <p> Split infinitive: change to : has not been previously&#x2026;</p>
            <p> Data availability</p>
            <p> Data are provided, not, data is provided</p>
            <p>Is the work clearly and accurately presented and does it cite the current literature?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>If applicable, is the statistical analysis and its interpretation appropriate?</p>
            <p>Not applicable</p>
            <p>Are all the source data underlying the results available to ensure full reproducibility?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Is the study design appropriate and is the work technically sound?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the results?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Are sufficient details of methods and analysis provided to allow replication by others?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>NA</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard.</p>
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                <article-title>Reviewer response for version 1</article-title>
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                        <surname>Matz</surname>
                        <given-names>Mikhail V.</given-names>
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                    <label>1</label>Department of Integrative Biology, University of Texas at Austin, Austin, TX, USA</aff>
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                        <bold>Competing interests: </bold>No competing interests were disclosed.</p>
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                <day>5</day>
                <month>10</month>
                <year>2017</year>
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            <p>This is a compact report of an unusual bleaching episode, presenting an interesting hypothesis that it could have been caused by anoxia during atypical doldrums conditions. Both are valuable for improving our understanding of factors affecting coral survival in times of changing climate.</p>
            <p> While there is no way to rigorously prove that the doldrums hypothesis is true, it certainly seems reasonable (and the wording throughout the paper is appropriate &#x2013; there is never a claim that doldrums actually caused the observed bleaching).</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> That said, the paper would greatly benefit from expanded characterization of the doldrums episode, beyond tables 1 and 2. Is it possible to make wind speed and temperature graphs for broader range of dates (start in April) and compare that to conditions in the same time in previous years? This might show what was actually the most unusual &#x2013; early temperature anomaly, low wind anomaly (by the way absolute values in Table 2 are not very informative without knowing how much below typical they are), or a combination of the two? Come to think of it, wave height could be a better proxy of water movement on the reef than wind speed, if it is possible to get that data (from satellite?).</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> Minor things:</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> &#x201c;Tissue mortality beginning in the center of the colony typically indicates anoxia, which often occurs in aquaria with inade- quate ow or oxygenation (pers obs)&#x201d; &#x2013; I am not quite happy with the word &#x201c;typically&#x201d; used in a statement supported by nothing but personal observation&#x2026; Can you please try once more to look up literature on this? (this is why my answer in "partly" to the literature citing question). This would also strengthen the doldrums case.</p>
            <p> </p>
            <p> &#x201c;The bleaching mortality index was calculated following [16]&#x201d; &#x2013; as far as I can see, this index is not actually used for anything in the paper, so maybe it is not necessary? If keeping it, please expand a little: &#x201c;The bleaching mortality index was calculated by [doing this and that], following [16].&#x201d;</p>
            <p>Is the work clearly and accurately presented and does it cite the current literature?</p>
            <p>Partly</p>
            <p>If applicable, is the statistical analysis and its interpretation appropriate?</p>
            <p>Not applicable</p>
            <p>Are all the source data underlying the results available to ensure full reproducibility?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Is the study design appropriate and is the work technically sound?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Are the conclusions drawn adequately supported by the results?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Are sufficient details of methods and analysis provided to allow replication by others?</p>
            <p>Yes</p>
            <p>Reviewer Expertise:</p>
            <p>NA</p>
            <p>I confirm that I have read this submission and believe that I have an appropriate level of expertise to confirm that it is of an acceptable scientific standard, however I have significant reservations, as outlined above.</p>
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